09 开放作文之考前必背-【高分·技能】2024年中考英语写作常考题型全面突破

09开放作文之考前必背必背高分表达必背高分表达写人叙事类首段：(1)朋友：Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Ihaveafriendjustlikethatwhooftenoffersmemuchwarmthinmylife.Letmeintroducehimtoyou.（朋友：患难见真情。我有这样一个朋友，他常常给我温暖。让我把他介绍给你。）(2)父母：Ifyouaskmewhoisthemostimportantonetome,withoutdoubt,theanswerismy....Letmeintroducehimtoyou.（如果你问我谁对我来说最重要，毫无疑问，答案是我的……。让我把他介绍给你。）(3)老师：Inbothmylifeandstudy,my...teacherisspecialtomebecauseheisnotonlymyteacherbutalsomyfriendwhohasmadeagreatdifferencetomycharacter.（在我的生活和学习中，我的……老师对我来说很特别，因为他不仅是我的老师，也是我的朋友，他对我的性格产生了很大的影响。）主体段：1.外貌：...isverybeautifulbutalittlefatwithlonghairandbigeyes.（非常漂亮，但是有点胖，长头发，大眼睛。）2.性格：...isanoutgoingwomanwhoalwaysgetsalongwellwithpeoplearoundher./...isverykindtoothersandeasytogetonwith./issoreadytohelpothersthatweallliketomakefriendswithhim.（是一个外向的女人，总是与周围的人相处融洽。/...对他人非常友善，容易相处。/乐于帮助别人，我们都喜欢做和他做朋友。）3.爱好：Sheisespeciallygoodatcookingandoftencooksdifferentdeliciousfoodsforme.（她特别会做饭，经常给我做各种好吃的。）4.事例：（1）Lindaislikeanangel.WheneverImeettrouble,shewillalwaysbethere.WhenIfailmytest,ShealwaysencouragesmetofacethefactbravelyandthentriestohelpmetocheckthereasonwhyIfail.Atthesametime,sheshareshergoodwaysofstudyingwithme.（琳达就像一个天使。每当我遇到麻烦，她都会一直在。当我考试不及格时，她总是鼓励我勇敢地面对事实，然后帮助我检查失败的原因。同时，她也和我分享了她学习的好方法。）（2）MyChineseteacher,MsLi,notonlyteachesushowtolearn,butalsoteachesushowtobeaperson.IrememberImadeaseriousmistakesinGradeseven,thatwastocopyothers’homework.MsLiknewthat.Insteadofbeingangrywithme,shetoldmetheimportanceofstudyandencouragedmetostudyhardtobecomeatalentedpersoninthefuture.（我的语文老师李老师不仅教我们如何学习，还教我们如何做人。我记得我在七年级时犯了一个严重的错误，那就是抄别人的作业。李女士对此心知肚明。她没有生我的气，而是告诉我学习的重要性，并鼓励我努力学习，将来成为一个有才华的人。）（3）Lastterm,Ifailedmyexam.IwassothatthatIcriedsadlyinmyroom.Whenmymothercamefromworklate,shetalkedwithmepatientlyandcheeredmeup.Thatevening,whenIwokeupatnight,mymotherwasstillworking.Iwasdeeplymoved.ThenImadeupmymindtostudyharderthanbefore.（上学期，我考试不及格，以至于我在我的房间里伤心地哭了。妈妈下班迟到了，她耐心地跟我说话，给我打气。那天晚上，当我半夜醒来时，妈妈还在工作。我深受感动。然后我下定决心比以前更努力地学习。）尾段：Asasunshineteenager,XiaoHuiisagoodexampleforustolearnfrom./Iwilltreasurethefriendshipforever.（作为一个阳光少年，小辉是我们学习的好榜样/我会永远珍惜这份友谊。）NowIunderstandmyfather’slovetome.Iwillneverforgetwhatmyfatherdidformeandtrymybesttomakehimpleased.（现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记父亲为我所做的一切，并尽我所能让他高兴。）HeisanexcellentteacherIwillneverforgetandlovehimforever.（他是一位优秀的老师，我永远不会忘记和永远爱他。）必背满分范文必背满分范文（一）东京奥运会上跳水小将全红婵一战成名，给全世界留下了深刻印象。假设你是Mary，你的笔友John想多了解一些全红婵的相关情况。请你给John写一封信，介绍一下这位奥运小明星并表达你对她的祝愿。要点如下：Age14FromGuangdongTeamChinesedivingteamFamilyParents(farmers);

thesecondchildLooksLovediving

(everyday)Likecomputergames

(freetime)Dreammorechampions(冠军)注意事项：1.信件必须包括以上要点信息，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2.词数60个左右，信件的开头和结尾部分已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数；3.信件必须写在答题卷的指定位置上。DearJohn,IamhappytotellyousomethingaboutQuanHongchan._________________________________________________________________________________ Allthebest,Mary

范文DearJohn,IamhappytotellyousomethingaboutQuanHongchan.She’s14.ShecomesfromGuangdong.She’sinChinesedivingteam.Quan’sparentsarefarmers.She’sthesecondchildinherfamily.She’sshortandthin.Shelookscute.Shelovesdivingandpractisesiteveryday.Inherfreetime,shelikesplayingcomputergames.HerdreamistogetmorechampionsforChina.Ihopeherdreamcomestrue.

