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1、1与未来同行！ A walk into the future!2008 年考研英语写作考前预测和串讲（2）资料编辑：王军特别感谢：西安人信培训学校（交大考研）考研英语辅导团队写在前面的话：感谢你们的目光让我有勇气迎接人生一个又一个挑战；感谢你们的笑容让我永远感恩人世间的温暖和宽容；感谢你们的忠诚让我有机会与大家一起分享语言的美 丽。我会永远以感恩的情怀去回报我的每一位学生，无论过去、现在还是未来。我希望我所 做的一切能够给你带去信心、能够让你在成功中感受幸福和满足！让我们感谢考研，是它让我们彼此有了一次愉快的相逢和约定。再次预祝同学们2008年考研成功！第一部分写作要点最后提示A：大原则1）写

2、作在命题形式上相当灵活，目前总体上已放弃了机械命题，避免考生 猜题、押题，每年出题都在求变，考生应该把握解题规律，掌握模式化语言，以 不变应万变。2）写作最重要的是不能跑题，在做题前列出提纲和主干来是很有必要的3）机械背诵范文已经不能应对新的试题设计，因此必须掌握不同文章的架 构设计和精彩语言表达模式，以此构筑起文章得分“亮点”，得到评卷老师的欣 赏。4）应用文部分要掌握模式化语言，其次一定要注重内容表达的全面性和准 确性，确保覆盖所有任务点。5）图表作文的复习不能忽视。懂得如何通过坐标和图表纵横比较、说明事 实，并且从表面看到实质，了解变化反映的深层意义。同时考生还应该掌握图表 术语，比如“

3、增长、降低、突增至,保持稳定”等一批单词和词组的表达。6）图画作文的难点在于对图画的描述，侧重考察考生看图说话的能力，如 果直接表达不清楚，就要考虑用迂回策略达到目的， 但不能偏离主题。其次要点 破图画的寓意，分析背后的原因或影响，这是文章的重头戏，所以要培养对图片 的敏感和逻辑思维能力。B：高分法宝1）语言准确化语言准确化主要表现为两个方面：一是 词汇准确化；二是句子准确化。避免 写病句，避免直译思维。学生按照汉语思维直译，导致表达错误和不地道、不准 确的情况非常严重。22）用词多样化比如说图画作文，我们会用到 show,我们也可以说 reveals, indicates,illustrat

4、es 等等。再比如 认为”我们可以说 thi nk,也可以说 hold, ma in tai n, in sist that。表达 越来越”不要老说 more and more 还可以用 a growing number of , a considerable number of， on the rise等。句子的多样化主要为以下五个方面：1）句子开头多样化2）主语多样化3）定语多样化4）短句变长句。5）强调和倒装。3）结构清晰化结构清晰化就是要求考生把主题句写在段首，自然段中，句子与句子之间要 注意过渡词汇的使用。分析原因或者列举段落我们提倡条理原则”，即要经常说首先，其次，然后，最后。比如

5、，首先：to （begin/start） with/ first and foremost/most important ofall; 其次：then, furthermore, moreover, what s more, in addition, besides;最后：last but n ot least, fin ally。如果是讲两种人或两种情况， 可以 on the one han d, on the otherhand 或 for one thing, for another。4）内容简单化考研作文是为了考察考生的英语语言表达能力，所以切记不用把内容想得过于复杂，复杂内容用英文表

6、达的难度就会大大提高，所以关键我想说的话通过一定的逻辑联系表达清楚即可。C:语言表达技巧1. Challenges, to some extent, are considered to be a test for the young people 简单句中加上插入语）2. To a certain extent, good manners are indispensable to the harmonious relationshipamong us.（简单句前面加上程度状语）3. See ing such a picture, we cannot help say ing（简单句前面加上分词

7、短语 ）34. With con fide nee and courage, we are able to face various challe nges, overcome variousdifficulties, and eve n surpass ourselves.（排比句型增加句子可读性 ）5. A good case in point is those scie ntists who have give n up many thi ngs such as comfortablelife, decent position, even high salary for the succ

8、essful launch of Shen Zhou VI .（举例子方法）6. According to a recent survey made by ., 70% of-the young people across the country aresuffering from the psychological problem.（歹 U 数据方法 ）7. With the rise of thepeoplesliv ing sta ndard in rece nt years, the desires for the material life isbecoming stronger t

9、han before, which makes it possible for the con sumpti on to in crease.（非限制定语从句的方法 ）8. The in dividual growth is usually the first factor to be con sidered, but it is not the most importa ntone. The most importa nt aspect of the phe nomenon has much to do with the future of our n ati on .Itis in thi

