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第一段开头可以用到的句子:Gudrun'smindwentblank,andterrorcreptalloverherbody.Shecouldevenfeelsweatoozingfromherpalmsandforehead.Gudruntookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmdown,butthoseawfulthoughtsoflosingherlittlebrotherstilllingeredinhermind.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: ItwasnotuntilthenthatGudrunrememberedshehadpromisedtoplayhideandseekoncemore.Arnarmuststillbehidingandwaitingsomewhereinthehouse!Regretmixedwithfeartookholdofher,butshehadnomoretimetopanic.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Grippedbymountingstartle,Gudrunstiffened,attemptingtorecallwhereherlittlebrotherwaslocated.Itoccurredtoherthatshehadpromisedtoplayanotherroundofhideandseek.Totallyforgettingthis,shesprintedtorummageeveryinchofthehouse,butunfortunatelyinvain.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: 二 Gudrunhadbutterfliesinherstomach,yellingArnar1sname,buttherewasstillnoresponse.Shetriedtoturnonherbrain,buttheenginejustwouldn'tstart.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Gudrun'sheartsuddenlyfeltlikeitwasinherthroat.Itsuddenlyhitherthatshehadabsolutelyforgottenaboutthehideandseekgame!Tinglingwithastrangesenseofapprehension,GudrunimmediatelytookactiontosearchforArnar.Shedashedbackandforth,leftandright,butinvain.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Anemptybeddeclaredhisabsence.Gudrunfeltasifalltheairhadbeenstrangledoutofherforasecond,andimmediatelyitdawnedonherthat,rightnow,thefiveyearoldwasstillinthegameofhideandseek!Amiserablegroanescapedhermind.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Vividmemoriescamefloodingbacktolastevening,whenshereluctantlyagreedtoplaythehideandseekgame,whichwasherfiveyearoldnaughtybrother'smostfavoredgame.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: AshiverofdreadrandownGudrun'sspine,hermindblankasshecheckedherbrother'sbedagain.Itwasatruth—Arnarhaddisappeared,notadream.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Abruptly,Gudrunfeltcoldshiversrundownherspine.OnlythendidsherealizethatArnarwouldstillbehiding,butwhatwasworsewasthatshehadnoideawherehecouldbe.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Almostinstantly,pilesofmemoriesfromlastnightfloodedintohermind.Yes,bedtime,knitting,hideandseek...Gudrun'smindwenttrulyblank.Shepacedupanddowntheroom,clammyhandsfromanxietyandrestlessnesspullingatherhair.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Dominatedbyastrongsurgeofpanic,Gudruninstantlyrecalledtheirhidinggame,whichleftheralmostontheedgeofcraziness!Abrilliancepiercingthroughthewindowlikeawarningofurgentdanger,GudrunbusiedherselfinsearchingeverycornerthatArnarmayhide,butinvain.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Instantly,arippleofuneasinessstirredherheart."Arnar!"shecriedagain,hervoicemuchlouderthanbefore.Butallshecouldreceivewasanairofdeadsilence.Justthen,thereminiscenceofpromisingArnartoplayhideandseekfloodedback.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: 第一段结尾可以用到的句子:ItallclickedthatArnarmustbehidingrightunderher.Withtheflameofhoperekindlinginherheart,Gudrunrushedtoherbedroom,croucheddown・heartstringstight・andfortunatelyfoundArnar.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Gudruntidiedherthoughts,dartedtowardsherbedroom,andopenedthedoor.Shebentdowntocheckthespaceunderherbed,castingasighofrelief.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Hopeandexcitementstirringinsideher,shedashedtoherbedroom,pausedatherbed,andloweredherheadtopeeroverthegroundunderthebed,prayingArnarwouldbethere.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Immersedinregret,suddenlyArnar1swordsechoedinhermind,"LookformewhereIalwaysam."AnideaoccurredtoGudrun,andsherashlydashedtothespotunderherbed.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Withouthesitation,shedashedtothelivingroom,notdaringtopostponeaminute.AsGudrunclosedinonthechair,asmallfigurecameintoview.Shekneltdown,herbrother'sbodylooming.Itwasliterallyherlittlebrother.Suddenly,asentenceflashedacrosshermind,"LookformewhereIalwaysam.""Gotit!"sheexclaimedwithwildjoy.Afterbrainstormingforawhile,Gudrunheadedfortheundergroundroom.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Gudrunwasonthevergeofcollapsewhenlightningstruck.Shedashedintoherbedroom,hermindrecalling"whereIalwaysam,"andkneltdownnearherbed,peeringthroughtheglimmer.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Arnarwouldalwaysberightunderher.Gudrunsprintedbacktothechaironwhichshe'dbeensitting,knitting.Heartthumping,Gudrunfloppedontoherstomachandpeeredunderneaththechair.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Thebrighterbrilliancewitnessedherrackingherbrain,andsuddenlyherfacewasilluminatedbyasenseofenlightenment.DashingbacktoArnor'sroom,sheopenedthedoorsofhisclosetonebyone.Finally,shefoundArnar,breathingoutapalpablesighofrelief.