九年级英语书面表达指导与训练-样稿戴海燕.doc

14DHY英语工作室 /englishtopic初中英语单元同步书面表达指导与训练（新目标英语九年级全册） 评 分 表Unit 1Unit 2Unit 3Unit 4Unit 5Unit 6Unit 71211211112Unit 8Unit 9Unit 10Unit 11Unit 12Unit 13Unit 14Unit 1511111111事后一百分Unit 1Unit 2Unit 3Unit 4Unit 5Unit 6Unit 71211211112Unit 8Unit 9Unit 10Unit 11Unit 12Unit 13Unit 14Unit 1511111111班级_姓名_DHY英语工作室/englishtopic使用说明一、2013年中考对写的能力的要求：1、能正确使用大小写字母和标点符号； 2、能简单描述人物或事件； 3、知道使用常见的连词表示顺序和逻辑关系； 4、能根据图片或表格写出简单的段落，并能表达自己的观点； 5、能根据要求写简单的短文、书信、日记。二、书面表达批阅符号及评分表的使用说明 1、单词或句子下划“ ”线，表示该单词或句子存在词法、句法错误；单词或句子下划“ ”线，表示该单词或句子存在词法、句法严重错误；给单词画“”，表示该单词拼写错误。 2、单词间穿插符号“”，表示该处缺少单词。 3、单词被符号“”划掉，表示要去掉该单词。4、在单词、词组或句子下划“ ”，表示好词好句。5、在所有需要订正的地方，老师都会标上“”符号。6、评分表的使用：教师的批阅分数打在封面上的评分表中。事后一百分是对学生订正情况的打分。建议用“”表示他们已经准确订正。这种一目了然的评价表，可督促学生做得更好。建议教师制定激励性评价制度，对态度好的学生进行奖励！三、书面表达订正要求 在订正处按老师标上的序号逐一认真订正，并写出理由。订正理由参考如下：1. 主语错误；2. 名词的单复数错误；3. 动词错误：主谓不一致或时态错误；4. 介词遗忘；5. 冠词错误；6. 否定句中的助动词错误；7. 人称代词主格与宾格混淆；8. 从句的时态和语序问题等。(老师不会直接帮你订正。如果老师直接将答案给你，那是一种犯罪，因为他或她剥夺了你思考的机会！）四、2013年中考评分标准：满分档（20分）：字数100-120之间，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚， 逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有语法错误。第五档（16-19分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚， 逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富，有少量语法错误。第四档（12-15分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，行文基本连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。第三档（8-11分）：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整，行文不连贯，词汇不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。第二档（4-7分）：能有句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。第一档（0-3/0-2分）：有一些英语单词；白卷0分。五、常用的英语谚语A bad beginning makes a bad ending.不善始者不善终。 Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。 A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。 A good beginning makes a good ending.善始者善终。A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。 A good medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。 All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。 A mothers love never changes.母爱永恒。An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果，不用请医生。 Do it now.机不可失，时不再来。 Doing is better than saying.说得好，不如做得好。Dont trouble trouble until trouble troubles you.不要自找麻烦。 East or west, home is best. 金窝、银窝，不如自己的草窝。Every day is not Sunday.好景不常在。 Every dog has his day.谁都有得意的时候。 Every minute counts.分秒必争。 It is better to give than to take.施比受有福。It is hard to please all.众口难调。 It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。No news is good news. 没有消息就是好消息。 No one can call back yesterday. 昨日不会重现。 No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获。No sweet without sweat. 先苦后甜。Where theres life theres hope. 留得青山在，不怕没柴烧Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。Will is power. 意志就是力量。六、语言点提示：（一）八年级上1. It is + 形容词 for sb. to do sth. 例子：It is important for us to learn English well. 对我们来说学好英语很重要2. It takes sb some time to do sth.例子：It takes me an hour to do homework. 做作业花了我一个小时。It takes him 10 minutes to get to school. 上学花了他10分钟。3. tooto 太以至于不能例子：The coat is too small for me to wear. 这上衣对我来说太小以至于不能穿4. enough to足够以至于能例子：I am old enough to look after myself. 我已经足够大了能照顾自己了。5. sothat: 如此以至于 例子：I am so old that I can go to school.6. so that: 以便例子：I get up early so that I cant be late.7. 形容词后置: something/somewhere good/new/different8. be good for对有好处 Doing sports is good for our health.be good with sb.与某人相处得好 My English teacher is good with us. be good at 擅长于 We are good at playing ping-pong.9. want sb (not) to do sth. 想要某人（不）做某事 ask/tell/invite/would like/sb to do sth. 10. make sb do sth. 