10、s aspect that we find quality educati on must be carried out in order to produce the qualifiedpers onn els for the society.经典升华段）9. Basically, what really matters is our courage and con fide nee to face thosedifficulties.（主语从句表达评论或现象）10. There is no denying that automobiles are indications of civili

11、zation, progress and developme nt;n evertheless, automobiles cause the serious problem of air polluti on. （名词性从句引出观点）11. Only in this way can we achieve the balance between human beings and nature. （倒装句表达）12. With proper measures, this problem can be tackled.介词效果）13. It is knowledge and opportunity

12、that change our fates.强调句效果）附：考前必备习惯表达王军老师 2008 考研英语写作核心必、备+必背|得分句（1）大作文必备1.Energy crisis is becoming more serious than ever before, especially in the big4cities.2.Creating a harmonious society is of far-reaching significance to our nation.3.To reverse the current situation, honesty should be advoca

13、ted in the modern society.4.Participating in volunteersactivities will greatly enrich our campus life.5.I like to watch TV very much because it is informative, educational and entertaining.6.We consider it necessary to behave ourselves in the public places.7.As far as college students are concerned,

14、 we should concentrate on study.8.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to rapid development of the modern society9.It is true that the opening policy has resulted in a positive effect on Chinas economicdevelopment there years.10. Only those who are equipped with the basic skills to survive in the

15、 fierce competition will be morelikely to have a promising future.11. The quality of the products has been considerably improved due to the application of scienceand technology, which, to some extent, has increased the competitiveness of the domesticallymade products.12. Such social phenomenon can b

16、e found everywhere, which in the long run has resulted in thegreat economic losses.13. What s importanist to combine what we have learned from books to the social practice.14. The waste problems has arisen along with the improvement of the material life, such as 16. It is an undeniable fact that one

17、sattitude towards life is closely associated with his futuredevelopment.17. We should attach great importance to the environmental protection and the global sustainabledevelopment.18. Understanding oneself correctly plays a vital orle in attaining one s goals.19. As for the young, we should have an

18、optimistic and positive attitude towards future.20. To a certain extent, we should attribute the success to our constant efforts and strongdetermination21. We should be aware of the importance of broadening our view through practice.22. Sometimes, praise and understanding are we are badly in need of

19、, especially when we are introuble.23. We strongly believe that our society will be full of love and harmony as long aswe24. No doubt, the rapid progress in science and technology benefits us a lot in a variety of aspects.25. It is true that on-line education has brought us a lot of benefits and its

20、 advantages are obviousand can be listed as follows To beg in with,besides ,mostimporta ntly,26. However, people hold different opinions about A. Some argue that.while othersmaintain that 27. On the other hand, the social practice offers us a chance to know more about ourselves.15. Obviously, we sho

21、uld arouse peopleof thrift. s awaredneevsesloopfing good living habit528. Compared with tradition teaching, creative teaching has many unique advantages.29. We can come to the conclusion that 30. The extension and application of advanced agricultural technology have greatly contributed tothe develop

22、ment of modern agriculture, which makes it possible for us to improve the life thefarmers.31. The major reasons for such a problem can be briefly listed as follows.32. In order to ., some effectivemeasures must be taken to .33. From the perspective of individual growth, both family and society will

23、have a profound influenceon them.34. The children in the rural areas have been deprived of the rights to receive education due topoverty.35. Courage and good preparation will determine whether we can face the new challenges or not.36. The statistics presented here proved that this is a phenomenon wh

24、ich deserves our attention.37. The outer space exploration will enable us to know more about the universe, which will have apositive effect on the peaceful use of the resources on other planets.38. The frequent communication among us will greatly contribute to our mutual understanding.39. Taking up

25、part-time job will enrich our campus life.40. It is estimated that the time spent on sports amounts to 10 hours a week.41. The gap does exist between city and countryside.42. Now, we are faced with a serious problem related to the survival of our human beings.43. How to handle this problem? Several

26、factors, I think, must be taken into consideration.44. When it comes to 45. With a view to.,we should46. It is hard to imagine what our life would be like without energy.47. The investigation made by WHO revealed that bird flu poses a threat to our survival.48. We should launch a worldwide campaign

27、to bring the spread of bird flu under control.49. It can be predicted that the global temperature will continue to rise due to the green house effect.50. More and more people come to realize that honesty is more important in the market economy.51. Those who give love and care to those disabled shoul

28、d be highly praised.52. It is important to translate the book knowledge into ability.53. The people s opinions about vary from person to person.54. Great changes have taken place in our life.55. The shortage of resources is an in evitable result of overpopulati on.56. According to this table, we can