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Itwaslikeaboltoflightningthatstruckaresponsivechordinsideher.Withnotimetodawdle,Gudrunmadeadashforthedeskinthelivingroom.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: 第二段开头可以用到的句子:Lookingathercuteandsafebrother,Gudrunfeltastrongburdenliftedfromhershoulders,andhersunkenheartfinallybegantobeat,asenseofreliefandecstasysurgingthroughherbody.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Heavingasighofrelief,GudrungaveanaffectionatepatonArnar1sshoulder,whispering,"Arnar,wakeup."Withoutfurtherdelay,Gudrunimmediatelywokehimup.Thefiveyearoldgiggledwithsleepyeyes,"Youfoundme."Buttherewasnotimetolaugh;GudrunhurriedlyheldupArnaranddressedhim.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: "Arnar,wakeup!"Sheheldthelongawaitedboyupasheslightlyopenedhisnarroweyes,murmuring,"Finallyfoundme,huh?Suchabadfinder."Gudrunsmiledbitterly,apologizingandexplainingtheemergency.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Withasmileonhisface,heseemedsocontentandhappythathewasnotbotheredbythefrighteningandlowrumblethatrolledoutside.Gudrun'sanxietyandangerwereeasedbythiscozyscene.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: HardlyhadGudrunspottedhimwhensheapproached,makingsurehewassafe.Shefelttheburdenonhershouldersrelease.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Stretchingoutherhands,GudrungentlypattedArnar'sback."It5stimetowakeup,Ifoundyou."However,ArnarwassosleepythatGudrun'svoicecouldn'twakehimup.HopingtobringArnarsafelytoherparents,Gudrunchosenottodisturbhim.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: HeavingalongsighofreliefGudrungentlywokehimup.Rubbinghismistyeyes,Arnarmadeouthissister'sfigureandsaidindelight,"Youfoundme!Ihidforsolong!"1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Inhalingdeeply,Gudrunmaskedheranxietybehindacalmexpression.Sheexclaimed,"Amar,wakeup."Hearingthewords,Arnaropenedhiseyes,barelyhavinganyideawhatwasgoingon."Sister,youwin!Nowlet'sgobacktosleep!"1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Relievedasshefelt,shewasremindedofherfinalmission.So,shecriedaloud,stretchedherarms,andpulledArnaroutofhispuzzleandsleepiness."Listen,it'sanemergency,butdobelieveme,"shestoutlysaid,hercheststickingoutasifshewerebraveandbold.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: BeholdingArnar'ssafeandsoundsituation,Gudrunletoutasighofreliefandapproachedherbrother.Rufflinghisheadtenderly,Gudrunwhispered,nArnar,wakeup."1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: 主旨升华的句子:SeeingAmarbrisklytrottowardsMom,Gudrunfeltasenseofrelief."Whereveryouare,I'lldefinitelyfindyou,"shethoughtdeterminedly.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: ItdawnedonherthatalthoughinordinarytimessheregardedArnaraspesky,deepdowninherheartshegavehimunconditionalaffectionandlove.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Boardingfishingboats,ourjourneytothemainlandwitnessedtheeruptionfromadistance,whoseradiantbrilliancewasindeedspellbinding.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Theeruptionhadbroughtoutthesoftestpartineveryone'sheart,connectingthefamilymembersandtheneighbors.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Thistime,Gudrundidnotforgetherbrotherandshoulderedtheresponsibilityofbeingasister.AllofGudrun'sfamilyaswellasMargretsurvivedastheyworkedtogetherlikeIcelanders.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3)你不认识的单词: Icelandershadalwaysworkedasone,especiallywhenagameofhideandseekhadtobecarriedoutduringaneruption.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: AwarmfeelingmingledwithhappinesscreptoverGudrun'smind.Holdinghimtotheroomanddressinghimswiftly,shebroughthimtotheharbor.Itallclickedintoplacethatnomatterwhattheysuffered,aslongasfamiliesweretogether,wherevertheywere,therewashomeandharbor.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Herfatherpattedherback,"Nicework,girl!"Gudrunrepliedwithafrustratedgrin.ItwasnotuntilthenthatGudrunrealizedthatanyresponsibilitycouldbehardtotake.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Theharborwasjustinsight,wheremanyacquaintanceshadbeenwaiting.Themoment,asshevividlyremembered,unleashedthebeliefthatwasstillengravedinherheart:"Wewillnotabandoneachotherbuthelpandwaituntiltheend."1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Everyonewouldhelptonight.Thoughthenightwastoughandamazing,Gudrunfeltrelievedandneverhesitatedtolendahelpinghandtothosewhoneededprompthelp.Shewasstronglyconvincedthatnothingwasmoresignificantthankeepingpatientandcalmandeverythingwouldgobetter.