怎样写好论文英文摘要.ppt

1、1,怎样写好论文英文摘要？,闵应骅,美国电机电子工程师协会院士(IEEE Fellow),2,提要,为什么要写硕士学位论文？ 摘要多么重要? 摘要应包括什么内容? 英文摘要 某些摘要实例分析 结论,3,为什么要写硕士学位论文？,一种写作的锻炼 整理思路 做学问、做工程、做开发都需要,4,计算机工程研究主要的几种类型：,新概念 模型化 新方法 理论推导 实验研究 系统设计与实现 一定要有结果,5,摘要多么重要?,摘要最吸引眼球 检索者 审稿人 华罗庚谈学习方法： “由薄到厚” “由厚到薄”,6,拷贝“项目背景”作为摘要？,7,摘要应包括什么内容?,研究动机 本文的贡献 工作量 实验结果 主要结论

2、,几句话概括全文！,8,PRESENTATION,An IEEE paper presentation requirements include the following. a). Is the abstract an appropriate and adequate digest of the work presented? b). How readable is the paper for a computer scientist or engineer who is not a specialist in this particular field?,9,Readability,_ R

3、eadable with ordinary effort _ Paper is self-contained, but considerable effort is needed _ If the definitions of certain concepts, terms and symbols were included, readability would be improved,10,Motivation?,11,题目的翻译,城域宽带网资源管理系统的设计和实现 Design and realizing of the land broadband network resource adm

4、inistrative system of city Design and realizing? Administrative ? Of city ? Design and Implementation of a resource administration system for Broadband Metropolitan Area networks,12,一些例子（1）,This thesis based on Client/Server model , the cable broadband network resource management system is based on

5、large network and database development category of new production systems that address network load as a result of a sharp increase in network resource management problems.,Not understandable!,13,一些例子（2）,a,After carefully studying the inner structure and real applications of COMDCOM and ActiveX, thi

6、s paper: Brings out an new Query interface function based on Hash algorithm, which can effectively improve the efficient of current algorithm; Brings out intelligent interface class, which can mask the problems that brought out by forgetting using the Release functions; Compares . Then brings out an

7、 which can make full use ; Finally, realized an .,bring someone out,14,评论,尽量用简单句 名词还是形容词 名词尽量用复数 an new ?,15,一些例子（3）,and,Digital watermarking is all kinds of information which can be embedded into multimedia data, just as digits, serial numbers, text, image symbols, so it can be used in copyright pr

8、otection, marker production, covert communication, data ownership confirmation, data authentication. As digital texts are used on a wide scale, it is of theoretical and practical meanings to research text watermarking as one of applied spheres of digital watermarking.,16,评论,用 a 还是 the? 两句之间的 and,17,

9、一些例子（4）,The rapid development of WWW and internet brings out new requirement to the software engineering, distributed object computing model and its application technology research become the important research projects.,A or s,?,A or s,Whose?,S?,18,评论,用 a 还是 the? 两句之间的 and,19,With the popularizatio

10、n and development of computer network,it has become absolutely necessarily to our daily life.We need not only sharing information ,but also operating secure,business-critical affairs over the public networks,using it to transfer confidential information(such as bank account,credit card number,custom

11、ers personal info etc.).,一些例子（5）,?,and,X,20,评论,And 前后要并列 逗号后一个空格，句号后二个空格。,21,Due to the coming of information times, computer systems act more importantly in human lives. Its important to research its reliability and security. System-level Fault Diagnosis (SLFD) diagnoses computer systems to make th

12、em fault-tolerant.,一些例子（6）,age,用词,用词,含义,22,评论,用词欠妥，多参考英、美人的文章,23,Group Algorithm(GA) is a major SLFD algorithm .We analyze GAs characterization, modify it by using parallel method (instead of serial method ) to searching groups. Improve its performance ; then , we research major probabilistic diagno

13、sis algorithms ,analyze and compare their characterizations ,especially Soman & Agrawal algorithm.,一些例子（7）,与Genetics Algorithm 混同,X,characterize the GA,?,X,?,24,评论,动词和动名词 to do something approach to doing something looking forward to meeting you,25,On the conclusions of the above discussing, we deta

14、iledly anatomize and compare the multithreading architecture of the CORBA ORBs after deeply discuss and analyse the WAI frame based Java and CORBA, and we propose an improved multithreading architecture whose performance is simulated and evaluated.,一些例子（8）,WAI （Web-based application integrating)?,X,

15、无主语,?,?,在计算机文章中很少用(解剖),26,评论,不要自造词 “detailedly” XXX “repeatedly” OK 缩写（abbreviation) 少自造 第一次出现时说明,27,The work of Researching and Designing Proxy software has very important value. Various access restriction techniques in Internet is discussed.,一些例子（9）,Chinglish?,X,28,评论,动词的使用，多参考别人的文章 The paper pres

16、ents something. The paper proposes some approach to something. The paper introduces some new concepts. The paper gives some solution to some problem.,29,With the appearance of IDB (Image DataBase), the problem how to manage efficiently and retrieve quickly the image information has beening the resea

17、rch hot pot at home and oversea. This paper analyse the development of the CBIE (content-based image retrieval) technology at present. After having studyed and mastered the research achievement, we launch our research on .,一些例子（10）,Studied(reviewed),加s,X,?,Adj.,30,评论,尽量少用第一人称 一般都用现在时 用过去时或现在完成时就要有时间

18、副词,31,Fasle sharing is one of the most important factors impacting the performance of DSM(distributed shared memory) system, single-writer approach is simple, but it cannot avaid the ping-pong effect of the data page thrashing, while multiple-writer appraoch is effective for false sharing but the cost is high.,一些例子（11）,the,. But,s,. W,. The,on.,False?,32,Evaluation results show that for some applications such as SOR, LU, FFT, and IS