高考真题全国卷短文改错汇编及答案 （1997-2018年）

1997-2018年高考全国卷短文改错汇编

NMET1997

DearBob,

Hello.IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher,MissFang.I'dliketoyourpenfriend,andgetto

knowmoreaboutyourcountry.First,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.I

liveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.IgoHongqiMiddleSchool.Westudyquiteafewsubject,such

asmaths,Chinese,Englishandphysics.Iusetoplayping-pongalotinmysparetime,butnowIam

interestinginfootball.Doyouplayanyballgames?Whatyourfavoritesport?Ilookforwardtohearfrom

yousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

NMET1998MyFavoriteSport

Myfavoritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourschoolfootballteam.Wepractiseforthreetimes

everyweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVtogether.Playfootballnotonlymakesusgrowtalland

strongbutalsogiveusasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepmindthatweplayfortheteam

insteadourselves.Also,thesportteachesustheimportantofobedience（月艮从）.Eachplayermustobey

captain,whoistheleaderoftheteam.Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthe

game.

NMET1999TheProblemwithTelevision

NowIcan'twatchmuchtelevisionbutafewyearsagoIwasusedtowatchiteverynight.Iwasoftena

littletiredafteraday'sworkandwatchTVdemandsverylittleeffort.Unfortunate,therearetoomany

peopleamongmyfamily.Somewantedtoseetheprogrammewhileotherspreferredanother.Iamhappy

withanyprogrammebuttheothersspentalottimearguingandtherewasnowayofsettlethematterexcept

bysellingtheTVset.Nowsomeoneathomereadsinstead.

2000春季

DearPeter,

ThanksverymuchoninvitingmetoyourbirthdaypartyonSunday.I'dlikeverymuchcomebuthad

anexaminationonMondaymorning.ItisaveryimportantexambutIcan'taffordtofailit.I'llspendallthe

wholeweekendreadingandprepareforit.SoI'mreallysorrythatIwon'tbeabletocomeinthistime.

Hopeyoucanunderstand.I'lltakethischancewishyouwonderfultimeonyourbirthday.Happybirthday,

Peter,andmanyhappyreturnoftheday!

Yours,

LiMing

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NMET2000

Thedaybeforethespeechcontest（比赛）Englishteachertalkedtome.Shesaidthatsheandmy

schoolmateallwishedmesuccess,butitdidn'tmatterthatIwouldwinornot.WhenIwasinthestagethe

nextday,IfeltsonervousasIshooklikealeaf.Thereweresomanypeoplepresent!Suddenly,Icaughta

sightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.Shewassmilingbutnoddingatme.Irememberedherwordsand

calmdown.Ididagoodjobandwonthefirstprize.Nowmypictureandtheprizeishanginginthelibrary.

WheneverIseethemIwilloftenthinkofmyEnglishteacher.

2001年（全国卷n）

Likemostofmyschoolmates,Ihaveeitherbrothersnorsisters,inanyotherwords,Iamanonlychild.

MyparentslovemedearlyofcourseandwilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagoodeducation.Theydid

notwantmetodoanyworkatfamily;theywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudiessothatI'llgetgood

marksinallmysubject.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof,butwedonotseemtogetmuch

timetotalkabouttogether.Itlooksasifmyparentstreatmeasavisitorandaguest.Dotheyreally

understandtheirowndaughter?Whatthingsareinotherhomes,Iwonder.

2002年（全国卷n）

LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daytriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it's

famousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimal.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedat

thefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefed

monkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywasso

beautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthe

mountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemoment

myheadtouchedthepillow.

2003年（全国卷n）

WhenIfirstlearnedwriteinEnglish,Iranintomanydifficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatI

alwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmy

diary.Ifollowedherandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfon

paperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomy

teacher,shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwere

agreatencouragementtome.

2004年（全国卷n）

DearRalph,

Pmanewcomerhereofasmalltown.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.Beforemy

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classmates,itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingswellasthem.I'msuretheywilllaughtomeandsee

measfool.SoIfeelunhappyeveryday.Besides,Ihavefewfriends.Idon'tknowthattheydon'tliketotalk

withme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswebecomestrangeratonce.I

amtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn'tseemtowork.CanyoutellmeaboutwhatIshoulddo?

