使用定语从句和同位语提升写作.ppt

1、Improve Writing with Attributive Clause and Appositive 使用定语从句和同位语提升写作 2018.10.14,Recall 用恰当的关系词填空 1 I borrowed the book Sherlock Holmes from the library last week, _ my classmates recommended to me. 2 A company _ profits(利润) from home markets are declining may seek opportunities abroad. 3 Well reach

2、 the sales targets in a month _ we set at the beginning of the year. 4 Among the many dangers _ sailors have to face, probably the greatest of all is fog.,which,whose,(Which/that),(Which/that),Recall 5 Many countries are now setting up national parks _ animals and plants can be protected. 6 We have

3、launched another manmade satellite, _is announced in todays newspaper. 7 Finally he reached a lonely island _ was completely cut off from the outside world. 8 That evening, _ I will tell you more about later, I ended up working very late.,which,Which/that,which,where,Recall 用定语从句合并下列简单句 Mr.Smithisat

4、eacher. Heisverystrict. 2. The girl is called Mary. I saw her yesterday. 3. This is the factory. I visited it last year. 4. The house is Toms. Its door faces south.,Mr.Smith is a teacher who is very strict.,The girl whom I saw yesterday is called Mary.,This is the factory which / that I visited last

5、 year.,The house whose door faces south is Toms,Writing practice 根据提示，完成下面的小作文。 1珍妮(Jenny)，是一个著名的小说家(novelist)，上周出版了一部新的小说。(publish) 2它描绘了一次不同寻常的冒险经历。(extraordinary adventure) 3主人公(hero)骑骆驼来到一个废弃的城堡。(camel，desert) 4在城堡里他遇到了一位美人(beauty)。 5他们相爱了并一起出发去探索神秘的沙漠。(explore),One possible edition: Jenny is a

6、famous novelist，and she published a new novel last week. It describes an extraordinary adventure. The hero rode a camel to a deserted castle，and he met a beauty there. They fell in love with each other and they together set off to explore the mysterious desert.,One advanced edition: Jenny，who is a f

7、amous novelist，published a new novel last week，which describes an extraordinary adventure.The hero rode a camel to a deserted castle，where he met a beauty.They fell in love with each other and they together set off to explore the mysterious desert.,Appositive,同位语,Appositive 同位语表示与前面的名词处于同一关系，在语法上是“名

8、词+名词”结构，在意义上，后一个名词解释前一个名词。例如，在句子“我们的语文老师，陈老师，教书非常出色”中，划线部分就是同位语。英文“Mr. Chen,our teacher of Chinese, teaches us excellently”，划线部分就是同位语。,Appositive 1China,which is a country with a long history of 5000 years, is now developing very fast.（定语从句） 改为：China,a country with a long history of 5000 years, is n

9、ow developing very fast.,Appositive 2Finally, Su Dongpo,who was a great poet, arrived in Huizhou,which was then a city famous for its beautiful lakes. 改为：Finally, Su Dongpo,a great poet,arrived in Huizhou,then a city famous for its beautiful lakes.,Appositive 3Egypt,which is a country with a long hi

10、story of 5000 years, attracts many tourists from all over the world.（定语从句） 改为：Egypt,a country with a long history of 5000 years, attracts many tourists from all over the world.,Practice 1.I am looking to visitingBeijing. It is a citywith many famous places of interest. 2.I am looking forward to visi

11、tingBeijing. It is the capital of china. 3.He paid a visit toMr. Bush. He was president of the United States of America. 4.Mr. Bush sawa pair of little pandasin the zoo. They were a kind of animal only alive in China.,One advanced edition: Jenny，who is a famous novelist，published a new novel last week，which describes an extraord