使某人做某事 let sb do sth. 让某人做某事 See/hear/find/watch/ sb doing sth./do sth. （感官动词的用法）help sb (to) do sth. 帮助某人做某事 help mom with the cooking.11. try (not) to do 试图（不)做某事 want (not) to do 想要（不）做某事 plan (not) to do计划（不)做某事would like (not) to do想要（不）做某事 decide to do 决定做某事12. practice doing, 练习做某事be busy doing, 忙于做某事finish doing完成做某事enjoy doing 喜欢做某事mind doing 介意做某事 thanks for doing 为做某事而感谢13. sb. spend time on sth./in doing sth. 某人做某事花多少时间例子：Tom often spends an hour doing his homework everyday.14. start to do/doing开始做某事 stop to do停下来去做某事 stop doing停止做某事forget to do忘记还没做的事 forget doing忘记已经做过的事remember to do记住还没做的事 remember doing记住已经做过的事borrowfrom从借（借入） lendto把借给（借出）15. cut up, turn on, turn off, put into, put on, mix up这些词组遇到代词时，必须将代词放在中间 例子：cut it up, turn it on, put them into a box, put it on, mix them up.cut the bananas up=cut up the bananas. turn the TV on=turn on the TV. where you live.16. 从句：（1）定语从句例子：People who are too stressed out and angry may have too much yang.In my view, I like a friend who is good at schoolwork.Hed like to read books which are humorous and meaningful.（2）宾语从句例子：Chinese doctors believe (that)we need a balance of yin and yang.I want to know where you live.Do you know what he wants to be?It depends on where you are.（3）状语从句例子： I could sing when I was 4 years old.If it doesnt rain tomorrow, Ill go to Wenzhou.17. 动名词做主语例子：Eating Dangshen and Huangqi herbs is also good for this.Doing sports is good for our health.18. 动名词做表语例子：Zuoyaos favorite hobby is playing computer games.（二）八年级下1. There be + sb/sth doing in a place 在某处有某人/某物在做某事例句：There are some students studying in our classroom. There are some people dancing in the park.2. fall in love with 爱上例句：I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.3. except 除了， besides 除了例句：Everyone is here except Xiao Lei. Because he is ill. Chen Zhicheng played basketball besides Chen Peijian. They both play basketball well.4. not anymore 不再例句：I wasnt mad at my students anymore because they were very hard-working. She didnt play computer games anymore.5. asas possible 尽可能例句：I will get to school as quickly as possible, We should do exercise as much as possible.6. compare with 与比较例句：Parents always compare their children with other children.7. find it + 形容词 + to do sth. 发现做某事怎么样例句：We find it important to learn English well. Many boys find it interesting to play computer games.相当于：It is interesting for many boys to play computer games.8. on the one hand, on the other hand 一方面，另一方面例句：On the one hand, we should study hard. On the other hand, we should have time to relax ourselves.9. Its a good idea for sb to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是个好主意例句：Its a good idea for me to get an education.10. not until 直到才例句：Mr Huang didnt go to bed until 12:00 last night. 王先生昨晚直到12点才睡觉。 I didnt leave until my mother came back. 我直到妈妈回来才离开。11. have a really hard tune with. 与相处艰难例句：He had a really hard time with science last semester.12. have a difficult/hard time doing sth. = have problem (in) doing sth. 做某事困难例句：If you are rich, you will have a difficult time knowing who your real friends are.13. open up ones eyes to the outside world 开阔视野例句：If I travel around the world, I will open up my eyes to the outside world.14. You are supposed to do sth 被期待/要求做某事；理应做某事例句：As a student, I am always supposed to study hard.15. a good influence on sb/sth. 对某人/某物产生好影响例句：Ms Dai works very hard. She like being a good influence on us.16. make a living (by) doing 靠谋生例句：In the future, I will make a living by singing.17. have a chance to do sth. 