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: AburstofgigglesdraggedGudrunoutofherfear.ItwasArnar,hiseyestwinkling."Youhavefoundme."Gudrun,herfacebeamingwitharadiantsmile,leanedovertokisshim."I'malwayswithyou."1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Thistime,sheprotectedArnarsuccessfully.Theirsiblingbondwasalsoflourishingandblossoming!1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Greetedbythegentlebreezeofthenightocean,Gudrunfeltinthedepthofherheartthatfamilyisthelifejacketinthestormyseaoflife.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Windswhisperedbesideherears.Ultimately,theyreachedtheharborsuccessfullyandgottothemainlandsafely.WitnessingArnarsafeandsound,shegotmisty,"Whereveryouhid,Iwouldfindyou."1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Icelandersandveeredforthemainland.EverytimeGudrunrecalledthisadventure,shestillexperiencedlingeringfear.Notuntilthendidsherealizethesignificanceofresponsibilityandthatitwasthecertaintimeforhertogrowintoabigprotectivesister.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: 其他位置可以用到的句子:Underthespookymoonlight,theybravedthedreadfuldarkness,almosttrippingoverseveraltimeswhiletheirhandsclungtightly,injectinggreatpowerintothem.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Gudrungrewincreasinglyanxiousastimewentby.Afteraroundofsearching,Arnarwasstillnowheretobefound.Draggingherstepstoherroomandthrowingherselfonherbed,shewasclosetotears.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Bloodcurdling,shecatapultedherselftothelivingroomandransackedeverycorner.Butnomatterhowcarefullyshescouted,alleffortswereinvain.Suddenly,hardlyhadGudrunspottedthechairArnaroncehidunderneathwhenhishidingspotcrossedhermind.Arnaralwaystendedtohideunderneathher!1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Previousanxietysubmittedtoreliefasshepaddedtoherlittlebrother,pattedgentlyonhisshoulder,scoopedhimup,andcradledhiminherarms,whispering,"Arnar,wehavetogonow."Havinghelpedhimdressup,Ipackedsomebelongings,andthencarriedArnardartingtotheharbor.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: GudrunstrokedArnar1sheadtenderlyandaffectionately,tellinghimthatitwasnousetobetooworried,everythingwouldbeOK.HoldingArnar'shands,theywentintoArnar1sroomandpickedupsomeimportantitemsandthenpackedthemup.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Actingonimpulse,Gudrunsprangintoactionandslippedonhercoat,dartingdesperatelytothetoyroomwhereArnaralwayswas.Perspirationoozingfromherforehead,Gudrunwasonthevergeofcollapsingwiththefrighteningandlowrumbleandcouldn'thelpthinkingwhatifArnarwasnotstayingthere.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Thenextminuteswitnessedherfastpacedandswift・actiondressinghimupprocess.Atonemoment,evenGudrunwassurprisedathowcalmandposedshewasfacingthenaturalcatastrophewhilelookingafterherlittlebrother.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Chewingherlips,Gudruncouldn'thelpbutkeepregretting.Onpinsandneedles,shetoldthetruthtoMamma,withherheaddrooping.Insteadofscolding,MammajusttoldhertosearchthehousethoroughlybecauseshewasabouttofindMargret.Leftalone,Gudrun'smindwasgrayingwiththewordsthatArnarhadsaidtoherbeforeheleft.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3)你不认识的单词: ItwaswhenshegrabbedArnar'stinyhandandhurriedouttowardstheharborthatanastonishinglightflashedacrossthetranquilsky,andArnar'shandtightened.Muchassheknewtheeruptionwasabouttodescend,shekeptpullingdownthepathwithposedandsoftwordstocalmArnardown.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Shewasonthevergeofdespairwhenaglimmerofhopewascastuponher."Theclue!"shethoughtoutloud.Butwhatonearthwasit?Soengrossedwassheinherworkthatshemisseditall.Outsidethewindow,thejeweledskywasilluminatedbyroaringfire,andtheairwaschargedwithtension.Notimeforpanic.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Wearingafaintsmile,shebriefedhimonthesituationandourmansion,knowingthesignificance.Thelittleboynoddedhisheadwithseriousnessandquicklygotdressedwithhissister'sassistance.Acpaniedbytheblazecausedbydisaster,Gudruncuddledherbrotherandrushedtotheharbor.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Audencaughtholdofhisarmandshookhimheavily,callinghisnameconstantly."Arnar!"Hardlyandslowly,Arnaropenedhiseyes,recognizedhissister,"Whydidyoufindmesoslowly?""Thereisnotimetoexplain!"Sisterembracedhimtightlyandtookholdofhishand,startingtorun.Afterthelongdistanceofrushing,therewaslikeamountainonhershouldertolimithersteps.1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: Justthen,thereminiscenceofherpromisingArnartoplayhideandseekfloodedback.Gudrunembarkedonimmersingherselfinawhirlpoolofrepentance.Sheshouldn'thaveagreedtothissillyrequest.Everynookandcornershesearched,butnotraceshowedArnarwasthere.GudrunwasnearlyonthevergeofcollapsewhenArnar1swordsresoundedinherears:"LookformewhereIalwaysam."1) 你觉得好的表达: 2) 你觉得好的句式: 3) 你不认识的单词: 1.主要人物:①Gudrun:eldersister②Arnar:afiveyearoldbrother③Mamma④Pabbi⑤Margret2.视角:第三人称3.主题:人与社会4.前文故事梗概:

