CET4写作技巧讲练

CET4Writing关于CET4作文作文分数为142分，占总分的15%。要求在30分钟之内写出一篇120词左右的短文。作文体裁包括：议论文、说明文、应用文等。CET4作文样题PartI.Writing(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteACampaignSpeechinsupportofyourelectiontothepostofchairmanofthestudentunion.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.你认为自己具备了什么条件〔能力、性格、爱好等〕可以胜任学生会主席的工作。2.如果中选，你将为本校同学做些什么。WritingSkillsLectureSeries1.作文不理想的四个主要原因第一.英语底子太薄。底子太薄主要表现为对语法知识掌握不牢及对根本词汇记忆不清。它包括定冠词和不定冠词的滥用，主谓不一致，单复数搞不清楚〔例如：a

people等〕，时态和语态混乱及词语的各种形式掌握不牢。有的学生文章写得很长，字迹也很工整，但是读完之后只觉得思路紊乱，支离破碎，没有一个完整的句子，所以也就只能得两三分以慰劳苦。

1.作文不理想的四个主要原因第二.词汇量太小，且对已学词汇记忆不清。除了底子太薄这个历史原因之外，学生词汇量太小也是一个不容无视的原因。有的学生汉语功底很好，用汉语作文，他们就会思如泉涌，下笔千言，但是一到用英语作文就好似被缚住了手脚，不知如何下手。1.作文不理想的四个主要原因第三.缺乏思想，深度不够。很多学生虽然已是大二的学生，甚至是大三大四的学生，但是他们在作文当中所表现出的智力水平与阅历似乎只相当于一个初高中生。写出的文章着眼点低，视野狭窄。1.作文不理想的四个主要原因第四.缺乏应试技巧。主要表现为有些学生在篇首或篇尾有喊口号倾向〔如DearFriends,let's…〕,或画蛇添足,本来文章该结束了却偏要罗罗嗦嗦再来两句多余的话；另外一些学生字数把握不准，不是写得太短就是写得太长，写得太短的会因为字数不够而失分，太长的又因为阅卷老师任务繁重，时间窘迫，不能因为一篇文章乱了整个阅卷节奏。还有一些学生的笔迹〔尤其是用纯蓝墨水钢笔和出水太浅的圆珠笔写的〕，让阅卷老师怎么也看不清楚。2.作文测试现场示范

Title:Do“LuckyNumbers”ReallyBringGoodLuck?Outline:1.有些人认为数字会带来好运。2.而有些人那么认为数字与运气无关。3.谈谈你的看法。2.作文测试现场示范第一步：审题〔2分钟〕1.

题目：关于幸运号码与运气的关系2.

三个段首句：A段.指出第一种观点及其根据。B段.指出第二种观点及其根据。C段.说明你的个人观点偏向〔Y/N)

2.作文测试现场示范第二步：布局〔15分钟〕〔用英语思维〕1.用英语铺设三个段首句：A段：Somepeoplethinknumbersbringpeoplegoodluck.B段：However,someothersbelievenumbershavenothingtodowithluck.C段：Asforme,Idon’tthinknumberswillbringusgoodluck.2.作文测试现场示范2.列出三段各自框架及语言要点：〔只写出根本句型结构和句子主要素〕A段：拓展句：A.Believe,therewouldbefateonnumbers(phonenumbers,lotterytickets,carnumberplatesetc.)B.(Reasons)canavoidharm,enjoygoodfortune.B段：拓展句：A.Believe,thefaithonnumbersisgroundless.B.Onemakeshisownluck;fateisinthehandsofaperson.2.作文测试现场示范C段：拓展句：A.Thereisnonecessaryconnectionbetweennumbersandluck.a.

Numbersareonlydesignedtodistinguishthings.b.

Theconnectionbetweennumbersandluckissheercoincidence.B.Goodluckdependsonsomefactorssuchashardworkandstrongdetermination.结尾句：Ibelievethereareluckssometimes,butIsimplydon’trelatelucktonumbers.2.作文测试现场示范第三步：行文。根据框架和要点，连字成句，连句成段，连段成章。〔10分钟〕〔注意适当辅以连接词或转承语〕第四步：收笔。通读全文，修改和润色〔3分钟〕。写好作文的关键因素语篇结构、套语、句型、用词、条理、语法。CET4作文结构示意图题目：××××××段落I.主题句。推展句1.〔论据或例证，下同〕。推展句2.。推展句3。结尾句1.〔根据需要而定，可有可无〕段落II.主题句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.。结尾句1.〔根据需要而定，可有可无〕段落III.主题句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.结尾句1.〔统揽全文，照应中心〕CET4作文常用词汇或套语一.

