英语作文之数据描写.ppt

,如何进行图表式作文写作,图表式作文的几种形式: 一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。 表格:table,二是以图形形式 A 表示数据变化的曲线图; B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的柱状图; C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。 图表: chart,Graph,表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图,Pie Chart,饼状图,Bar Chart / Graph,柱状图,Table,矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格,图表式作文写作分三步: 表格:table图表: chart 第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题,第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。,第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势， 描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。 陈述 facts 分析 reasons,第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题 常用: recently最近 interview采访 survey调查 questionaire问卷 Recently , XX have made a survey among about 最近，XX在当中做了一份关于的调查问卷,第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势， 描写数据间变化及总趋势特征。 陈述 facts 分析 reasons 常用句型： 1. From the chart, it can be seen that. 从图表我们可以看到. 2. From the chart, we can see that 从图表我们可以看到. 3. As is shown in the chart/ table/ data / survey, .在图表当中显示，. 4.According to the chart/ table/ data / survey根据图表/表格/数据/调查，.,上升(动词)：increase, rise , go up 下降(动词) : decrease, fall, drop ,reduce 占(动词) :occupy ,take up 最高点(名词) :the highest, the top ,the peak ,the most 最低点(名词) :the lowest, the bottom, the least 平均(名词，形容词) :average,赞成 不赞成 6 agree with disagree with 7 approve of disapprove of 8 be in favor of be opposed to 9 be for be against,而: while ,however ,whereas , on the other hand , 相比:by contract , on the contrary,反对该观点的人超过5千。 The number of people who are opposed to this idea is over 5,000. There are more than 5000 people who are opposed to this idea.,“的人数是多少/占多少比例”的时候，怎么说？ the number of people who is/reach(数字)的人数是(数字) the number of people who takes up X% 的人占(百分比),1在地震中死亡的人数超过了2000。 The number of people who died in the earthquake was over 2,000 2如图2所示，体育活动只占了10%的时间 From Chart 2, sports activities occupy/occupied/ take/took up 10% of time. 3在我们班里，有三十多个同学反对这个提议。 In our class, there are more than 30 students who are opposed to the advice.,4 55% 的同学认为他们应该每天都要进行各种各样的锻炼。 55% of students think that they should do a variety of exercises every day.,常用句型： Facts: 1.There was a great /slight increase /drop in 在方面有了明显/轻微的增长/减少。 2.A is 20% lower/higher thanB A比B高了/低了20个百分比 3.The number of A is times as much as that ofB.A的数量是.B的几倍。 4.It increases/decreases by% . 增长/减少了% .,第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。 常用词汇： 1.in a word 总而言之/简短来说/一般说来 2.Its clear from the chart that 从图表中我们清楚知道 3.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that 从以上我们讨论的内容看，我们得出以下结论,某学校对学生课外活动进行了调查，结果如下： 请根据图表反映的数据，描述学生每天的课外活动， 以及针对该现象发表一下你的看法。,1吸烟人数：约3.5亿 2分布：男性75%女性25 % 3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿 4因二手烟死亡人数超过10万1年,the number of people who is(数字) 的人数是(数字) the number of people who takes up X% 的人占(百分比),1吸烟人数：约3.5亿 The number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000. 2分布：男性75%女性25 % The number of men who smoke takes up 75 %. The number of women who smoke takes up 25 %. 3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿 The number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke is about 540,000,000. 4因二手烟死亡人数超过10万1年 The number of people who died from second-hand smoke is over 100,000 every year.,1吸烟人数：约3.5亿，其中男性75%女性25 %， The number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000， and 75% are male while 25% are female. 3受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿，而因此死亡人数超过10万1年 The number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke is about 540,000,000. What is the worst, the number of people who died from it is over 100,000 every year.,Smoking in public will be banned throughout the whole nation from January 1st,2011. To realize the aim that there is no smoking in all indoor places in public, we should put up some signs of smoking ban. As the related data shows, the number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000, 75% of whom are male while 25% are female. The number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke reaches 540,000,000.What is worse, the number of people who died from it is more than 100000 every year. (every year more than 100000 deaths are caused by the second-hand smoke!),Smoking ban in public will be carried out throughout China from January 1st, 2011, which aims that there will be no smoking in all the public places inside office across the whole country. To realize this goal effectively, we should take some measures , such as putting up signs of smoking ban where there are people who are smoking. There are approximately 350 million smokers all over the country, and among them the number of male smokers takes up 75%,female smokers occupies about 25% and what is worse, the number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke is unbelievable, reaching about 540 million. Some 100