Allthebest,Mary（二）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Icanbebetter”【以“我可以更好”为题】提示：校园吉尼斯纪录创造者的经历告诉我们：每个人都能够通过努力改变自己，让自己变得更好。请结合自己的具体经历谈谈你对这一观点的认识。注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不子评分。照抄语篇不得分范文IcanbebetterEveryonecan

changethemselvesandbecomebetterthroughhardwork.AtthebeginningoflearningEnglish,Ifeltitwasverydifficult.Idarednotspeak

Englishbecausemypronunciationwasnotstandard.Ialsothoughtmyclassmates

wouldlaughatme.Itwasn'tuntilIlearnedaboutGuinnessCampus"thatIrealizedI

couldworktochangethat.IbegantogetupearlyeverydaytoreadEnglish.Itried

mybesttoimitatethepronunciationbylisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatching

Englishmovies.Finally,IgotanAinthefinalspeakingtest.IbelievethataslongasIpersist,myspokenEnglishwillbebetterandbetter.

Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit.（三）每个人的成长，都经历过很多次尝试，有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“MyFirstTry”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记录你成长中的第一次尝试。

要求：

语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；

文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

词数80-120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

范文MyFirstTry Whenitcomestothetopicof"MyFirstTry",I’llneverforgetthemeaningfulexperienceIhadinGrade7.

Itwasmyfirsttimetobeavolunteer.AsamemberofAnimalHelpers,Ivolunteeredtoberesponsibleforwashing,feedingandplayingwithhomelessdogs.Atthesametime,Itooksomephotosofthemandmadepostersonlinetocallonmorepeopletogiveahand.Throughmyefforts,overeightdogswereluckytofindtheirnewhomes.WhenIsawthemtakengoodcareofandtheybroughtthepeoplemuchfun,Igotsuchastrongfeelingofpride.

IrealizethateachlifeisimportantandthetinythingsIdocanmakeadifference.（四）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Lifeisfullofbeauty”(

根据中文提示，以“生活中充满了美”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）生活并不是缺少美，而是缺少一双发现美的眼睛。只要我们用心感受生活，就能发现身边的美好，也许它只是一个平凡人，一件平常事，一个普通物品，也会给我们的生活增添光彩。请根据自己的经历或者见闻，和同学们分享你在生活中发现的美及感受。范文LifeisfullofbeautyLifeisfullofbeauty.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhichmakesmefeelmeaningful.MybestfriendLucyandIalwaysridebikestogetherafterschool.Oneday,I

waitedalongtimebutdidn'tseeher.ThenIsearchedforherinthecornerofour

school.Shewascryingatthattime.Shetoldmethatshewasnervousbecauseshe

wouldhaveanEnglishtest.IdecidedtohelpherwithEnglish.Thatevening,Ihelped

herreviewthekeypointsandnotes.Twodayslater,shetoldmethatshepassedit.I

feltsohappy.Helpingothersisthebeautyoflife.（五）EnjoySports,EnjoyLife享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗?你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗?请以“EnjoySports,EnjoyLife”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。

要求：

根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；

语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；

文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。范文EnjoySports,EnjoyLifeAsasayinggoes,knowledgemakesawiserman,andsportsmakeastrongerman.Sportsbenefitusalotinourlife.Firstofall,doingsportscanmakeusfeelrelaxedandenergeticafteratiringday.What'smore,itcanhelpmakeourbodystrongerandstronger.Inaddition,wecanalsolearnhowtocooperatewithothersbydoingsports.Furthermore,doingsportsteachesusthatpatienceandperseveranceareimportantinourlives.

Let'stakepartindoingsports!Onlybydoingsports,canweliveahealthierandhappierlife.（六）水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。

范文Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman,wecan’tlivewithoutwater.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutit.Theywastealotofwaterintheirdailylife.Evenworse,theypourdirtywaterintorivers.Theythrowrubbishintorivers,too.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.

Somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.AndIthinkit’sagreatshametowastewhilemillionsareingreatneedofwater.Ithinkwhatwecandoisthatwehavetosaveeverydropofwateraspossibleaswecan.Forexample,wemustturnoffthetapimmediatelyafterweuseit.Wecanuseabasintowashourhandsandfaces.It’salsoagoodideatoencouragemyfriendsandfamilymemberstojoinme!Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappily.Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeatear-dropofus.

