未来与梦想 热点 04 -中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点04未来与梦想一、话题作文1．中国的高速发展离不开每个人的努力，科技的飞跃，社会的进步和文化的传播都离不开一个个优秀的个体。假如你是李华，请用“Mydreamjob”为题，写一篇英语文章向校报投稿。内容包括：1.阐述你将来想做什么样的工作。2.能为我们祖国做哪些贡献。注意事项：1.90字左右。2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。Mydreamjob_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MydreamjobAsthesayinggoes,“Greatdreamsmakeabrightfuture.”Mydreamistobeadoctorinthefuture.Ithinkit’sgreattobeadoctor.WhenIseesickpeopleinthehospitaloronTV,Ican’thelpworryingaboutthemandwanttogivethemahand.IfIbecomeadoctor,Icanhelpmanypatientsgetwell.What’smore,beingadoctorisn’tonlyabouttreatingpatients.Doctorsalsodoresearchandexperimentssothattheycanmakeacontributiontomedicalserviceofourcountry.I’llmakeanefforttobecomeadoctor.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为一篇写梦想中的工作的记叙文。②时态：本文应用一般现在时和一般将来时两种时态。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出文章的主题：我梦想中的工作是什么。第二步，介绍喜欢这份工作的理由，以及这份工作能为祖国做出什么贡献。第三步，总结全文，表达原望。[亮点词汇]①asthesayinggoes俗话说②can’thelpdoingsth.忍不住做某事③makeacontributionto…为……做出贡献[高分句型]①WhenIseesickpeopleinthehospitaloronTV,Ican’thelpworryingaboutthemandwanttogivethemahand.(when引导的时间状语从句)②IfIbecomeadoctor,Icanhelpmanypatientsgetwell.(if引导的条件状语从句)2．三年的初中生活就要结束了，崭新的高中学习即将到来，回顾过去，你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾，展望未来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“UnforgettableMemories”为题，给英文报纸《21stCentury》“青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。1.内容要包含对过去的回忆和对未来的憧憬；2.文中不要出现你的真实姓名，班级和学校名称；3.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。UnforgettableMemoriesHowtimeflies!I’mgoingtofinishmyjuniormiddleschoolsoon._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】UnforgettableMemoriesHowtimeflies!I’mgoingtofinishmyjuniormiddleschoolsoon.Lotsofmemoriesleftinmymind.Teachers,classmates,hardworkandaboveallfriendshipstayinmymind.Lookingback,Ihavegonethrougheitherthejoyofsuccessorthepainsoffailure.Teachersarefriendlytousinlifeandalwaysstrictwithusinstudy.Classmatesandfriendshelpmesomuch.WiththeirhelpI’vemadegreatprogress.ButI’macarelessboy.AndIalwaysmakemistakeswhichcanbeavoided.Seniorhighschoolisanewbeginninganditgivesmeachancetoovercomemyshortcomings.Asitissaid,“Itisnotourabilitiesthatshowwhatwetrulyare,butourchoice.”Thetwo-monthholidaywillalsoprovidemethefreedomtothinkoverandmakeupmymindtodoitbetterinthefuture.AndIbelieveIcandoit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图。内容是以“UnforgettableMemories”为题，给英文报纸21stCentury“青春校园”栏目写一篇征文，介绍一下你对过去的回忆和对未来的憧憬。第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先承接短文开头，从学业有成、师生情谊以及最大的遗憾和对未来的憧憬几个方面详细地叙述。第三步：书写结语。表示“我相信我能做到。”[亮点词汇]①lotsof许多②stayinmymind留在我的脑海里③gothrough通过④be

friendlyto对……友好⑤bestrictwith对某人要求严格⑥thinkover仔细考虑

[高分句型]①Howtimeflies!（how引起的感叹句）

②

Teachersarefriendlytousinlifeandalwaysstrictwithusinstudy.

（and连接的并列句）③AndIalwaysmakemistakeswhichcanbeavoided.（which引导的定语从句）④Asitissaid,“Itisnotourabilitiesthatshowwhatwetrulyare,butourchoice.”（谚语的应用）

