全国卷书面表达.ppt

,分类写作,请求/求助信,吴洁玲,1. I wonder if you could do me _ favor. 2. I am wondering _(that/whether/where) you could help me. 3. I would _very grateful if you could give me a hand. 4. I would appreciate _if you could offer me a hand. 5. I cant wait _(see) you again! 6. Thanks for _ (you) kind consideration and I look forward to _(receive) your earliest reply.,【好句积累】,a,whether,be,it,to see,your,receiving,7. If you need _(far) information, do let me know. 8. Thank you very much for all the _(kind).,further,kindness,二.假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字格式（format） 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。,写信目的,I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. Im writing this letter to apply for a job in the coming summer vocation.,写作对象 1.自我介绍 2.解释缘由 3.写作目的,并提示所附材料 4. 表示感谢,假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。,想去 已写好 请她帮你修改,暑假 外贸公司 去兼职 申请书 所附材料 文字,summer vacation,a foreign company,take a part-time job,job application,attachment,language,3.Proof-reading and Error Correction I want to take a part-time job in summer vocation. So, I writing this letter to tell you my plan. In order to get some experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in foreign capital company. I am finished my job application and my personal resume. But this is my first time written my job application and personal resume.,I writing this letter to you for help. I hoping you can tell me some advise. Looking forward to you reply. 补充,4.Thinking development I would appreciate it if . I will be grateful if . 求职 建议 邀请,Dear Ms Jenkins, Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term. Im writing to ask for your help. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Li Hua,One possible version,Dear Ms Jenkins, (自我介绍) Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term. (解释缘由) Im writing to ask for your help. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. (写信目的) However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. (提示所附材料) Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.(表示感谢) Thank you for your kindness! Li Hua,One possible version,三.假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1主题：环境保护； 2展览时间； 3投稿邮箱：. 注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,三.假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1主题：环境保护； 2展览时间； 3投稿邮箱：. 注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you wa