高三英语一轮复习求助信学案

求助信教学目标：1.求助信的文章结构；2.求助信的常用表达；3.求助信写作模板；4.求助信典例展示及实战演练；教学过程：一、写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文义，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。具体写作结构如下：求助信结构：1.开头表明写信意图，发出请求。主体描述困难，恳求帮助。结尾寻求帮助，表示感谢，期盼回复。二、常见困难：

【生活方面】

1.与人相处

get

along

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my

classmates/

the

new

teacher

/

my

parents.2.把握时间

arrange

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make

good

use

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my

everyday

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things.

3.明确目标know

the

purpose

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my

life

and

the

destination

of

my

future

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order

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passionately

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a

purposedriven

life

everyday.

知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活

【学习方面】

1．不懂语法

have

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putting

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use

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speaking

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me

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meaningful.夺人眼球篇首句I’mwritingthelettertoyoutoaskyoutodomeafavor.我给你写信是想请你帮我一个忙。I'mwritingthislettertoaskforyourassistanceandprofessionaldirectionson...我写这封信是想寻求您的帮助和关于……的专业指导。I'mwonderingifyoucouldtakethetroubletohelpme...我想知道您是否能费心帮我……Wouldyouminddoing..forme?你介意帮我做……吗？Ihavesomedifficultyindoing...whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。Iamwritinginthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.我希望你能帮我一个忙。Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？亮点出彩篇中句Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore,…Whattroublesmemostis…我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先……另外……最困扰我的是……2.Unfortunately,I

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difficult/challenging

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todosth.做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。4.NotonlydoIhavesomedifficultiesin...butalsoin...我不仅在…方面有困难，而且在…方面也有困难。5.SodifficultisthesituationthatIdon’tknowhowtofaceit.情况是如此的复杂以至于我都不知道怎么去面对。6.Facedwithsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.面对如此多的困难,我不得不向您求助。7.Ihave

trouble/difficulty/problems

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sth.我做某事有困难。8.Doing

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another

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headache

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me.(使用动名词做主语）做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。I