转承语：Besides,inaddition,moreover,however,nevertheless,despiteof+noun(thefactthat…),inspiteof….二.

列举要点：foronething,…foranother,…Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…Firstly,…Secondly,…Thirdly,…Finally,…CET4作文常用词汇或套语三.

罗列观点用词：argue,insistthat,consider,think,maintainthat,recommendthat,suggestthat.四.描述趋势、动态用词〔主要用于图表作文〕：increase,decrease,drop,fall,rise,decline,fluctuate,sharply,dramatically,slightly,greatly,moderately.CET4作文常用词汇或套语五.

时间词：inrecentyears,inthepastfewdecades,nowadays,today,inmoderntimes,inourtimes(age).六.

引述个人观点用词：AsfarasIamconcerned,Asforme,Inmypart,speakingfrommyownexperience.七.

引述原因用词：Whyisthat?It’sprobablybecause…,Whathascausedtheproblem?Thereasonwhy…isthat…CET4作文常用词汇或套语八.总结论点用词：Tosumup,Inconclusion,Allinall.九.

表述明确观点用词：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Undoubtedly;Nodoubt…十.

引述结果用词：Asaresult,Asaconsequence,Asamatterofthefact.3.怎样写好英语段落主题句的位置

主题句通常放在段落的开端，其特点是开门见山地摆出问题，然后加以详细说明。其作用是使文章的结构更清晰，更具说服力，便于读者迅速地把握主题和想象全段的内容。主题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初学者比较难于掌握，因而在四级考试中，考生应尽量采用将主题句放在段落开头的写作手法。写作中常用的经典句型1.~~~the+~est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard,etc)Ofallthefactorsthatcontributetoone’ssuccess,hardworkandopportunityarethemostimportantonesthatmostpeoplehaveacknowledged.2.Nothingis+~~~erthanto+V

or:Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceivegoodeducation.Nothingismoredifficultthantobesuccessfulbothinfamilylifeandpersonalcareerinone’slife.3.Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...

(不可否认，......)Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlifehavegonefrombadtogood.Thereisnodenyingthatourglobeisbeingthreatenedbyenvironmentalpollution.4.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~

(全世界都知道...)Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattheeconomicglobalizationishavingmoreandmoreinfluenceonourlives.5.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~

(毫无疑问,......)Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫无疑问，我们的教育制度令人不满意。Thereisnodoubtthatpeaceanddevelopmenthavebecometheessentialaspectsinourmoderntimes.毫无疑问，和平与开展已经成为当今时代的主流。6.Anadvantageof~~~isthat+句子

(...的优点是...)Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon‘tcreate(produce)anypollution.Anadvantageofkeepingpetsisthatpetscanbecomepeople’sgoodcompanions.7.Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子

(...的原因是...)Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.ThereasonwhypeoplechoosetomakefriendsonlineisprobablythattheywanttobroadentheirsocialcirclesthroughInternet.8.So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子

(….是如此...以致于...)Sopreciousistimethatwecan‘taffordtowasteit.

时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。SorewardingiscollegelifethatthereisnothingthatIwilltradeforit.9.Adj+as+Subject(主词)+be,S+V~~~

(虽然...)Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一点也不}虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。10.The+~er+S+V,~~~the+~er+S+V~~~越是……越是……Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.

越是努力，你就会越进步。Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome.

我们书读越多，我们就越有学问。11.By+Ving,~~can~~

(凭借......，……能够…..)Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.凭借运动，我们能够始终保持健康。Bybeingfriendlytoothers,wewillmakeallkindsoffriendswhereverwego.12.~~~enable+Object(受词)+to+V

(..使..能够..)Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。Readingextensivelywillenableustoacquireallkindsofknowledgefrombooks.13.Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~

(我们绝对不能...)Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。Onnoaccountshallwedisregardtheexistenceanddignityofothers.14.Itistime+S+过去式

(该是...的时候了)Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。Itishightimethatwerealizedthenegativeeffectsofstudents’playingPCgamesinclasshours.15.Itisconceivablethat+句子(可想而知的)

Itisobviousthat+句子(明显的)

Itisapparentthat+句子(显然的)Itisconceivablethatknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Itisobviousthatthedevelopmentofanationreliesmuchontalentsandthecultivationoftalentsdependsoneducation.16.Itpaysto+V~~~

(...是值得的。)Justasasayinggoes“givesomeonearoseandthefragranceremainsinyourhand.”Soitpaystohelpothers.有句话说得好“给人玫瑰，手有余香”。因此，帮助别人是值得的。Itpaystoinvestoneducationinthelongrun.17.bebasedon(以...为根底，建立在…之上)Theprogressofthesocietyisbasedonharmony.社会的进步是以和谐为根底的。Asisknowntoall,therelationshipbetweentwocountriesisbasedonequalityandmutualinterests.18.Sparenoeffortto+V

(不遗余力地去……)Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。Althoughitisstillalongwaytogo,wemustsparenoeffortstomakeoursocietymoreharmoniousanddeveloped.19.Haveagreatinfluenceon~~~

(对...有很大的影响)Internetishavinggreaterinfluencesonourlives.Itcannotbeignoredthatourdietsarehavingmoresignificantinfluencesonourhealth.20.dogoodto(对...有益)

doharmto(对...有害)Readingdoesgoodtoourmind.

