广东省佛山市顺德区高三下学期第二次质量检测卷读后续写课件

1.读后续写保证平均分的基本操作时间精力分配：30分钟？做题速度？结构：段落/完整程度/尤其最后一行；书写：是否打辅助线/圆润扁平/涂改统一；2.文本分析情节发展2.文本分析情节发展Backgroundinformation:Mydaughtersaid“Hi”toMr.ManwithnegativefeedbackandItriedtofindoutwhy.Risingaction:IknewthereasonthroughmyneighbourandIcameupwithsomeadvice.Climax:WitheverysuggestionImade,mydaughtersimplysaid“No,notthat.”_______________________________________________________Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,“Thankyou,fromMr.Man.”_______________________________________________________________Mydaughter’sresponse/prepareanddeliverthegifttoMr.Manmydaughterandmyownresponse/ourinfluenceonMr.Man/thetheme2.文本分析2.文本分析3.高级句式with+宾语+宾补非谓语独立主格主从+is/was+表从倒装句无灵主语强调句定从虚拟语气同位语从句Thereisnodenyingthat...4.下水作文（段一）我感到自己有点耐心耗尽，就问女儿的看法。她告诉我，给Mr.Man送一幅特别的画可以减轻他的难过和思念。我点点头，同意了她富有创意的想法。我还没来得及提醒她准备绘画文具，她就冲去开始准备了。大约半个小时后，她手里拿着一幅画，里面画着一对夫妇在山巅看旭日东升。画的底下写着，“每天都是新的一天”。我微微一笑，示意她可以送过去给Mr.Man。第二天等我们放学归家后，我们发现门把手上挂着一封金色的信。女儿走过去，拿起信封并打开了它。4.下水作文我感到自己有点耐心耗尽，就问女儿的看法。她告诉我，给Mr.Man送一幅特别的画可以减轻他的难过和思念。Seizedbyarippleofconfusionandimpatience,Iaskedmylittlegirl’sopinion.SheeagerlyrespondedthatsendingMr.Manaspecialdrawingwouldhelprelievehisgriefandmissing.我点点头，同意了她富有创意的想法。Inoddedmyheadandagreedwithhercreativesuggestion.Noddingmyhead,Iagreedwithhercreativesuggestion.4.下水作文我还没来得及提醒她准备绘画文具，她就冲去开始准备了。HardlyhadIremindedhertoprepareutensilswhensherushedtostarthercreation.大约半个小时后，她手里拿着一幅画，里面画着一对夫妇在山巅看旭日东升。画的底下写着，“每天都是新的一天”。Itwasafterhalfanhourthatshecametomewithapaintinginwhichacoupleissharingafullsunriseonasummit,atthebottomofwhichread,“Everydayisanewday”.4.下水作文我微微一笑，示意她可以送过去给Mr.Man。Ismiledandsignaledhertopresent/deliverittoMr.Man.Withasmileonmyface,Isignaledhertopresent/deliverittoMr.Man.第二天等我们放学归家后，我们发现门把手上挂着一封金色的信。女儿走过去拿起信封并打开了它。Thenextdaywhenwereturnedhomeafterschool,wespottedagoldenenvelopquietlyhangingonourdoorhandle.Mydaughterreachedforit,pickeditupandtoreitopen.4.下水作文想方设法试图安慰Mr.Man的女儿一看到这么精美的感谢信就兴奋地跳了起来，脸上绽放着微笑。我的内心也感到一阵满足和温暖。这种温暖源自我外向体贴的女儿，她逐渐懂得了从心理上共情他人。毫无疑问，有了她的支持，Mr.Man逐渐恢复了平日的笑容和积极态度。诚然，要走出失去至亲之痛，绝非易事。但Mr.Man还是竭力感激女儿的善意小举动。我猜，或许女儿的那幅画，真的点燃了他生活的希望之苗呢。4.下水作文4.下水作文（段二）毫无疑问，有了她的支持，Mr.Man逐渐恢复了平日的笑容和积极态度。TherewasnodenyingthatwithhersupportMr.Mangraduallyregainedhisnormalsmileandpositivity.诚然，要走出失去至亲之痛，绝非易事。但Mr.Man还是竭力感激女儿的善意小举动。我猜，或许女儿的那幅画，真的点燃了他生活的希望之苗呢。Bynomeanswasiteasytostepoutofthesadnessoflosinglovedones,yetMr.Manstrovetoappreciatemygirl’slittlekindact.Ibetmydaughter’sdrawingdidsparklearayofhopeinhislife.4.下水作文WitheverysuggestionImade,mydaughtersimplysaid‘No,notthat.’.Seizedbyarippleofconfusionandimpatience,Iaskedmylittlegirl’sopinion.SheeagerlyrespondedthatsendingMr.Manaspecialdrawingwouldhelprelievehisgriefandmissing.Noddingmyhead,Iagreedwithhercreativesuggestion.HardlyhadIremindedhertoprepareutensilswhensherushedtostarthercreation.Itwasafterhalfanhourthatshecametomewithapaintinginwhichacoupleissharingafullsunriseonasummit,atthebottomofwhichread,“Everydayisanewday”.Ismiledandsignaledhertopresent/deliver