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sth.(使用find复合结构）我发现自己做某事有困难。10.ThemainreasonwhyI'mwritingthisletteristhatIhavealittlefavortoask.我写这封信给你的主要原因是我有一个小小的请求。韵味无穷结尾句Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.如果你能给我一些建议，我将不胜感激。2.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration/account.如果你能考虑一下我的要求，我将不胜感激。3．IbelieveIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice.我相信您的宝贵而及时的建议会使我受益匪浅。I’msurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldspareyourtimetogivemeahand.如果你能抽出时间来帮我一把，我将不胜感激。写作模板DearXXX'Howareyoudoingthesedays?It'salmosttwomonthssincewemeteachotherlasttime.ThereasonwhyI'mwritingthisletteristhatIwonderifit'spossibleformetoseekyourassistanceinimprovingmyEnglish.Whatbothersmeisthat___________________.Firstly,________________________.What'smore________________________________.Therefore,wouldyoubekindenoughtooffermesomeinstructions?Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice/help.Bestwishes!四、(一)(2021·全国甲)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：1．阐明写信事由；2.征求建议；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【满分佳作】DearChris，How’severythinggoing？Aschool­widediscussionwhosethemeistraditionalChinesecultureistakingplaceinourschoolandtheupingresultswillbedisplayedontheEnglishwebsite.Iamwonderingifyoucouldtellmewhatmightattractforeignersmostamongthesetopics，suchaspapercutting，calligraphy，BeijingOpera，andChinesepainting.AsyouhaveapassionfortraditionalChineseculture，yoursuggestionswillbegreatlyhelpfultous.TheactivityisscheduledtobeheldonMay15intheformofclassmeetingsandthedisplaywillstartonMay25，whichwillbeagoodopportunitytolearnabouttraditionalChinesecultureforbothusandforeigners.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtellmeyouropinion.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHua【名师点评】1.文章开篇表明写信意图，随后说明求助的具体内容，最后表达希望和感激。2.书信中使用了高级词汇：traditional，uping，displayed，haveapassionfor，isscheduledto，opportunity等；求助信常用的套语：Iamwonderingif...，yoursuggestionswillbegreatlyhelpfultous和Iwouldappreciateitif...；还使用了复杂结构as引导的原因状语从句。(二)（2020全国卷3）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短句。给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。【满分佳作】DearMissEvans,IamLiHuafromyourEnglishclass.I’mwritingtoaskforyourguidanceonadaptingashortplayfortheEnglishFestivalnextmonth.We’reinterestedinonestoryfromourEnglishtextbook,TheMillionPoundBankNotebyMarkTwain.Itisabouttheadventureofapooryoungmanwhowasgivenamillionpoundbanknotebytworichgentlemen.Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadviceonhowtomakedialoguesbasedonthestory?Woulditbepossibleforustomeetinourclassroomat5p.m.thisFriday?Thankyouforyourkindness!Wearelookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua假如你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张，甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信，向他求助。内容包括：1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题；2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.WhatbothersmeisthatIamataloss/havenoideahowtoreviewwhatIhavelearned.困扰我的事情是我不知道如何复习功课。6.Ihavemuchtrouble/botherinconcentratingonclasses,makingmereallyfrustrated.我很难专心上课,这使我很苦恼。7.I'mwonderingifyoucouldoffermesomepracticaladviceasIknowyouhaveorganizedsimilaractivities.因为我知道你组织过类似活动，我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议8.Ifeelgreatlystressed,sowouldyoubekindenoughtooffermesomeadviceonhowtorelievestress?我现在压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗？Learningyouhaverichexperienceinorganizingoperaperformances,Iwaswonderingifyoucouldlendmeahand.知道你组织话剧演出经验丰富,我想知道你是否能帮我。Ifinditdifficult/challenging/toughformetofitinwithothersinthenewsurroundings.我发现在新的环境中我很难与他人融洽相处三．假如你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张，甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信，向他求助。内容包括：1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题；2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节。DearCharlie,Howareyougettingalong?RecentlyIhavequarreledwithmyparents,whichmakesmeveryannoyed.Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelptoeaserelationshipwithmyparents.Myparentsdon’tallowmetoplaywithmyfriendsatweekends.TheythinkIshouldemployeveryminutetoworkonmylessons.Itiswrongtoquarrelwiththem,butIdon’tknowwhattodotopersuadethemtochangetheirmindanddevelopagoodrelationshipwithmyfriends.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadvice?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua求助信范文背诵假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:阐明写信事由;征求建议;表示感谢。DearChris,I’mwritingtolearnfromyouaboutwhichtraditionalChinesecultureismoreappealingtoforeignfriends.OurschoolplanstoholdaclassmeetingwhosethemeistointroducetraditionalChineseculture.ThemeetingwillbedisplayedontheEnglishwebsite.InordertocarryforwardthetraditionalChinesecultureandattractmoreforeignfriends,we’redeterminedtomakethemeetingmeaningfulandimpressive.Idohopeyoucangiveussomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyassoonaspossiblewithgratitude.Yours,LiHua假定你是红星中学即将毕业的高三学生李华，最近你和父母在大学专业的选择上有些争论。请给你的外教Black写一封求助信,内容包括:求助缘由;你的选择和理由;你的期望。DearBlack,Longtimenosee!I’llgraduatefromseniorhighschoolsoon.Recently,Iarguedwithmyparentsaboutthechoiceofthemajoratcollege.Asdoctors,myparentswishmetomajorinmedicineandbeeadoctor.However,I’vebeeninterestedinvehiclessinceIwasinprimaryschool.Ithinknewenergyvehicleswillhaveapromisingfuture.SoIplantomajorinAutomobileEngineeringatcollege.Idon’tknowwhetherIshouldsticktomychoiceandpersuademyparentstochangetheirminds.Iwonderifyoucangivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua四、假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件咨询并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2.钱包特征；3.联系方式。DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,oneofthepassengersonyourflightFL753fromChinatoLondon.I'mwritinginthehopethatyoucanhelpmefindmylostwallet.IclearlyrememberitwaswithmetheinstantIboardedtheplane.Butunfortunately,IfounditmissingonmyarrivalintheLondonHeathrowAirport.Itmusthaveslippedoutofmypocketduringtheflight.Itwasadarkleatheronewith200dollar