作文范文之雅思55分作文

经典word整理文档，仅参考，双击此处可删除页眉页脚。本资料属于网络整理，如有侵权，请联系删除，谢谢！雅思5.5分作文【篇一：雅思5.5分作文批改范例】一．thetableshowsthetotallengthofhighspeedtraintrackinthreecountriesthetablepresentstheinformationaboutthetotallengthofhighspeedtraintrackinchina,franceandjapanin1990,2010andtheprojectionfor2010.itisclearthatjapanhadthelongesthighspeedtraintrackin1990,with1200kms,whilefrancerankedsecondpositionwith700kmsandchinahadnohightraintrackatthistime.however,thenexttwodecadeexperiencedasharpincreaseinhighspeedtraintracksinchina,reachingupto5800kmsin2010,whilethelengthofhighspeedtraintrackwas2600kmsand2500kmsinfranceandjapanrespectivelyinthesameyear.itispredictedthatchinawillremainontheupwardtrendinthenextdecade.in2020,thelengthofhightraintrackinchinaisexpectedtoreach13400kms,whichisoverthreetimesthelengthoftheothercountries’.thelengthoftotalhightraintrackinfranceisexpectedtoincreasegraduallyto3900,whilethatinjapan,itispredictedtoseearelativelyslowincrease,reachingonly3600kmsin2020.overall,sincechinabegantheprojectofhighspeedtrain,thetotallengthofhighspeedtraintrackhasincreaseddramaticallyinthepastfewyears,whiletheindustryofhighspeedtraininfranceandjapanroserelativelysteadily.bandscore:5.5payattentiontodetail:capitalization,spacing,commas,spellingetcimprovebetterwordchoicefortablesmakesuretocompletethedetailsofthenumericaldatawriteageneralstatementintheintroduction【篇二：雅思55分难吗】智课网ielts备考资料雅思55分难吗摘要：雅思5.5分难吗很多考生担心自己的英语基础不好，担心自己考不到5.5分，今天大家就以英语四级的为标准比较一下雅思5.5的难度，以及雅思自己备考策略!基本上可以这样比较，雅思5.5-6，相当于四级水平或偏上，雅思6-6.5相当于六级水平，但并不是肯定的。因为雅思考是听说读写都要考。尤其是口语，属于我们国家大部分人的弱项，所以需要特别注意。基本上如果考过四六级的，复习2-3个月就能达到雅思同等水平。网友经验：考前三个月制定系统的复习计划剑桥456重点做和理解然后总结出自己的方法阅读和听力应该都可以保证6分作文的话去买本慎小嶷的作文指导书,5.5分以上是很轻松的口语的话短时间提高不是很大但考试时一定要注意礼貌和微笑,这会给考官留下很好的印象,5.5分也就差不多了小马建议：听力方面，这是个最需要平时积累的雅思考试项目，想要在听力上面拿到雅思高分成绩，突击是完全解决不了问题的。从词汇到语音，各种问题都是需要大家在平时的积累过程当中才能得到解决的。大家不妨可以从看美剧开始，当然如果喜欢看英剧就更好了。从需要字幕到不看字幕，如果愿意参加字幕组那么帮助就更大。在临近考试的时候突击一下针对雅思听力考试的方法，还是有事半功倍的效果。雅思的听力在语速和口音上都很适中，如果平时能够用心多听，问题不大。阅读方面，很多考生都觉得雅思阅读是阻碍大家拿到雅思高分成绩的一大障碍。因为雅思阅读文章很不容易做。这里教大家一个最关键的窍门，就是抓定位词，材料就是做剑4到剑7的真题。定位词对很多人来说都是一个新的概念，做阅读题的时候不只是埋头阅读，虽然一开始时间总是个问题，也许根据定位词，题目倒是能大致做对，但总是来不及做完，但熟能生巧后做题速度就提高了许多。写作方面，雅思写作没有什么捷径可走，多写多练可能是惟一的方法。想要在写作上面拿到雅思高分成绩，就必须要贴近英语写作思维，这一点对中国的考生来说是需要一定的时间来练习的，只有经常写，经常观摩一些高分的范文，才能真正找到感觉，写起来也就不费劲了。口语方面，雅思口语是中国考生答得最差的一个考试科目，这和中国的英语教育习惯有很大的关系想要在口语中拿到雅思高分成绩，就必须要做到敢说，并且能说得好，说的有条理。花时间练习口语，特别是针对第二第三部分话题的回答思路和模式，好好练习的话是会很有效果的。面试时一定要避免紧张慌乱的心境，尽量做到有条理有逻辑地答复。以上是雅思5.5分难吗的回答，总体来说雅思5.5分并不是一个很高的分数，只要考生能够坚持长久的复习就能够达到!相关字搜索：雅思5.5分难吗【篇三：a类5.5分雅思剑桥7test1大作文】1..作文题目：discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion2.学生原文：everyonebelievedthattalentsistheessentialrequirementtobesuccessful.however,somefamousandsuccessfulpersonalwaysrecognizethemthattheyarenoanytalentsbutsuccessinthefinal.so,weatherthetalentscandecidethefutureishardtoillustrate.andherearemyownview.ithinkthattalentsisanveryimportantfactortodecidethefutureofaperson,becausetherearelotsofexamplescanalsodemonstrateit.ifsomeonehasuniquetalentsforsomesportsormusic,itmusthelphimprogressmorethanotherswhonothavethistalents.andthereisanotheradvantageoftalentsisthattheywillbesawbymorepeoplebecausegiftalwayscanattractpeople.thisfeaturecausesthetalentstohavemorechancetoperformance.thefamousbasketballplayernamedcurry,whoisthefamoustalents.in2014,curryshowedasharplyincreaseinhisbasketballskills.themostsurprisingthingisthathestarttoplaybasketballwhenwasstudyinuniversity,anditlaterthanthedateofallthenbabasketballplayers.currydemonstratethetruthofgiftsmakeapeoplespendlesstimeandenergytogetsuccess.ontheotherhand,itisalsotruethatsomepeoplewhohavenoanytalentsbuttheystillsuccessrelyontheirteachersandendeavor.ialsotrustthattheendeavorcanreplacethetalents.althoughsomechildrenhavenoinnovationtostudysomekindsofskills,theystillcantrytheirbesttobreakouttheweaknessofwithouttalents.kobeisafamousbasketballplayertoo,butexpertssaidthatthegiftofcurryisbetterthanthetalentsofkobe.however,curryneverbelongthekobeinbasketball.whensomeoneaskedkobewhy,heanswered:haveyouseenthesunon5am.so,heconclusion,thesignificanceofthestriveisthesameimportantasthetalents.ifyouwanttobeasportedormusicals,thetalentsandstrivebothcantakeyoutothepathofsuccess.3.