读书对心灵有益。Overworkdoesharmtohealth.工作过度对健康有害。21.Poseagreatthreatto~~

(对...造成一大威胁)Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。Terrorismhasbeenposingagreatthreattothepeaceandstabilityoftheworld.22.doone‘sutmostto+V=doone‘sbest

(尽全力去...)Weshoulddoourutmosttoachieveourgoalinlife.我们应尽全力去实现我们的人生目标。写作中常用的句式1.复合句：定语从句名词性从句状语从句2.非谓语动词短语不定式短语现在分词短语过去分词短语3.虚拟句式If…Without/Butfor(that)…Itishightimethat…Suggest/advocate/propose…that…4.强调句式“Itbe…that…”用于表达对某种因素的强调。e.g.Itisoutofremarkablebenefitsthatmanymanufacturersproducefakeorpoor-qualityproducts.5.倒装句式Bynomeans/Onnoaccount/Never…引导的局部倒装结构，用以加强观点。e.g.Bynomeansshallweseelessofthenegativeeffectsthatchattingonlinemighthaveonourlives.6.并列句式常见由notonly…butalso,aswellas,inaddition,moreover,onthecontrary,therefore,asaresult等连接的并列句式。7.比照或比照句式Justas…,…e.g.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,…hasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Like/Unlike…,…Likemostcountriesintheworld,Chinaisalsofacedwiththesocialproblemsofagingpopulation.作文练习题CET作文练习题KeepingPets随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人喜欢养宠物。分析潜在的原因。养宠物对动物是祸是福？Model:Inrecentyears,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard,moreandmoreChinesepeoplechoosetokeepallkindsofpets,suchasdogs,cats,parrotsandthelike.Whydosomanypeoplelikekeepingpets?

Ontheonehand,somepeoplepursuementalsatisfactiononbasisofmaterialenjoymentbykeepingpets;ontheotherhand,peoplekeeppetsinhopeofrelievingtheirworkpressure.Inaddition,someoldorsinglepeoplekeepcompanywiththeirpetstoeasetheirloneliness.Lastbutnotleast,keepingpetsisalsoareflectionofpeople'sgrowingawarenessofanimalprotection.Iskeepingpetsablessingormisfortuneforanimals?

Justaseverycoinhastwosides,keepingpetshasitspositiveandnegativesenses.

Ontheonehand,keepingpetshelpstoenhancepeople’sawarenessofanimalprotectionandtodevelophumanaffectionsforanimals.Ontheotherhand,livinginhumancommunitieswilldepriveanimalsoftheirwildnaturetogetherwiththeirfreedomandabilitiestosurvive,whichwillturnouttobeamisfortuneforanimals.Ifwehumanbeingscantreatourpetsinmoreproperways,maybewecanbalancebetweenthegoodandbadsidesofkeepingpets.提示：勿提及传播疾病、玩物丧志等，以免离题。CET作文练习题MakingFriendsOnline为什么许多人热衷于网上交友？网上交友的利与弊。我的看法。Model:WiththerapiddevelopmentofITtechnology,Internethasbecomeamostadvancedmeansofcommunicationforpeople.Asaresult,moreandmorepeopleenjoymakingfriendsonline.

Justaseverycoinhastwosides,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeadouble-edgedswordforpeople.

Ontheonehand,Internetprovidesuswithwidersocialcirclesinwhichwecanmeetandmakefriendswithpeopleinallpartsoftheworld,andwecanbroadenourhorizonbymakingfriendsofdifferentraces,sexes,culturesandprofessions.Ontheotherhand,sinceInternetisavirtualworld,wecaneasilyfallintothetrapshiddenbehindit.Moreover,addictionstothevirtualspacemay,inthelongrun,depriveusofthenormalsocialabilitiesandfurtherisolateusfromtherealsociety.AsfarasIamconcerned,sincemenaretheholdersofthedouble-edgedsword,it’salluptoustomakegooduseofthisnewwayofmakingfriends.Foronething,weshouldstayalertwhenmakingfriendsonline.Neverbereadilydependentonothersbefore