河南省洛阳市2022-2024年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

河南省洛阳市2022-2024年中考英语一模试题分类汇编书面表达2024年河南省洛阳市中考一模英语试题七、书面表达(20分)学校的劳动实践课已经开设一年了,大家一定有很多难以忘怀的经历或开心快乐的瞬间。校报英语栏目FunEnglishWorld针对劳动实践活动发起征文,请以“ThemomentinLaborClass”为题,根据下面的要求用英语写一篇短文投稿。要求：1.介绍事情发生的时间、地点和过程；2.谈谈这件事对你的影响；3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；4.词数100左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2023年河南省洛阳市中考一模英语试题七、书面表达(20分)在繁忙而充实的学习之余,学生还应该拥有健康阳光的爱好(如运动、绘画、读书等)。请选择一项你的爱好,以makesmylifemorecolorful为题写一篇短文。1.要点：(1)你的爱好是什么；(2)你培养和发展爱好的过程是什么；(3)你从你的爱好中获得了什么体验和感受。2.要求：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；(2)语意连贯层次清楚,书写规范,100词左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2022年河南省洛阳市中考一模英语试题72．人与人之间需要互帮互助，在帮助别人的过程中你也在成长、进步。请以“Helpingothersmakesmegrowup”为题写一篇英语短文。1.要点：（1）你帮助过谁？（2）你是如何帮助他人的？（3）你从中获得什么感受？2.要求：（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；（2）语意连贯层次清楚，书写规范，100词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：2024年河南省洛阳市中考一模英语试题Onepossibleversion:TheUnforgettableMomentinLaborClassOurschoolhadaspeciallaborclassforus.Lastmonth,wewereaskedtocleanuptheschoolgardenandplantnewvegetables.Themostunforgettablemomentwastoplantcarrots.Asagroup,wecarefullydugholes,placedtheseeds,andcoveredthemwithsoil.Itwashardwork,butwelaughedandworkedtogether,learningaboutdutyandteamwork.Weekslater,wefeltproudandexcitedtoseethetinygreenplantsstarttogrow.Thatlaborclasswasn’tjustphysicalwork,itwasachancetolearnandgrow.Iwillalwaysrememberthefeelingofachievement.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，补全题目，介绍事情发生的时间和地点；第二步，详细介绍这次劳动课上发生的事，解释为什么会让自己难忘；第三步，书写结语，讲述自己的感悟。[亮点词汇]①cleanup清理②learnabout了解③thefeelingofachievement成就感[高分句型]①Lastmonth,wewereaskedtocleanuptheschoolgardenandplantnewvegetables.(一般过去时的被动语态)②Itwashardwork,butwelaughedandworkedtogether,learningaboutdutyandteamwork.(but并列句)③Weekslater,wefeltproudandexcitedtoseethetinygreenplantsstarttogrow.(不定式作目的状语)2023年河南省洛阳市中考一模英语试题72．例文:PaintingmakesmylifemorecolorfulIt’simportanttobuildupsomehobbiesinlife.Paintingisthehobbythatmakesmylifemorecolorful.Istillrememberthefirsttimewhenmymomtookmetotheartmuseum.Iwasdeeplyinterestedinthegreatpaintings.IaskedmymomifIcouldlearnpaintingandmymomagreed.Itookthepaintingtrainingclasses.Theteacherstaughtmehowtodesignthewholepainting.Ibecamemoreandmoreinterestedinpainting.Ievengotthethirdprizeinthecitypaintingcompetition.Ifeelproudofmyself.Paintingmakesmylifemorecolorful.Ireallyenjoyit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：文章题目以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，介绍是什么爱好让你的人生多姿多彩；第二步，具体讲述你是如何培养和发展这一爱好的，可列举具体的事例；第三步，表达这一爱好给你带来的感受并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①buildupsomehobbies培养爱好②becomemoreandmoreinterestedin对……越来越感兴趣③feelproudof对……感到自豪[高分句型]①It’simportanttobuildupsomehobbiesinlife.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语句）②Paintingisthehobbythatmakesmylifemorecolorful.（that引导限制性定语从句）③IaskedmymomifIcouldlearnpaintingandmymomagreed.（if引导宾语从句）2022年河南省洛阳市中考一模英语试题72．例文HelpingothersmakesmegrowupEveryoneneedshelp,andIalsohelpothers.Monthsago,myteacheraskedmetohelpmyclassmateMikewithhismath.Beforehelpinghim,Ifeltalittlenervous,soIwentoverthetextbookagainandagain,anddidlotsofexercises.Tomysurprise,IcouldevenworkoutsomedifficultproblemsthatIcouldn’tunderstandbefore.InordertohelpMikewithhismath,ImadeMikegooverwhathehadlearnedeveryday,andalsohelpedhimwithhishomework.Duringtheweekendswedidexercisestogether.Withmyhelp,Mikemadegreatprogressinmath.Laterheevenenjoyedlearningit.Fromthisexperience,notonlydidIhelphimoutofhistrouble,butalsoIimproved