中考英语作文课件(19张PPT).pptx

中 考 专 题 复 习 课,Writing,书面表达: 是中考英语中的必考题，占卷面总分的12.5%，分值为15 分 。,文章的形成过程：,单词 短语，结构 +符号 句子 段落 文章,如何把这些组织一篇文章？,分析文章的形成过程,首先，我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mind map. 在map的帮助下，我们就能有效的到达我们的 目的地。,分析结构,Mike is crazy about football! He loves watching football matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies. He wishes his parents could give him their support for his hobbies .,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,Discussion,How to Write English Compositions,集句成段,组段成篇,审清题意,连词成句,抓住要点,抄写规范,Writing skillssix steps,自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括： 注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups social activities, do sports, net bar,Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our SpareTime”._,第一步:审清题意,认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息,具体做法：用笔勾画,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：,注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数,主题,体裁,人称,结构,时态,字数,已知信息,未知信息,以一般现在时为主,第二步： 列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法： 根据段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,Introduction Main body Conclusion,problems,opinions,suggestions,Write an outline,花太多时间在兴趣爱好上 迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏 -,-,合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组 -,List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _ _ 2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _,第三步：抓住要点，列关键词,1.List some keywords about problems.,spend too much time on their hobbies be crazy about play computer games watch too much TV refuse to do homework,2. List some keywords about opinions.,not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to,1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上 2. 迷恋网吧，上网打游戏 ,3. List some keywords about suggestions.,plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after- school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework,合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组,spend too much time on their hobbies refuse to do homework watch too much TV be crazy about play computer games,Whats worse,1.Make sentences with the keywords about problems.,so,that,Many students spend much time on their hobbies,they cant finish their homework on time.,some of them watch too much TV,others students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games.,Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly.,We dont think its good for their study and health.,2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions.,第四步：连词成句,第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, and take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.,However, how can we make better use of our spare time?,For example,Besides these,And also,we,We,注意添加主题句，连接词！,plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after- school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework,3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions.,There are many things we can do.,How to give this writing an end?,Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!,Why not put our free time to better use ? It is a good way to have a more colorful future.,范文展示,Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We dont think its good for their study and health. However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!,how to write a good composition,开头:开门见山 中间 结尾:,书面表达六步法,（审-抓-连-集-组-抄）,抓要点,列短语 短语扩句 找连接词 连句成段,与主题相呼应， 紧扣主题,1. 压线 2. 斜度一致3. 扁 4. 饱满 5. 间隔,常见错误,时态是否正确 主谓是否一致 要点是否全面 人称是否正确 语序是否有问题 语言是否符合习惯 固定短语是否恰当,如今，中国掀起了广场舞(public square dancing)热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。,要求：1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；尽量运用本讲的重点句子。 2词数：80100词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：遭受suffer from；音量volume,Nowadays，public square dancing is becoming more and more popular. Most of the public squares are crowded with dancers，especially in the morning and evening. We all agree that public square dancing is a good way to keep healthy，especially for the old. Besides，it is money saving. But it also causes noise pollution. Many people suffer from the noise caused by the loud music. They cant work，study or sleep well. They feel very angry and some even argue with the dancers. In my opinion，the dancers should turn down the volume while dancing. In addition，our government should build more public places for them，such as squares and parks. We hope that people can have fun dancing without disturbing other people.,范文展示,Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We dont think its good for their study and health.,However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!,The structure of the article Introduction Main body Conclusion,Summary,写作： 第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息 第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成句、集句成段、组段成篇）,写作前：,确定人称、时态,写作后：,查错改错,中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。,写作实践,变换句式,并列句,复合句 结果状语从句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on time,Some students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time,思路构建,自我展示,Hello everyone, Im Li Hua. Id like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.,Im not tall and Im not goodlooking. But I dont care about these. I always believe in myself. My parents sometimes cant understand what I do and say. I have few friends at school. So I often communicate with them and Im always friendly to my classmates at school. I have too much pressure in study too and often have few afterschool activities. So I often relax myself. When I have free time, I often do sports or listen to music. Sometimes I go shopping with my,_ _ Thats all. Thank you!,parents or friends. In this way, we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.,高分点评：,本文采用“总分总”的写作结构。首先提出了分享问题与解决方法的意愿，然后谈论每个问题及解决的方法，最后用礼貌性的语言作出总结。本文作者能够较好地处理表格中所提供的写作信息，并能发挥自主性，提出自己的合理建议。,短语：care about, believe in, communicate with, be friendly to; relax oneself; go shopping 句型：When I have free time, I often do sports or listen to music.时间状语从句的运用，使文章中的句子显得不那么单调。In this way, we can get better gra