读后续写个人成长类老有所依讲义高三英语二轮复习

续写题目原题目呈现：YesterdayIwashonouredtobechosentoprovidesomecaringtoanunusualandbeautifulladyinherlastdayswhowasdyingfromlung(fit)failure.Shehadbeenbroughthomefromhospitalandwassurroundedbyherlovedones.昨天，我很荣幸被选中为一位不同寻常、美丽的女士提供一些护理，她在生命的最后几天死于肺功能衰竭。她从医院被带回家，身边都是她所爱的人。87yearsold,thiswomanhassuchdryskinandrequireshernailstrimmedtoavoidcuttingherskin.Shealsowantedalittlepopofcolourtomakeherfeelgood.这位87岁的女士皮肤非常干燥，需要修剪指甲以避免割伤皮肤。她还想要一点流行的颜色来让自己感觉良好。Afriendofherdaughter'sreachedouttoamunityofbeautytherapists,and

Iwasinvitedtoeanddoagentlemanicure（修剪指甲）.Iwashonouredtodothisanddid

notwantanymoney.Herdaughter,however,refusedthiskindnessandafterhardrefusalwereachedanagreementtopayforthegas!她女儿的一个朋友联系了一个美容治疗师社区，我被邀请来做一个温和的美甲(修剪指甲）.我很荣幸能做到这一点，我不想要任何钱。然而，她的女儿拒绝了这种好意，在极力拒绝后，我们达成了支付汽油费的协议！IwentandboughtanaturalcolourwithlightpinkthatIthoughtshe'dlike.TurnedoutthecolourIgotherwasoneofherfavouritecolours.Iboughthersomeflowersandthelady'sdaughtermentionedhermotherwasapassionategardenerandlovedflowers;shewassohappy.我去买了一个自然的淡粉色，我想她会喜欢的。原来我给她的颜色是她最喜欢的颜色之一。我给她买了一些花，这位女士的女儿提到她母亲是一位热情的园丁，喜欢花；她很高兴。Itookmytimewiththemanicureandwascarefulwithherskin.Istayedfortwohoursjustchattinguntilsherestedanditwasmedicationtime.Shewassohappyinthatmomentandmeetingsomeonenew,whichturnedoutshewasarealsocialiteandshehaddonesomuchforothers!我慢慢修指甲，对她的皮肤很小心。我呆了两个小时，只是聊天，直到她休息，现在是服药时间。在那一刻，她非常高兴，遇到了一个新的人，这证明她是一个真正的社交名媛，她为别人做了很多！Now,theelderlyoftendon'texperiencemuchphysicalcontact.It'sbecausethey'reinthehospitalalone,orothersworrythey'resoweakandavoidtouching.However,physicalcontactasahumanisreallyimportantandcanofferahugeamountoffort.现在，老年人往往没有太多的身体接触。这是因为他们一个人在医院，或者其他人担心他们太虚弱，避免触摸。然而，作为一个人，身体接触真的很重要，可以提供巨大的安慰。Para1:

Thisladywasdeeplylovedbyherdaughterandsoninlaw,butnotallelderlyare.Para2:

ItisthelovebetweenthefamilythatIwanttosharetoofferareminder.文本分析：故事大意我负责给一个87岁的老人修剪指甲，本来我无意要钱，她女儿却坚持给我付油费。给她选了她喜欢的粉红色，并给她带了一束花。在两个小时的交谈中，我们聊天，修剪指甲带来身体的接触，让老人非常愉悦。读后续写情节发展：当我们年轻时，我们与周围的家人朋友建立亲密的联系。可随着年龄的增加，我们社交开始萎缩。养老院有时像一个孤岛，虽然衣食不愁，但内心的满足感无法得到满足。我们不应该忘记和家人分享爱，并且爱家人。关爱家人能让内心的荒漠变绿洲。续写尝试Para1:

Thisladywasdeeplylovedbyherdaughterandsoninlaw,butnotallelderlyare.Whenweexploretheworld,webuildanetworkofconnectionswithpeoplewestudywith,workwith,andlivewith,providinguswithasenseofbelonging.Yetasweage,andfinallybeeaged,ournetworkofrelationswitherandfalllikeleavesonadyingtree.Intoday’sworld,tomany,thehospitalbedorretirementroomhasturnedintoanislandsurroundedbytheseaofloneliness,erodingtheirsensesofself.True,thereisfoodtosustainlifebutit’slovethatmakeslifeworthliving.

Para2:

ItisthelovebetweenthefamilythatIwanttosharetoofferareminder.Sometimeswebeesoabsorbedinthepursuitofsuccessthatweforgettonourishourselveswithlovetoourfriends,families,andevenstrangers.Butit’snevertoolatetolove.Whetherit'sthroughregularvisitswithagingparents,maintainingconnectionswithfriends,orsimplyofferingalisteningeartoalonelyelder,eventhesmallestseedofkindnessholdthepotentialtogrowintoforeststhatcanwithstandthecrashingwavesoflonelinessandturnourheartsintoanoasiscircledbythewarmthoflove.

默写版：Para1:

Thisladywasdeeplylovedbyherdaughterandsoninlaw,butnotallelderlyare.Whenweexploretheworld,webuildanetworkofconnectionswithpeoplewestudywith,workwith,andlivewith,providinguswithasenseofbelonging.____________________________________________________________________然而，随着年龄的增长，我们的关系网就像垂死的树上的叶子一样枯萎和倒下.Intoday’sworld,tomany,____________________________________________________________________________病床或退休室变成了一座被孤独之海包围的岛屿,erodingtheirsensesofself.True,thereisfoodtosustainlifebut____________________________________________是爱让生活有价值.

Para2:

ItisthelovebetweenthefamilythatIwanttosharetoofferareminder.Sometimes_______________________________________________________________________________________我们过于专注于追求成功，以至于忘记了用对朋友、家人甚至陌生人的爱来滋养自己.Butit’snevertoolatetolove.Whetherit'sthroughregularvisitswithagingparents,maintainingconnectionswithfriends,orsimplyofferingalisteningeartoalonelyelder,even________________________________________________________________________________________最微小的善良种子都有可能长成能承受孤独巨浪的森林andturnourheartsintoanoasiscircledbythewarmthoflove.

关爱老人话题语言积累：WhenIwaslonely,youtookmein.WhenIwasbadlyinneedofpany,youaccepted

me.

Inmylastfewyears,mylifehasbeenfilledwithwarmthandhappinessbecauseofyou.

Itwaswhilereadingtheletterthatweknewwhatimportantroleweplayedintheoldman’slife;h