Ibelieveifeveryonemakesalittleeffort,wecanmakeabigdifference.（七）幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是……请以Myhappiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确,字迹工整，80-100词。

范文Happinessisimportantinourlife.Infact,happinessisalwaysaroundyouifyouputyourheartintoit.Iwillneverforgetonething.Once,Ihadabadmarkatamathtest.Iwasshyandafraidtomeetmyparents.ButwhenIgotbackhomelate,myparentsknewwhathappened,theysaidtome:“Itdoesn’tmatter,mychild.Rememberwe’llbealwaysbesideyouwhenyouneedhelp.Webelieveyoucanbebetternexttime.Nevergiveup!”Iwasmovedandmadeupmymindtoworkharderandharder.Ifeelhappy.WheneverIamintrouble,Icanfeelmyparents’love.Iwanttobeagoodchildformyparents.（八）你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“Myspecial_______”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。要求：1.在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象，如teacher或friend等；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.80词左右。范文MyspecialfriendDoyouknowMr.Smith?HeismyEnglishteacher.Heisspecialtomebecausehetreatsmeasagoodfriend.

HealwayswearsasmileandgivesmetheimpressionthathecanhelpmeoutwheneverIamindifficulty.Hehasagoodsenseofhumorandlikesmakingfriends.Hisclassesareveryinteresting.Afterclass,heoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Heneversmokes.Helikesplayingfootball.

HelikesChinasomuchthatheisplanningtoliveinChinainthefuture.Heismyspecialfriendwhollikeverymuch,andIhopeIcankeepintouchwithhim.考前模拟预测考前模拟预测（一）请以“He/SheHasChangedaLot”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。要求：1.至少写出三个变化，可适当发挥；2.80词左右。范文

HeHasChangedaLotMyfriendJimmyhaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Jimmyusedtobefatandeatalotofunhealthyfood.Threeyearsago,hisdoctortoldhimthatheshoulddomoreexerciseandeathealthily.Sohetookdoctor’sadviceanddidmoreexercisetoloseweight.Nowheisthinnerandhealthier.Jimmyusedtohatetheschoollife.Oneyearago,heandhisparentshadalongtalk.That’swhenhedecidedtochange.Nowhestudiesharderthanheusedto.Heknowsthathisparentslovehimandtheyareproudofhim.

Jimmyusedtobeshy.Hisfacewouldturnredwhenhetalkedtopeople.Nowheismoreoutgoingandcangivespeechesinpublic.Thatmakeshimmorepopular.Peoplesurechange!I’mgladtoseemyfriend’sgreatchange.（二）用英语讲好中国故事！提升语言能力，传播中国声音。假设ChinaDaily网站中的Culture版块中有一项“TellaChinesetraditionalstory”征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“MyfavoriteChinesetraditionalstory”为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿。提示：1.描述故事内容。2.故事带给你的影响和启发。要求：1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，字数100词左右。

范文

MyfavoriteChinesetraditionalstoryTherearemanytraditionalstoriesinChina.Amongallofthestories,Ilike

YuGongmovesthemountains

best.Onceuponatime,therewasanoldmancalledYuGong.Thereweretwohighmountainsnearhishome.Theyweresohighthatittookhimalongtimetowalktotheotherside.Sohedecidedtomovethemountains.YuGongandhisfamilybegantomovethemountains.Theykeptmovingthemdayafterday,yearafteryear.Finally,agodwassomovedthathetookthemountainsaway.Thestoryremindsusthatnothingisimpossibleaslongasweworkhard.Weshouldnotgiveup.（三）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom要到中国来，他想了解中国的风俗习惯，请你写一篇短文向他介绍中国的风俗习惯。包括：表达问候，与人就餐，参加聚会等。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

范文DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyou’llcometoChina.YousaidyouwantedtolearnaboutthecustomsinChina.Now,letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.ChinaisacountrywithalonghistoryandtherearemanycustomsinChina.Nowletmeintroducesometoyou.Whenyoumeetfriends,youshouldgreeteachotherandjustsay“hello”,insteadofshakinghandsfrequently.Whenyoueatatafriend’shome,youshoulduseyourrighthandtoholdchopsticks.Itisbestnottomakenoisewheneating.It’spolitetoeatallthefoodinyourbowl.Don’tknockbowlsorplateswithchopsticks.Thisisimpolite.Afterdinner,thehostusuallymakesteafortheguests.Whenyouleave,youshouldsaygoodbyetothehostpolitely.Ifyourfriendsinviteyoutotheparty,you’dbetterarrivealittleearlier,5to10minutesinadvance.Youcanbringasmallgifttoyourfriends.Butyourfriendswon’topenpresentsimmediately.Thisisdifferentfromotherforeigncountries.WheninRome,doastheRomansdo.Ifyouobeythese,Ithinkyou’ll