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英文摘要写作1/24AbstractReadingbymanypeople---Advertise!SummarizepaperSelf-containedBrief(100~200words)Nofiguresorreferences2/24一、英文摘要类型指示性（概括性）摘要：多用于理论性较强论文，主要概括论文主要观点、研究范围、分析过程、内容梗概和结论，并不定量报道其详细内容，如详细数据等。信息性（报道性）摘要：多用于试验性和技术性较强论文，主要报道论文研究结果、数据和结论。3/24一、英文摘要类型Prof.Feng型摘要：1）backgroundinfo；2）thesubjectmatter&researchpurpose/objective;3)researchmethods;4)findings/results;5)suggestionandproposedconclusion.6)Nofirstpersonallowed4/24二、英文摘要特点语言特点：准确、简练、明了结构特点：背景与目标内容与方法结果、结论与前景句子结构特点：句首传递信息关键点句子多被动语句多，定语、补语多5/24三、英文摘要惯用句型惯用于摘要开头部分：theresultsofAsimplemethodfor…casesofthe…approachforanattemptto(do)1.(Inthispaper,the…isconducted/discussed.)is(are)presenteddescribed(through…)reported(under…)discussed(alongwith)analyzed6/242.Thechiefaimpurposeobjectobjectiveofthepresentstudythisinvestigationtheresearchthesestudiesis(was/hasbeen/willbe)toobtain…toevaluate…tofindout…toestablish…toasses…7/243.ThepresentstudyTheabovestudyThisinvestigationwas(hasbeen)designedmadecarriedoutperformedattemptedwithaviewtoinordertotoclarify…determine…establish…pointout…demonstrate…8/244.OurstudiesTheirpioneerstudiesTheseinvestigationsaimtoclarify…determine…establish…demonstrate…provideevidenceforbringout…9/24惯用于摘要结尾部分1.ThestudieshavebeenperformedThesepioneerstudiesattemptedThestudiesinitiatedintheirlaboratoryseveralstudieswhichhavebeencarriedoutAllfurtherinvestigationsshowhaveshown(have)demonstratedthat…(have)suggested(have)revealed10/242.ThestudiesTheresultsThetestsTheresearches(have)shown(have)suggestedillustratedrevealedthat…11/24四、英文摘要翻译标准要防止按汉字字面意思逐字逐句生搬硬译，即防止“中国式英语”；领悟汉语中所隐含逻辑关系，利用适当关联词语对原文结构进行必要变动；注意中英文差异，遵照并使用英文习惯使用方法。12/24五、英文摘要翻译要求语法方面：多使用行为抽象名词与动词对应名词形式，有利于用少语言表示更多信息；用单个词代替词组。句法方面：利用长句多于短句，简单句多于复合句；汉字摘要惯用无人称句，长句出现也较频繁，翻译时，不应以汉语自然句来硬译，须重新安排。13/24五、英文摘要翻译要求时态方面：普通现在时：用于介绍研究目标、内容、结果、结论等客观事实；现在完成时：用来说明论文发展背景，表示已取得结果，已完成工作或项目；普通过去时：用于说明某一详细项目标发展情况，介绍已进行研究、试验等。14/24五、英文摘要翻译要求语态方面：被动可防止提及文章作者或动作执行者；突出摘要客观性；突出要表示相关信息尽可能不要混用各种语态，尤其不要在一个句子中混用语态。缩略语15/24Avoidtheuseof“it”and“this”example1Thepredictionwerecomparedwiththeexperimentalresults.Itwasfoundthat…(bad)Theresultsshowedthat…(better)Comparisonofthepredictedandexperimentalresultsshowsthat…(best)16/24Avoidtheuseof“it”and“this”example2ItisobviousthattheelectriccurrenthadlittleeffectontheconvectiveheattransfercoefficientbutiscausedlargechangesinTable1.(bad)ThedatainTable1showsthat…(good)17/24soresultedinacomparativelyshortprecoolingperiod,Donotuseexcessivelylongsentencesexample3

Thisisbecauseofahighdccurrentoralowambienttemperature,theprecoolingperiodwascomparativelyshortandthethermalpenetrationregionwouldthereforebesothenaturalconvectionwouldbeneglected.Awhichisequivalenttowasandwasthin,18/24example4本文经过试验方法对中温辐射条件下受体温度测量，利用能量守恒方程及斯蒂芬-波尔茨曼定律经过和黑体黑度比较将实际物体黑度计算出来，从而得出中温辐射时物体黑度是随温度升高而增大规律，并对试验进行模拟，得出了实际物体在中温条件下函数关系，并粗略对误差进行分析和改进。19/24本文经过试验方法对中温辐射条件下受体温度测量，Thisarticlethroughtheexperimentalmethodtothewarmradiationconditionundertheacceptortemperaturedetermination.Thispaper,underthemediatemperatureofthermalradiation,anactualsubstancetemperaturewasmeasuredexperimentally.20/24利用能量守恒方程及斯蒂芬-波尔茨曼定律经过和黑体黑度比较将实际物体黑度度计算出来，DefendsthehorizontalequationaswellasStefan-Boltzmannlaw;usingtheenergy,theBoltzmannlawthroughcalculateswiththeblackbodyblacknesscomparisonactualobjectblackness.Comparisonoftheblackbodyandactualsubstanceshowstheemittance,whichisbasedonconservationofenergyandStefan-Boltzmannlaw.21/24从而得出中温辐射时物体黑度是随温度升高而增大规律，Whenobtainsthewarmradiationobjectblacknessisarulewhichincreasesalongwiththetemperatureascension.Theresultwasobtainedthattheemittanceofactualsubstanceincreaseswithincreasingtemperature.22/24并对试验进行模拟，得出了实际物体在中温条件下函数关系，并粗略对误差进行分析和改进。Andtotestedcarriesonhasdrawnupandhasobtainedtheactualobjectandatthebeginningofslightlycarriesontheanalysisunderwarmconditionfunctiontotheerror,theappraisalandsameimprovements.