Yours,

XiaoWei

2005年（全国卷m）

DearMr.Brown,

Iamwritingtothankyouwithyourkindhelp.Beforeyoucametoteachus,Ihadnotinterest

inEnglish.Mypronunciationwasterribly.Icouldonlyspeakafewwords.Butoneandahalfyearlater,I

nowthinkEnglishfuntolearn.Igotalotoffromyourencouragingwords.Iwillalwaysrememberwhat

yousaidJTfyoutryto,youcanbeNo.1!”Ihopeyou'vehadpleasantjourneyhomeandwillcometo

Chinaagainsometimesinthefuture.Iwillwriteagainandsendyouthephotoswetaketogether.

Yourssincerely,

LiMin2006年（全国卷III）

AnAmericanandaFrenchmandecidedtocrosstheseabetweenFranceandEnglandintheballoonin

1784.Highoverthewater,theydiscoveraholeintheballoon.Theholebecamebiggerandbigger.Theair

keepstheballoonupwasescapingquickandtheballoonwascomingup.Thetwomenthrewalltheir

equipmentintothewatertomaketheballoonlight.Itstartedtorisehigheragain.Soitwasstilltoocloseto

thewater.Finally,thementhrewawaymostofhisclothestosavethemselves.Thecrowdwaitingforto

greettheminEnglandwasverysurprisedseethiswhentheballoonlandedinfrontofthem.

2006年（全国卷H）

WehadguestslastnightwhohavenotstayedinaB&Bhotelago.Theydidnotwantbreakfast

becausethattheyweregoingoutearlyinthemorning.Theycamebacklatelyandhadsometea.Icamein

thelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.Hewaslooking

foraglassthecupboard.Hehadnoideasthatthekitchenwasnotforguests.Ijustsmiledtomeandthought,

“WhatcanIdo?Weareguestsafterall."

2007年（全国卷H）

DearGrandpa,Thankyouforyourletter.Myschoolisorganizingabasketballteamandthere'sjusta

chancewhichIcanjoinit.I'mlittleofcourse,butterriblyquickandbravely.Whiletheothersarejumping

aboutintheair,Icanrunundermylegsandgettheball.Itwillbelotsoffunforpracticingoutinthe

playgroundintheafternoonwiththetreearoundusallredandyellowandeverybodylaughingandshout.

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ThesearethehappiergirlsFveeverseenandFmthehappiestinall!Imeanttowritelongletterandtellyou

allthethingsI'mdoingatschool,butthebellwasringing,soIjusthavetostophere.Love,Judy

2008年（全国卷I）

DearAlice,

Ihavejustgotsomegoodmewstotelltoyou.Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek.Myfather

wassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.I'dliketostayingthereforhalfamonth,

visitingplaceofinterestorpracticingmyEnglishaswell.We'vebeenwritingtoeachfornearlyayearnow.

Ihaveoftendreamedoftalkfacetofacewithyou.Iimagineyou911beatvacationyourselfbythattime.

Perhapswecouldgooutdosomesightseeingtogether.Best,Lily

2008年（全国卷n）

IfIhavethehonortobechosetoworkforthe29thOlympicGames,IwillatfirstimprovemyEnglish

sothatIcantalkeasilyaboutforeignvisitors.Second,IwilllearnmoreabouthistoryoftheOlympicsas

goodasthe2008OlympicGames.Third,sinceIwasfamiliarwithBeijing,Icanhelpvisitorsfindtheir

waysinthecity.Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryandcultureorshowthemtheir

greatachievements.Inshort,IwilldomybesttohelpmakingtheGamesasuccess.

