《日记作文专练》PPT课件.ppt

日 记 日记是用来叙述一天生活中发生的有意义事件的文 体，特别是那些具有教育意义或值得今后回忆、查 阅或参考的事情。 日记的素材应是最有趣或最有感受的一些事情。通 常用记叙 文或简单的议论文体裁。字数不宜过多。 格式：一般是在左上角记上当天的日期(年、月、 日)，星期； 右上角写上当天的天气情况。下面一行可以写上日 记小标题，也可以不写标题。,时态：日记记叙的时间，通常是在当天的 下午或是晚上，特殊情况下也可以第二天 补记。因此，所用的时态多为过去时态。 但应灵活掌握；如记叙天气、描写景色， 或为了描写生动，议论某事、对话引语等， 也可使用现在时。,类型：日记可分记事、议论、描写及抒情等。 记事型是用英语记述当天自己生活、学习中 发生的事情。议论型是对生活中的某一事情 或情况、现象谈自己的看法，发表议论。 描写型、抒情型，则是对某人物、事物的 特征做细致的描述，或针对某事物抒发自 己的感情。 日记一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述，所 以有时需要借助一些表示先后顺序的词语。 如：at first, then, later on , afterwards, soon, finally, at last 等。,叙事要清楚、完整，文章结构要体现“五何”原则 叙述一件事情，就要在文中交代清楚五方面的内容即何时、何地、何人、何事以及发展如何，也就是英语中的when, where, who, what 以及how，使叙述做到有因有果，有起有落，给人以完整的印象。 交代五大要素时，要力求灵活多样，切忌呆板。例如交代时间时，可用时间状语(When we arrived there.) 也可用介词短语(on arriving there)或用一些时间 (then)副词等，只有灵活 地交代要素，文章才能生动。,另外，在应试作文中还要注意以下几点： 1、写好开头。如果第一句话就有问题，必须会 影响评卷人的印象分。 2、初学者少用复杂句，以免使句子混乱。 3、选词要准确，词语搭配要得当。 4、内容要完整，应就事论事，不要画蛇添足， 节外生枝。,根据下列提示用英语写一则日记 十一月二十九日那天早晨，你骑车去上学。 天下雪，路滑，道路拥挤。 你摔了跤，把腿摔坏了。 一位年轻人用自行车送你去医院。 他带你去看医生，拿药，并送你回家。 他未留下姓名。 你永远忘不了这一天。 注意： 日记必须包括全部要点，可以适当增减细节， 使其连贯、完整。 叙述必须用第一人称。,Monday，November 29 Snowy It was snowing this morning. I went to school by bike. The road was slippery and crowded as well. All at once I fell off the bike and broke my right leg. Just then a young man came to help me. He took me to the doctor on his bike and got some medicine for me. Finally he sent me home. My mother was going to thank him when he left us without leaving his name. I was deeply moved by his spirit of helping others. I will never forget the day.,下午数学考试，你成绩不好，心情郁闷。晚上几 个好朋友邀你去歌厅（KTV）唱歌，你们一晚上 唱得很尽兴。你用日记的形式记录下你今天的活动 及感受。日记需包括以下几个要点： 1下午的数学考试你的成绩不佳， 心情一直不好。 2晚上同学邀请你去KTV唱歌，这是你第一次去 KTV。 3大家唱得很高兴，而你一直当听众，你觉得你 的歌唱的不好，不敢唱。 4在大家的鼓励下，你终于拿起麦克风（micro phone），唱了一首英文歌曲“I believe I can fly”。 5现在你的心情舒畅了；更重要的是：你找回了 自信（self-confidence）。 6你在日记中对自己说了这样一句话：“”。,Friday Nov. 12, 2004 Sunny This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends.This was the first time that I had been to a KTV and at first I didnt want to go. I was (had been) in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didnt do well in the math exam. At the KTV, everybody sang his favorite songs very happily except me I was only one of the audience. I dare not have a try because I was afraid that I couldnt sing well.,Encouraged by my classmates, I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled “I believe I can fly”. I have become cheerful now and above all Ive regained self-confidence. I believe that the worst enemy in ones life is oneself. I shouldnt lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try.,昨天下午你到越秀公园游玩，刚好看到个救 人的过程。请根据下面所拍下的几幅照片，用 英语写篇报导，寄给“英文早报”。,最后一幅照片因底片曝光，请自行补充合理的情 节，使报导完整。 Yesterday afternoon I went to Yuexiu Park. It happened that I saw a touching event. At that time, some people were boating on the lake. Among them was perhaps a happy family. They were taking photos when suddenly the girl fell off the boat into the water. She was struggling and her parents cried out, “Help! Help!“ It was obvious that they could not swim,at all. From nearby a young man immediately rushed to the lake. Without taking off his clothes, he jumped into the water and quickly swam towards the girl, who was already tired out. At last he carried her to the lake side. She was saved! How happy the parents were! Before they thought of thanking the young man, he had disappeared!,下面六幅画讲述的是出租车司机小张在一次出车送一对美国夫妇去宾馆的过程中所遇到的一件事。请按图示写100词左右的短文。（一对夫妇：a couple, 接待员：receptionist, 护照：passport）,One day, Xiao Zhang, a taxi driver sent an American couple to a hotel. When they got there, the couple got out of the taxi ，paid the driver and waved goodbye. Later, on the road, Xiao Zhang found a handbag on the back seat of the taxi. He opened the bag, finding some US dollars and a passport in it. He thought,it must be the couple who had left it there. So he