当天爸爸妈妈外出,把照顾弟弟Arnar的事交给了姐姐Gudrun。弟弟Arnar总是想着办法要跟姐姐Gudrun玩捉迷藏,而姐姐一心扑在编织上。在弟弟的纠缠下,终于漫不经心地答应。但她完全忘记了去找弟弟一事。不知是妈妈声音中的紧急还是外面令人胆战心惊的隆隆声让她彻底醒了。妈妈边收拾边说催促Gudrun带弟弟Arnar去港口有渔船会带他们离开这个岛,而她还要去帮忙独居邻居Margret。于是,当Gudrun跑到弟弟的房间,掀开被子的一刻,她傻眼了。……5.续写安排:第一段:Arnarwasn’tthere!①(与前一句衔接)Gudrun有什么反应②(过渡)接下去,她该怎么办③(承上启下)最终,顺着弟弟曾经说的clue找到了他第二段:There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.①(与前一句衔接)姐姐Gudrun想了些什么,做了些什么②(过渡)姐弟俩是怎样到港口的③(收尾)体现姐弟情深1.下水作文:120+119Arnarwasn’tthere!TheunexpectedsightleftGudrundumbfounded,wonderingwhereherlittlebrothercouldhavegoneinthiscriticalmoment.Astherewasverylimitedtimeleftforthemtoleavetheisland,Gudrunbecameincreasinglyanxious,worriedthatshenotcouldfindhisbrotherandtakehimtotheharborsafeandsound.Shecalledhisnamemadly,butnoresponse.Shesearchedeverypossiblecorner,butnosignofArnar.