2009年（全国卷H）

HiSusan,I'msorrythatIwasn'tabletoreturntoyourbikeontimeyesterday.Imeantogiveitbacktoyou

beforefourintheafternoon,andIwasholduponmywayback.JustbeforeIturnedcornerofParkStreet,I

happenedtoseeanaccident.Thelittlegirlwashurtandhermotherneededhelp.SoIhelpedthemgoingto

thenearesthospital.Istayedhereforoneandahalfhourandmadesurethatthegirlwasallright.WhenI

gotback,itwerealready6pm.Ihopeyouunderstand.Thankyou!LiLing

2010年（全国卷I）

ItwasachanceofalifetimetowinthefirstprizeontheStoryWritingShow.AllIhadtodowasto

writeastoryorpresentit.Myteachershavebeentellingmehowgreatmywritingwas.Soiftheyhadsaid

wastrue,Iwouldhaveachanceofwinningtheprize.Whatwerebetter,Ihadusefulhelp.TherewasUncle

Chen,gentlemanlivingnearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamouswriter.Heagreedtoreadingmystory

andgivemesomeadvicesonhowtowritelikearealwriter.

2010年（全国卷H）Christiewasoneofmybestfriendathighschool.Atthattime,weoftenspendtime

together.Thanktoherhelp,Imadegreatprogressinmystudy.Lastyear,shedecidedtostudytoabroad.In

otherwords,wewouldbeseparatedlongtime.Beforeherleavingoff,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybest

wishestohim.Shesaiditwasthebestgiftshehaseverhad.Fromthenon,we'vekepttouchwitheachother

throughe-mails.Ilookforwardtoseeheragaininthenearfuture.

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2011年（大纲卷）

OneofmyunforgettablememoryofmyschoolinXinjiangisthatofluncheswebroughtfromour

homes.Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingtoschool.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.

Sincethelunchbellfinallyrang,myfriendsandmemetunderatalltreeandhadourlunches.Mybest

friendAiguliewasusedtoshareherNangwithme.NangisaspeciallykindofcakeinXinjiang.Ilike

themverymuch.NowAigulieandIstudyatdifferentcollegesorwecanonlyseeeachotherduringthe

summervacation.IthinkoverheralotandImissthefoodandthegoodtimewehadtogether.

2011年（全国卷）DearGeorge,

It'sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenowbackhome.Thankyouverymuchfor

showingthemaroundyourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.Afterwesaidgoodbyeto

you,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,thatwestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfondofthe

museumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostayinganothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadto

returntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.Itwasreallyaniceexperience.If

you'dliketomaketriptoourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.

2012年（全国卷I）

Everyoneofuscanmakeagreateffortstocutofftheuseofenergyinourcountry.Tobeginwith,allof

uscanstartreducingtotheuseofoilbydrivingonlywhenwehavearealneed.Thatwon'teasy,Iknow，but

wehavetostartanywhere.What'smore,wecangotoworkbybikeonceandtwiceaweek,andwecanalso

buysmallercarsthatbumlessoil.Otherwayistowatchoureverydayuseofwaterandelectricathome.For

example,howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleftthelightsortelevisionwhennooneelse

isthere?

2012年（全国卷n）

DearEditor,I'mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,

cannotlivewithoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycangowithoutit.Yetitseemedwateris

becominglessandless.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon'thaveenoughwater.Todealwitha

problem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoallouttoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,nodrinking

watershouldleftrunning.Third,weshouldfindwaystoreusethewaterusinginwashing,especiallybath

waterforwhichisquitealot,andthatwillsavemuchwater.Sincerely,LiHua

2012年新课标

IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfour

untilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdid

wrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantosee

whichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,"Thatsit.Nomoretoys

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toyou."Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmakemytoys

tolast.Myattitudechangedfromthenon.

2012年（陕西卷）fatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.

Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.

Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speed

Internetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.Ialsosharedformyfriendsmany

photostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.

ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.

2012年（浙江卷）

Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhit

anothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,soIdidnottell

themwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,and

thatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,ItoldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwas

enjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.

