河南省2024八年级英语下册Unit6Anoldmantriedtomovethemountains写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

UNIT6AnoldmantriedtomovethemountainsUNIT6写作能力提升练假如你是李梅，请你根据下面所给图画提示，给大家讲述这一经典故事。SimaGuanghitthetank(缸)［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。描述故事发生的场景—ance;inthebackyard;therewas...intheyard;water讲述故事发生的经过—playing;fallinto;befrightened;cry;runforhelp;thinkover;pickup;throwat;besaved引发感想—WhatdoyouthinkofSimaGuang?［遣词造句］根据结构图中的要点写出句子。1.

有一次，司马光和几个小孩在后院捉迷藏。OnceSimaGuang

wasplayinghide-and-seekwithseveralchildren

⁠inthebackyard.wasplayinghide-and-seekwithseveralchildren

123452.

他们在玩时，一个小孩不慎掉进了水缸中。Whentheywereplaying，onechildaccidentally

fellintothetank

⁠.fellintothetank

123453.

其他孩子如此惊慌，以至于开始哭喊起来，跑出去求救。Otherchildren

weresofrightened

⁠

thattheystartedcryingandrunningforhelp.weresofrightened

12345He

thoughtitover

⁠

andthenhadanidea.He

pickedupabigstone

⁠and

threwitatthewatertank

⁠.thoughtitover

⁠

pickedupabigstone

threwitatthewatertank

123454.

他想了想，然后有了一个主意。他捡起一块大石头，砸向那个水缸。5.

缸破了，水流出来了。那个小孩得救了。Thetankbrokeandthewaterranout.Thechild

wassaved

⁠.wassaved

12345［巧妙衔接］本文按照故事发生的时间顺序来叙述，用一般过去时和过去进行时引出故事发生的场景。巧妙运用when，however等词交代了故事的发展和高潮。［连句成篇］SimaGuanghitthetank(缸)OnceSimaGuangwasplayinghide-and-seekwithseveralchildreninthebackyard.Therewasalargewatertankintheyard.Itwasfullofwater.Whentheywereplaying，onechildaccidentallyfellintothetank.Otherchildrenweresofrightenedthattheystartedcryingandrunningforhelp.However，SimaGuangwasdifferent.Hethoughtitoverandthenhadanidea.Hepickedupabigstoneandthrewitatthewatertank.

“Bang！”Thetankbrokeandthewaterranout.Thechildwassaved.Doyoulikethestory？WhatdoyouthinkofSimaGuang？假如你是李华，你的笔友Lisa来信说她最近正在学习汉语，在学习过程中遇到“程门立雪”(ChengMenLiXue)这一成语，不解其意。请你根据图片提示，用英语给她回信，简要叙述一下这个成语故事。参考词汇：idiom成语；duringtheNorthernSong

Dynasty北宋时期；ChengYi程颐；haveanap小憩；disturb打扰要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。

DearLisa，

I’mgladtohearfromyou.Inyourletter，yousayyoudon’tunderstandthemeaningoftheidiom“ChengMenLiXue”.Nowletmetellyouthestory.

DearLisa，

I’mgladtohearfromyou.Inyourletter，yousayyoudon’tunderstandthemeaningoftheidiom“ChengMenLiXue”.Nowletmetellyouthestory.

DuringtheNorthernSongDynasty，therewasafamousteachercalledChengYi.Oneday，twoyoungmencametotheteacher’shousetolearnfromhim.OneofthemwasYangShi.Itwassnowingheavilyandtheteacherwashavinganap.Theothermansaid，

“Let’sgoinandasktheteacherforhelp.”ButYangsaid，

“No，theteacherishavingarest.Weshouldwaitoutsideandnotdisturbhim.”

DuringtheNorthernSongDynasty，therewasafamousteachercalledChengYi.Oneday，twoyoungmencametotheteacher’shousetolearnfromhim.OneofthemwasYangShi.Itwassnowingheavilyandtheteacherwashavinganap.Theothermansaid，

“Let’sgoinandasktheteacherforhelp.”ButYangsaid，

“No，theteacherishavingarest.Weshouldwaitoutsideandnotdisturbhim.”

Aftersometime，theteacherwokeup.Whenhefoundthetwoyoungmenstandingoutsideinsuchabigsnow，hewasmovedandaskedthemtocomein.ButYangsaid，

“I’msorrytotroubleyou.”

Doyoulikethestory？WhatdoyouthinkofYangShi？

Aftersometime，theteacherwokeup.Whenhefoundthetwoyoungmenstandingoutsideinsuchabigsnow，hewasmovedandaskedthemtoco