“IshouldhavetakencareofArnar,butIjust...”

sheblamedherself.Justattheverymoment,Arnar’swords

“LookformewhereIalwaysam.”

flashedintohermind.

“Hemustbethere!”

Twoatatime,Gudrunrushedintoherbedroomandlookedunderthebed.There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.Obviously,hewasstillinhissweetdream,withoutanyknowledgeofwhatwashappeningoutside.Seeingthis,Gudrunfeltasurgeofguiltwellingupinherheart.Immediately,shescoopedArnarup,andranallthewaytotheharbor,whereherparentsandMargretwerewaitinganxiously.Onceaboard,GudrunputArnarintohermother’sarmsandcouldn’twaittosharetheincident,stillpantingandpuffing.

“Sorry,butI...”

shemurmured.Beforeshecouldfinish,dadalreadygatheredherintohiswarmarms,reallygladthatGudrun’spanywithArnarandherquickthinkingandactionsavedArnar.AndArnar,stillinhissoundsleep,waswhisperingconstantly,

“LookformewhereIalwaysam.”2.参考范文:110+131Arnarwasn’tthere!AknotofguiltformedinGudrun’sstomachasshebegantorememberArnarhadrunofftohideonelasttime.Soonafter,shehadfallenintoherownbed,pletelyforgettingthegameandherbrother.“Arnar!”Gudrunscreamed,lookingunderthechild’sbedandinhiscloset.TearsburnedhercheeksasthenoiseoutsideremindedGudrunthatthiswasnogame.Sheraisedafoottostampherfuryinto

thefloor,thenfrozeasArnar’scluesuddenlyechoedthroughhermind:“He’salwaysrightunderme!”Withashoutshedashedbacktoherownroom.Fallingtothefloor,Gudrunpeeredunderherbed.There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.Withoutthinkingtwice,

Gudrundraggedhimout,scoopedhimupandrushedtotheharbor.HardlyhadshearrivedtherebreathlesslywhenshespottedheranxiousparentsandMargret.Hourslater,Pabbi’sboatpulleduptoaharboronthemainland.Thedeck