29、 see that China has experieneed an alarming in crease inpopulatio n in the past few years.57. Recently, this phenomenon has aroused wide concern.58. It is advisable to attach great importance to Ianguage study.58. Read ing is ben eficial to us in many respects.59. The private cars make our life comf

30、ortable and convenient than before.60. Self-c on fide nce is crucial to our success.(2)图表图画必备1. Let take a closer look at the two pictures. The one on the left shows that ,whereas the one on the right illustrates2. It goes without say ing that draw ings aim at reveali ng a com mon problem in the wor

31、ld: how to 63. As is described / portrayed / illustrated / shown in the picture, many people nowadays like to .4.What does the author really want to tell us ? In my opinion, his real implication is that every onehas to meet difficulties in their life experie nces.5.The purpose of the pictures is to

32、warn us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease ofocea n resources.6.The idea conveyed by the cartoon is apparent: the finishing point is just a new starti ng point.7.I cannot help relating these drawings to reality. They clearly show how human in terpers onalrelati on ships have developed

33、.8.The graph shows that the in cide nce of viole nt crime has in fact dropped in most cities over thepast decade.9.As we can see from the chart, the number ofincreaseddramatically but it begunto decli ne in 2005 due to .10. The sales figures for A amount to the combined sales figures for B and C. Th

34、e profits over thepast five years add up to an in credible 1.2 billio n dollars.11 The figures fluctuate between 1000 and 1100 units per year.The sales are expected to go up and dow n over the n ext few mon ths.12. The nu mber of pan das in the reserve sudde nly rose to over 200.13. The birth rate d

35、ecreased steadily after World War 2.The nu mber of users rose smoothly throughout the decade.Profits have decli ned slowly as competitors have take n away market share.14. Computer use is forecast to shoot up in Africa duri ng the coming decade.Hous ing prices soar whe n there is a sudde n in crease

36、 in dema nd.15. There was a slump 减少 in product ion betwee n 1980 and 1985.16. The number of Internet users should climb from 20 million in 2004 to 50 million in 2008.717. The number of road accidents is expected to decreasefrom 50,000 in 2005 to 40,000 in 2007.18. Unless the situation changes,there

37、 will be a decline from 20 in 2006 to 12 in 2010.19. January will witness the launch of two new products, which should increase revenuedramatically.20. The population will remain stable thanks to the one-child policy.21. The percentage of young people attending university reached a peak of 47% in 20

38、03.22. The number of people who could not read hit its lowest point in 2003.23. The number of Internet users is on the rise/increase at the moment.24. Book sales are on the decline nowadays.25. It has bee n dem on strated that：.(一)大作文的架构安排(1)开始段： 引言句+ 扩展句(细节描写)+主旨句(2)中间段： 主题句+过渡词+要点1 +扩展句1 +扩展句2过渡词+

39、 要点2 + 扩展句3 + 扩展句4(3)结尾段：过渡词+ 总结句+ 扩展句1+ 扩展句2 + 收尾句(二) 随机应变，灵活运用 (1) 问题型1开始段：谈论某一问题2中间段：分析原因/产生影响或后果3结束段：提出解决方案或建议(2) 现象型1开始段：谈论某一现象的存在2中间段：分析原因 (社会原因+个人原因)Or:分析影响或后果： (正面影响+负面影响)3结束段：提出解决方案或建议(3) 评述型 开始段：说明某一道理(三)第一段处理要诀(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, a student was surrounded by a large p

40、ile oftextbooks .The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that nowadays the studentsare suffering from great pains caused by the pressure. It is high time that we did something toreverse the situation. Meanwhile, the symbolic meaning subtly conveyed by this picture shouldbe thought-prov

41、oking and worth discussing.(2)As is vividly revealed in the drawing above, a man is. . The phenomenonof its kind has become rampant for the time being. And therefore it is both thought-provokingand worth discussing among the general public.(3)As is vividly revealed in the drawing above, a man in the

42、 picture is sparing no efforts to 中间段正面说明+对比说明 结束段举例证明8. . The draw ing is so humorous and rem inds us of a com monphe nomenon that .is rampa nt in the moder n society.(四)题材预测(1)小作文咨询+申请信 首先说，写信想成为奥运志愿者+但不知具体条件+如。+感谢 我申请的原因：首先，很有意义。 。其次。增进友谊 希望提供机会。 。再次感谢。 。期待回音。 。你的真诚的。 。Dear Sir,I am a student of