2012年辽宁卷

DearDiana,

Thankyouforthelovelydaywehavewithyou.ItwassokindforyoutoletusbringAnne9sfriend,

Gina.Unfortunate,theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome.Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthe

highwayand,foraresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetoa

servicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.InthecarparkhereGinanearlygotknockedover

ascardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindalorry.TheyfinallydroppedGinaoffatherparentsandmade

ourownwaytohome.Muchlove,

Fiona

2013年新课标1

Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwas

onlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfathervery

much.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.He

hadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Ina

fact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,

heisthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.

2013年新课标2

ThebookFmreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly

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18OO's.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserved

until8o'clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionby

theBritishporcelain（瓷器）industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.When

teagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.This

madeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.

2013年全国大纲卷

Inmyfamily,therearethreepeople.Myfatheris

hardworkingbutgoestoworkinthefieldeveryday.76._______

Heisn'tgoodattalkbuthegetsonwellwithother77._______

people.Mymotherisverymuchkindandis78._______

friendlytoeverybody.SowhenIhavetheproblem79._______

Iwillturntoherforhelp.MyfriendssayIamclever.80._______

Whentheteacherasksusverydifficultyquestions,81._______

I'11thinkquicklyandstandtoanswer.Athomemy82._______

fatheroftenthinksI'msilly.HesaidifIdecide83._______

todosomething,ittakeshimmuchtimestostopme.84._______

ThisishowIneedtoimproveinthefuture.

2013年辽宁卷

Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhis

work.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehim

veryill."Hehasruinedhishealthy.Weareworriedabouthim."Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.

Yesterdayafternoon,IpaidvisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.I

hadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthe

picturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim.

2013年陕西卷

MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.

OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.As

soonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwas

beginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,

therewasasuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralso

caughtafish.

Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.

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2013年四川卷

Todaywehadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetestdifficulty,butItriedhardlytodoit.SuddenlyMary,

mybestfriend,askingmetolethertocopymyanswers.Afterthinkforsometime,Ilethercopymy

answers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher'soffice.Theteacherwasangrybecausewe

hadsameanswersinthetests.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents.I

wasveryupset.Ididn'tcheat.Iwasjusthelpingafriend.Whydoesshepunishme?

2013年浙江卷

DearDiary,

HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhy

wemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone."Hisnew

jobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.To

makemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayof

school.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI'11neverfallsleep.

Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.

Yours,

Rosemary

2014年（全国I卷）

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherry

tomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden,sincethen---foralltheseyear---wehadbeenallowingtomatoesto

selfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,but

juicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomato

plantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblem.

Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatoncost!

2014年（全国II卷）

Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.mandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessoninthemorningand

twointheafternoon.Wedidn'tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewith

after-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehour

everyday.

Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundthe

classroom,buildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,satbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachershereare

kindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

2014年陕西卷

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MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,

insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.

Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.My

unclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenly

thearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky一theywerelookedlikerain!Werantoescapebut

fortunatelynoonewasinjured.

ThatdayIdidn'tlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearntaimpressivelessonabout

gravity!

2014年四川卷

Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.If

youhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyour

teacherandclassmate.Don'tpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthe

firefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit'safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwillleadus

backtotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.

2014年浙江卷

IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseand

filledwithpeople.

Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhis

ticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwas

eventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwith

pleasureathissuccess.

Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhad

soquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbea

betterplacetolivein.

（2015全国I卷）

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,

butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthe

developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthat

globalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtierand

dirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodo

so,we'lllivetoregretit.

（2015全国II卷）Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawa

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toyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsome

time,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansaw

himcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater.Tonysawparents.Momsaid,"Hownicetosee

youagain!DadandIwereterriblewomed.^^Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.

2015年陕西卷

Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.

Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherfbrhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasic

stepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.My

onlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.

Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,"I

mighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”

Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!

2015年四川卷

Hi,Janice,

It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeofthe

problemsIhavebeenexperiencing.

AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafter

school.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.IfsbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreally

costsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon'tliketogoanymore,so

I'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?

Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.

2015年浙江卷

Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsit

closetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootball

field.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalso

splendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,

Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalways

interestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.Thepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademe

feltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.

（2016新课标I）

MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantis

popularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowait

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outside.Myunclestellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfresh

vegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichin

theshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.

（2016新课标II