有机会做某事例句：If we have a chance to get a good education, we will be happy.18. seem like 似乎像例句：For Ms Dais son, being a math teacher might seem like his dream job.19. 不定式 to do 可以表示目的例句：They are skating to raise money for charity. My mother gets up early to get breakfast ready.20. be the first one to do sth.例句：Tom was the first one to get to school today.21. run out of 用完；用尽例句：We have run out of room to store them.22. be interested in / take an interest in 对什么感兴趣例句：Chen Zhicheng is interested in playing basketball. Qiaoqiao takes an interest in reading books.23. an 80-year-old woman, 一位80岁的妇女 end-of-year exam, 期末考试 a two-day holiday 一个两天的假期 24. Life with a pig isnt always perfect. 和猪一起的生活并总是很完美。例句：Life with hamsters is very relaxing. 25. The best gift I have ever received is from on my twelfth birthday.例句：The best gift I have ever received is an English dictionary from my father on my 20th birthday.26. be easy to take care of 容易照顾例句：Hamsters are easy to take care of. = Its easy to take care of hamsters.27. rather than 而不是例句：My mother wants me to study rather than play computer games. I would like to go to the party rather than stay at home.28. instead 代替例句：Mr Xie gives us PE classes instead because Mr Li hurt his left leg. = Mr Xie gives us PE classes instead of Mr Li because Mr Li hurt his left leg.29. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事例句：Our teachers always encourage us to do better.30. All I have ever wanted to do is travel. All I have ever wanted to be is a teacher.31. make progress 取得进步例句：Singing English songs can help you make progress in English. I have made great progress with the help of our teachers.32. feel like doing = want to do 33. 一些常用的短语(1) be supposed to do: We are supposed to do more sports to keep fit.(2) regardas: We regard Ms Dai as our friends.(3) be used to do: He used to be quiet, but now he is outgoing.(4) be used to doing: I used to get up late, but now I used to getting early.(5) would rather do than do: I would rather read books than go to the party.(6) have fun/trouble doing sth: All of us have fun/trouble learning English.(7) agree with sb: He agrees with me.(8) be proud of: Ms Dai is proud of us.(9) do ones best to do sth.: We will do our best to learn English well.(10) enjoy oneself: Lets enjoy ourselves every day.(11) had better do: We had better communicate well with our parents.(12) laugh at: We shouldnt laugh at the people who are in trouble. (13) no longer/notany more: He doesnt fight with his sister any more.(14):not until: My mother didnt go to bed until she finished sewing.(15) the more, the more: The more trees we plant, the more beautiful our country will be.(16)not onlybut also: She can not only sing but also dance well. Not only our teachers but we students love sports.34.串联词：(1) first of all/firstly, secondly, thirdly, then, after that, finally, last but not the least;(2) whats more, though/although, besides, and so on, however;(3) luckily, unluckily, to be honest, to my surprise;(4) for example, as for, as a student, as you can see, as you know;(5) at the same time, later on, by the way;(6) on the one hand, on the other hand;(7) in my opinion/view, in a word, in fact, of course, from now on, so far, in this way.目 录Unit 1：1. 语言学习12. 生活问题的处理3Unit 2：个人的变化.5Unit 3：1. 我的家规72. 我的校规9Unit 4：如何变得自信的建议11Unit 5：神秘事件的推测13Unit 6：写评论15Unit 7：1. 介绍自己的家乡172. 我的梦想19Unit 8：志愿者活动21Unit 9：篮球的发明史23Unit 10：尴尬的经历25Unit 11：给父母的一封信27Unit 12：介绍中国的餐桌礼仪29Unit 13：一份调查报告31Unit 14：阐述计划中已经完成的事和尚未完成的事33Unit 15：