wasbustlingwith

activityastheislanderspreparedtogoashore.Arnar,stillclutchinghisbear,sleptpeacefullyinGudrun’slap.Gudrunshookhimtowakeupgently.Arnarrubbedhiseyes,strugglingtostandupandlosthisbalance,causingbothofthemtostumble.“I’malwaysrightunderyou,”Arnarwhimpered,halfasleep.Gudrunsmiledandbenttowhisperinhisear.“Nevermind.You’rejustwhereyoubelong.”Thelittleboyreachedforherhand.Gudrungraspeditfirmly.Together,theyfollowedMammaofftheboat.3.rnarwasn’tthere!“Whereishe?”Afeelingofguiltspreadoverher,forsoabsorbedwassheinherknittingthatsheforgotthegamewithArnar.“Whereareyou?Arnar!”sheshoutedhystericallybuttherecamenoanswer,whichaddedhernervousness.Recallingwhathadhappenedhoursbefore,suddenlysherememberedwhatArnarhadsaidtoherbeforehehidhimself.Aglimmerofhopeflashedinhermind.GudrundashedoutofArnar’sroom,hurriedstraightbacktoherownroom,andkneltdowntohaveagoodsearchrightunderherbed.(90words)There,curledaroundawornstuffedbear,wasArnar,soundasleep.Withagreatrelief,Gudruncrawledinanddraggedhimoutwithoutanyhesitation.BeforeArnarknewwhatwashappening,Gudrunhadcarriedhimonherbackandrushedoutwithallofherstrength.Despiteofthestrangebrillianceandfrighteningrumble,theywastednotimebeforetheyarrivedattheport,wherePabbiandMamma,aswellastheirneighbors,werereadytobeintheboatwaitingforthem.Headingtowardsthemainland,GudrungraspedArnar’sarmsfirmlyforfearthatshemightlosehimforever.(89words)下水作文坚叔Dearteachersandschoolmates,AstheInternationalVolunteerDayising,we’llorganizeaseriesofactivitiestocelebrateitwiththethemeof“Mutualassistanceandcare”.ThoseactivitieswillfallintheearlyDecember,rangingfromvisitingtheelderlyinthenursinghouse,anattractivecharitysaleforthechildreninruralareas,totheenvironmentalprotectioneducation,etc.Surely,we’llbringmorehappinesstotheelderlyandpoorchildren,raisepeople’sawarenessofprotectingtheenvironmentandinvolvemorepeopleinthevoluntaryworkforthesocialresponsibility.We’restronglycallingoneverybodytoparticipateintheactivitiestospreadthevolunteeringspirit.(102words)TheStudents’Union参考范文TocelebratetheupingInternationalVolunteerDay,weareappealingtoallofyoufortheactiveparticipationofavolunteercampaignthemed“mutualassistanceandcare”.Thecampaign,whichfallsonDecember5th,willincludevariousactivities.Youareencouragedtovisitthelocalnursinghometobringtheelderlyresidentsfunandlaughter.Afundraisingeventforthelocalcharitywillbearranged,wherediversehandmadecraftsandabundantsecondhanditemsdonatedbythevolunteerswillbeonsale.Throughtheseactivities,notonlywillthespiritofmutualassistanceandcarebepromotedbutalsooursenseofsocialresponsibilitywillbeenhanced.Westronglyadvocateeverybodymakingjointeffortstospreadkindnessandpassionforthebettermentofoursociety.(124words)下水InordertowelethearrivaloftheInternationalVolunteerDay,theStudents’Unionwillholdavolunteeractivitywiththethemeof"mutualassistanceandcare".TheactivityfallsonthisSaturday.Inthemorning,wearescheduledtogotothenursinghome,cleaningtherooms,chattingwiththeelderly,singinganddancingtoentertainthem,sothattheywillfeelthewarmthofhome.Theafternoonwillwitnessourcharitysaletoraisemoneyforthechildreninthemountains,helpingthemgothroughthewinter.Thevolunteeractivitywillmakeallthedifference.Together,let'sparticipateinitinthenameof"mutualassistanceandcare"!(110words)24届浙江高三下学期新阵地联盟高分应用文语料汇编假如你是某学生会主席李华,为了迎接国际志愿者日(InternationalVolunteerDay)的到来,请你以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封英文倡议信,号召参加主题为"互助,互爱"(mutualassistanceandcare)的志愿者活动。内容包括:1.倡议目的;2.活动内容;3.呼吁参加。大家在背诵这些句子之前,先从“要点”和“表达”两个方面赏析这些句子,并在给定的横线上摘录自己的想法。比如从表达的角度思考,我们来赏析一下“开头可以用到的句子”的“3”:1.interpersonalassistance:人与人之间的帮助;人际互助,可以充当名词结构替换动词结构l,helpeachother"2.inanticipationof:预期,期待(某事发生或某人到来),可以替换"anticipate/expect"Heboughtextrafoodinanticipationofmorepeopleingthanhe'dinvited.他预料来的客人会比邀请的多,就多买了食物。3.wellstructured:结构良好,指具有清晰、有条理的组织和布局的事物。复合词,值得积累。A.开头可以用到的句子:1.InanefforttoembracetheupingInternationalVolunteerDayandbridgethegapofsocialisolation,Iurgeyoutoactivelyparticipateinthevolunteeractivitythemed"mutualassistanceandcare."2.Withtheaimofraisingstudents'awarenessofmutualassistanceandcare,theStudents5Unionappealstoeveryonetoparticipateinthevolunteeractivityrelatedtothistheme.3.Withthesincereintentionofenhancingawarenessofinterpersonalassistanceandkindnessinmind,andinanticipationoftheupingInternationalVolunteerDay,awellstructuredactivitytitled"mutualassistanceandcare"isscheduled.整理区:以上句子,有哪些点是“我”在写开头的时候没有考虑到的?B.''倡议目的"可以用到的句子:不要杂糅!1.WithInternationalVolunteerDayapproaching,avolunteeractivitythemed"mutualassistanceandcare"issettobeinitiatedinourschool,aimedatfosteringourvirtueofkindnessandcultivatingawarmatmospherearoundus.2.Asthenamesuggests,thisactivityaimstostrengthenbondsbetweendifferentpeopleandcultivateourawarenessofrespectingeachother.3.Notonlycantheseactivitiestranscendthebarrierbetweenindividuals,buttheyalsoprovideanenchantingwaytoenhanceyoursociabilityandsenseofresponsibility.整理区:以上句子,有哪些点是“我”在写“倡议目的”的时候没有考虑到的?以上句子,有哪些表达是我不会的,且值得积累的?C.''活动内容"可以用到的句子:1.Theclimaxwilldefinitelybethereflectionpartofyourclassmeeting,duringwhichyouwillhavetheopportunitytosharethejoyofhelpingothersandt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