43、Beijing University, majoring in English. I am writing to apply for theposition of being a volunteer for 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.I possessunique personal qualifications to meet the requirements of being an Olympicvolunteer. First of all, Whatsmore, .Therefore, I have the experience needed to be av

44、olunteer.If you can grant me such a good chance to be a volunteer for 2008 Olympic Games, I willstrive to be an excellent one with all my enthusiasm. Your consideration of my application wouldbe much appreciated. Thank you in advance.Sincerely yours Li Ming咨询信 考研与选择参考书Dear Sir / Madam,Allow me to in

45、troduce myself. My name is Li Ming. At present I m preparing for a n ati onalEn glish test. Therefore, I badly n eed a good dictio nary能否请您告诉我一些 有关词典的情况。您的书店里现在有些什么词典？哪一本最符合我的需要？Besides, I alsowant to know how I will pay for it.请您告诉我是用现金还是支票支付书款。By the way, if everything goessmoothly, when can I get

46、 the dictionary?您用什么方式把书转给我 呢？Thank you very much for your time. I m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours faithfully, Li Ming DearSir,I am _ . I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me withinformation regarding _First of all, what are _? Secondly, when will _ .Thirdly, is

47、 _?I would also like to inquire _ . Could you be so kind as to sendme some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?Thank you for your kindness and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours faithfully,Li Ming求助信9June 22nd, 2006 Dear Sir,I am a senior student of X

48、University. I am writing to ask you for some good suggestions asto whether I should choose to work in the remote areas after graduation or pursue my career inthe big cites?Now, I am in a dilemma. My parents hope that I can continue to further my study in.while my frie nds try to convince me of the f

49、act that .in the big cities.But in my view, I have a very strong desire to . in the western areas.First of all, I think will offer me a chanee to. .besides,. .in myhometow n. In my eyes, I shoulder the resp on sibility of .Its hard for me to make a decision: to further my study, to hunt for decent j

50、ob or to be avolunteer in the western part of China? Could you be kind enough to give me your advice?Yours sincerely, Li MingLetter giving suggestionsDear Lucy,I am delighted to learn that you will graduate from university next year. You have asked mefor my advice on whether you should further your

51、study or find a decent job after graduation.In my opinion, to be a postgraduate is the best choice for you. On the one hand, you canstudy further and broaden you vision by the further study as a postgraduate. On the other hand,its easier for a postgraduate to find a better job and you may get a high

52、 salary after achieving amastersdegree.As to the tuition, I suggest you apply for a bank loan for many colleges or universitiesprovide the loan for students. If you meet the requirements, you will get the loan. It isunnecessary for you to depend on your parents even if you are in need of money. In a

53、ddition,you can take part-time jobs in holidays. I am sure you can make it. Please inform me when youhave come to a decision. I am looking forward to seeing you again.Sincerely yours, Li MingLetter of ThanksDear Sir,I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _ .If it had not been for your timel

54、y assistance in terms of_ I fearthat I would not have been so successful in _Everyone agrees that it was you who _ at the critical moment.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my heartfelt gratitude.Yours sincerely Li MingDear Sir,I have finally paid off the student loa

55、n and I am writing to extend my profound appreciation foryour timely help.I was thinking of quit when my teacher came to inform me that I could make out a student loanas a financial aid for my study. You cannot imagine how overjoyed I was when I learned that myapplication was approved. With the mone

56、y you lent and the scholarship I won, I was able to getthrough those hard days and graduated with honors. After I found a job, the first thing I did wasto save for the repayment, with the belief that the money should go where most in need.Thank you again for your aid, which made it possible for many

57、 young people like me to have10the advantage of a quality education.Letter of CongratulationsDear Li Ping,I am very happy to hear that you have been elected Chairman of the Student Union.Congratulations on your success! As we know, activities on campus are an essential part ofcollege life. As Chairm

58、an of Student Union, you will have opportunities to develop numerousskills, such as efficiency, cooperation, and organizational skills. These qualities will enable youto start your career with more confidence and courage. In addition, the Student Union is a goodstage to bring your ability into full

59、play.I am confident that a talented person like you will make you a most qualified one for thisposition and I do hope that you will have a rewarding experience.备选：给参加嫦娥一号研制任务的科研人员写一封贺信。Letter of ApologyDear Mr. Zhang,I am awfully sorry to say that I will not be able to hand in my term paper by the d

60、eadlinebecause I participated in a school-organized practice program in Guangzhou during thissummer vacation.As a student, I do hope that you will understand what I did and why I did this. By the way, Iwant to know whether you could allow me to hand in my paper one month later? I willdefinitely/sure