建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评.doc

最权威的国际教育服务平台 建筑类雅思作文高分范文及点评建筑风格Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree？In recent years， an interesting trend has emerged. Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest， especially in terms of architecture. Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture. While traditional architecture should be protected， however， I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward.One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside， they are often not very user-friendly. Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient. Surely this will make those inside them happier.Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad. Consider Beijing during the Olympics， for example. Many foreigners were surprised to see all of the stunning new building designs. In the long run， this will probably attract more business and tourists to the country.Of course， traditional architecture still has its value. Everyone loves visiting famous historical places and admiring architectural styles from throughout history. We should protect and appreciate such places for future generations， but at the same time， we dont have to live in the past.Ultimately， each city needs to find its own balance between “old” and “new” when it comes to building styles， but modern buildings are for sure a positive thing. After all， if we dont continue to explore new building styles we wont be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.（264 words）Harvey点评：写作线索：首段，现代建筑必要；第二段，因为现代建筑的实用性和舒适性；第三段，代表城市现代化；第四段；让步，传统建筑的价值。末段总结。文中第三段的观点不够有力。其实现代建筑的优点直接分实用性和舒适性两个段落来重点阐述即可。比如实用性，现代化都市人口密度比以前大，摩天大楼skyscraper提高了城市土地的使用效率。本文末句很有趣味，再仔细读读：After all， if we dont continue to explore new building styles we wont be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.（毕竟，如果我们不继续开发新建筑的风格，我们的下一代将不会知道我们这一代的历史是什么样）历史是相对的，对于我们的子孙来说，我们现在的现代化建筑将成为他们眼里的古代建筑。先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用词汇emerge vi.显现出来architecture n.建筑物practical adj.实用的user-friendly adj.用户友好的，方便用户使用的stunning adj.足以使人晕倒的，极好的admire v.赞美，钦佩，羡慕ultimately adv.最后，短语in terms of在。.方面move forward前进in the long run从长远看for sure确实after all 毕竟let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子In recent years， an interesting trend has emerged.One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in.After all， if we dont continue to explore new bui