老师批改文中标识：用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加everyonebelievedthattalentsistheessentialrequirementtobesuccessful.(这句话说everyone太绝对了一些，可以改为：itisoftenconsideredthattalentis...)however,somefamousandsuccessfulpersonalwaysrecognizethemthattheyarenoanytalentsbutsuccessinthefinal.(这里只是说了一些名人，听上去有点虚，用词改进：theredoexistexampleswheresuccesscomesoutofthosewithoutoutstandinggifts.)so,weatherthetalentscandecidethefutureishardtoillustrate.andherearemyownview.ithinkthattalentsisan(a)veryimportantfactortodecide(表达在...方面可以用：intermsofdeciding)thefutureofaperson,becausetherearelotsofexamplescanalsodemonstrateit(1.语法上这句话出现了are和candemonstrate两组谓语。2.用词改进：andlotsof句话没有谓语，改为：oneexamplewouldbethefamousbasketballplayercurry.)in2014,curryshowedasharplyincreaseinhisbasketballskills.themostsurprisingthingisthathestart(过去，started)toplaybasketballwhenwasstudy(ing)inuniversity,anditlaterthanthedateofallthenbabasketballplayers.(组句不通，改为：thiswasmuchlaterthanalmostallcurrentnbaplayers.)currydemonstratethetruthofgiftsmakeapeoplespendlesstimeandenergytogetsuccess.ontheotherhand,itisalsotruethatsomepeoplewhohavenoanytalentsbuttheystillsuccess用词和上一句althoughsomebornwithlessgifts),theystillcantrytheirbesttobreakouttheweaknessofwithouttalents.kobeisafamousbasketballplayertoo,butexpertssaidthatthegiftofcurryisbetterthanthetalentsofkobe.however,curryneverbelong(我想你要说的是打败：defeat,或者超越：excel)the(去除)kobeinbasketball.whensomeoneaskedkobewhy,heanswered:haveyouseenthesunon5am.so,he不需要，去除)conclusion,thesignificanceofthestriveisthesameimportant(语法错误，纠正：ofthesameimportance或asimportantas)asthetalents.ifyouwanttobeasportedormusicals,thetalentsandstrivebothcantakeyoutothepathofsuccess.(用词改进：hence,boththenatureandnurtureplaysignificantrolesinone’ssuccess.)4.作文总评批改bywill本次批改严格按照ilets大作文评分标准进行。ilets大作文评分项：tr(论证扣题度),cc连贯性及一致性),gra(语法范围及精准度),lr(词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。总评5.5（tr5.5cc5.5lr5.0gra5.5）1.语法上偶尔出现词性问题以及谓语问题，总体不多。但语法变化较少，从句的使用偏少。2.用词重复有点多了，练习的时候可以查查同义词再写。3.分段正确，连接词使用正确。4.例子和内容相对狭隘了，限制在了同一个体育方面。5.作文范文：itispossiblethatgeneticsasnatureandenvironmentasnurturearenotmutuallyexclusive.thisassumptionmayexplaininpartthedifferentlevelsofpersonalabilityinmusic,art,sportandsoon.inotherwords,goodtrainingisasimportantasnaturaltalents.fromonepointofview,beingbornwithspecialgiftsiscertainlyanadvantage.whattellsadifferenceistheinnatetalentwhichmaybesomethingthatcannotbetaught,andsomethingmoneycannotbuy.thatistosay,withoutsuchborntalent,nomatterhowgoodtheteacherisorhowfrequentlyapersonpractices,thereislittlehopeforhimorhertobecomeanexcellentmusician,artist,orsportsplayer.underlyingthisviewisthefactthatthereismoretoanaturalskillthanalearnedtechnique.indeed,somepeopledohavetalentsthatareprobablyinheritedviatheirgenes,allowingthemtoexcelinspecificfields.incomparison,morehard-workingstudentsarelikelytofinditnexttoimpossibletoreachashighalevelasdesired.nevertheless,fromtheotherpointofview,itseemsthatinrightenvironment,practicewouldmakeperfect.hardworkcouldmakeadifferenceinchildrenwhoaremotivatedtobeaiminghighinwhateverdiscipline,includingmusic,art