如何提高英语写作技巧.ppt

如何提高英语 写作技巧 沧源民族中学朱雪华,例题：阅读下文，注意划线部分。指出划线部分属于什么成分、起什么用？,Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether middle school students should make friends on line. Different people have different opinions. Some people say yes. They think that the internet helps make more friends. And chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions. Besides， they may even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time. And they should spend time more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.,It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.,本篇文章使用了一些高级词汇(指运用恰当的形容词或副词等)如:recently, heated, even 等；运用了从句、非谓语动词、连词、介词短语等，使文章内容丰富，语言紧凑却很流畅。,1. 我正要出去，天突然下雨了。 普通句：I was about to go out，and it suddenly started to rain. 高级句：I was about to go out when it started to rain.（whenat that time） 区别在于：,那么为何要运用高级词汇、从句、非谓语动、连词、介词短语并且如何恰当运用呢？看下面的句子，区别在哪呢？,高级句中用了一个固定搭配be about to dowhen （正准备这时）,2. 当我走进教室的时候，听见学生朗读英语。 普通句：When I entered the classroom，I heard the students reading English. 高级句：Entering the classroom，I heard the students reading English. 区别在于：,（现在分词短语相当于时间状语从句，用一般式）,3. 从山上看去，这个村庄样子更加漂亮了。 普通句：When we see the village from the hill,the village looks much more beautiful. When it is seen from the hill，the village looks much beautiful. 高级句：Seen from the hill，the village looks much more beautiful. 区别在于：,（过去分词短语相当于时间状语从句）,4. 努力工作，你就会成功。 普通句：If you work hard，you will succeed. 高级句：Working hard，you will succeed. 区别在于：,（现在分词短语作条件状语）,5. 玛丽亚的妈妈直到上周末才从美国纽约来到北京。 普通句：Marias mother didnt arrive in Beijing from New York of America until last weekend. 高级句：Not until last weekend did Marias mother arrive in Beijing from New York of America. 高级句：It was not until last weekend that Marias mother arrived in Beijing from New York of America. 区别在于：,（运用了倒装和强调句 ）,6. 只有改变我们的生活方式，我们才能拯救地球。 普通句：We can save the earth only by changing the way, we live. 高级句: Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth. 高级句：It is only by changing the way we live that we can save the earth. 区别在于：,（运用了倒装和强调句 ）,7. 天色已晚，你最好不要一人回家。 普通句：As it is late，youd better not go home alone. 高级句：It being late, youd better not, go home alone. 区别在于： 区别在于：,（独立主格，相当于原因状语从句）,8. 如果有同学的帮助，他的英语学习将取得更大进步。 普通句：If some students help him，he will make greater progress in his English study. 高级句：Some students helping him，he will make greater progress in his English study. 区别在于： 区别在于：,（独立主格，相当于条件状语从句 ）,9. 生产纸很重要；环境保护也很重要。 普通句：Paper production is important. Environmental protection is also important. 高级句：Not only paper production, but also environmental protection is important. 区别在于： 区别在于：,（并列连词，连接两个并列主语）,10. 正如大家所知，海滩被污染了，生态环境破坏了，游客减少了。 普通句：As we all know, the seaside has been polluted and The ecological environment has been destroyed. The number of visitors has dropped. 高级句：As we all know, that the seaside has been polluted makes the ecological environment destroyed. As a result，the number of visitors has dropped. 区别在于：,（因果）（主语从句）,11. 没人喜欢当众乞讨。他们除了乞讨别无他法。 普通句：No one likes to beg in public. They have no other means to support themselves other than begging. 高级句：No one likes to beg in public. That is to say，they have no other to support themselves other than begging. 区别在于：,（变换说法 That is to say “也就是说” 之意）,除此之外，还要学会运用一些其它高级词汇词如：On the whole总的来说， In general一般来说， In short总之， fortunately幸运的是, however, whats more, besides等.,由于英语句子结构和汉语不一样，并且英语句子里可以用很多的被动语态，所以我们在写英语句子时，应该先把你要写的内容，即把你的汉语句子按照英语句子的结构重新排列。例如：,1.不再允许建造那些严重污染环境的工厂。根据被动语态的用法，此处“建造”的执行者没必要说出来，此句可改为：那些工厂，那些严重污染环境的，不应该被允许建造。 2.我们应该有强烈的环境保护意识。根据英语句子顺序，要先说主语（我们），再说主语的动作（应该有），然后是宾语（强烈的意识），最后才是意识的定语（环境保护的）。,目标检测：请同学们试着用刚才的所学翻译下列句子(配餐作业A中可能用得到的句子) 1.最近我们班举行了一次班会去讨论全球环境污染问题。 2.正如大家所知，环境遭到污染，我们的空气、水、和土壤已经有毒了，天气也很不正常。 3.没有人喜欢住在被污染的环境里，也就是说，是我们该采取行动的时候了。 4.为了处理这种情形，政府已经采取了一些措施。,5.不再允许建造那些严重污染环境的工厂。 6.只有每个人都行动起来来，情况才会变得越来越好。 7.然而 ，要阻止污染还需要花很长时间。 8.从现在起，我们应该有强烈的环境保护意识。 9.我们的环境在当地环保部门的紧密关注下。,参考答案：,1.Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of the global pollution. 2.As we all know, our surroundings have been badly polluted. Our air, water, and soil have become poisonous. Besides ,the weather is not quite normal.,3.No one likes to live in a polluted place. That is to say, it is our time to take measures. 4.To deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures. 5.Factories that badly polluted the environments are not allowed to be built. （此处运用被动语态，更接近英语表达习惯）,6.Only everybody helps can things get better and better. 7. However, it will still take a long time to stop the pollution. 8.We should have a strong sense of environmental protection right now. 9.Our environments are under close attention by the local departments.,配餐作业A组题：书面表达 假如你们班在“爱护环境，拯救地球”的教育活动中，召开了一次主题班会。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 目前的环境状况：气候异常；空气、水、土壤等污染严重; 2. 政府采取的措施：限制高污染企业投产；对环境时时检测; 3. 你认为还有哪些有更有效的措施? 注意使用first ,second , besides ,however等连接词,One possible version（参考范文）: Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of the global pollution. As we can see, our surroundings have been badly polluted. Our air, water, and soil have become poisonous. And the weather is not quite normal. It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures. First, those factories that badly pollut