⑤Thetwo-monthholidaywillalsoprovidemethefreedomtothinkoverandmakeupmymindtodoitbetterinthefuture.（and连接的并列句）二、材料作文3．梦想是一个人的信念与支撑，你有什么样的梦想。请你写一篇短文来阐述你未来的梦想工作，以及如何去实现它。要求：1.词数不少于80词，2.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：IwanttobeanEnglishteacherwhenIgrowup.I’mgoingtostudyreallyhardespeciallytheEnglishsubject.NowIamveryinterestedinEnglish.AndmyEnglishteacherisveryfunny.Shealwayshasgreatwaystomakeherclasseslively.Iwanttolearnfromherandbecomeahumorousteacherjustlikeher.Iknowitrequiresmuchtobeanexcellentteacher.ButIwilltrymybest.Ihopemydreamwillcometruesomeday.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”及“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明自己梦想的工作；第二步，具体说明自己如何实现它。[亮点词汇]①especially尤其②excellent优秀的[高分句型]①Ihopemydreamwillcometruesomeday.（省略“that”的宾语从句）4．学校英语报举行“未来之城”征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。短文需包括下图所以提示内容。注意：1.词数不少于80词；2.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名词。OurCityoftheFutureWhatwillourcitybelikein2050?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

OurCityoftheFuture

Whatwillourcitybelikein2050?Ithinkitwillbequitedifferentfromnow.Thelivingenvironmentwillbegreatlyimprovedinthefollowingways.

Thehouseswillbebothgreenandsmart.Everythingwillbemadebyenvironmental-friendlymaterials.What’smore,thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.Mostofthetimepeoplewillworkathomeandtheywillhavefewerworkinghoursbecauseofnewtechnologies.Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.Youcantakedifferentkindsoftransportations,suchastheflyingbuses:andthedriverlesscars.ThemostexcitingthingforstudentswillbethewidelyuseofE-booksandVRtechnologyatschool.Asaresult,therewillbepaperlessexamsandmorefuninlearning.

Ourcityin2050willbefullofhopeandweshouldworkhardtorealizeit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：根据所给提示介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍未来城市的房子；第二步，介绍未来城市的工作和交通情况；第三步，最后介绍未来的学校。[亮点词汇]①What’smore而且②suchas比如③Asaresult结果④befullof充满[高分句型]①thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）②Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.（if引导的条件状语从句）5．假如你是李华，马上面临初中毕业，迎接你的将是充满挑战却又让你满怀期待的高中生活。请根据以下图表信息规划一下你的高中学习和生活。要求：(1)参考提示语，可适当发挥；(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；(3)文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；(4)词数：不少于90词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)MyLifeinSeniorHighSchoolMynameisLiHua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyLifeinSeniorHighSchoolMynameisLiHua.Inthreemonths,I’llfinishmyjuniorschoolyearsandgotoseniorschoolforanothernewstartinlife.Firstofall,Imuststudyhard.BecauseonlybygoingtoagooduniversitycanIhavebetterjobopportunitiesinthefuture.Atthesametime,Ialsowanttoexercisehard.Ilikeplayingbasketballverymuch.AslongasIhavetime,Iwillspendtimereadingeverydaytoenrichmyknowledge.Iwillalsousetheweekendtodovolunteeractivitiesoutsidetohelpthoseinneed.AsfarasIamconcerned,mylifeinseniorhighschoolwillbemuchmorecolorfulthanbefore.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，主要从学习计划、运动以及爱好等方面来介绍高中的生活。具体内容要包含所给提示，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称为主，主体时态为一般将来时，描述现在的情况可以使用一般现在时。文章采用三段式，第一段介绍即将要开始高中生活；第二段从学习、运动以及爱好等方面逐一介绍自己的计划；最后一段总结，展望自己的高中生活。6．每个人都憧憬美好未来，请以“MyFutureLife”为题写一篇80词（不含已给的部分）左右的短文，要求短文科学合理，符合逻辑。MyFutureLifeMylifewillbehappyandsuccessfulinthefuture.Twentyyearslater,Iwillbeabout35yearsold._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyFutureLifeMylifewillbehappyandsuccessfulinthefuture.Twentyyearslater,Iwillbeabout35yearsold.Iwillhaveareallyhappyfamily.Therewillbesixpeopleinmyfamily,myparents,myhandsomehusbandandtwolovelykids.Mydreamwillalsocometrue.What’smydream?IwillbeanastronautasWangYaping.FlyingintheskywithaspaceshiphasbeenmydreamsinceIwasyoung.Mrs.Wangismyidealmodel.AtthattimeIwillcommunicatewithherinthesky.Myparentswillbelivingahealthylifewiththeirgrandchildren.MytwokidswillstudyhardandreadbothChineseandEnglishalot.Myfamilywillleadabetterlifewithourhardwork.Lifewillbereallyhappyforme!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“MyFutureLife”“我的未来生活”为题进行写作，描述未来的生活情况，可以大胆想象，但要科学合理，并且符合逻辑。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文采取一段式写作，开头已经给出，接着介绍未来的家庭情况，自己实现了什么梦想以及家人的生活情况。写作时做到无语法和标点错误。7．随着我国航天技术的发展和进步，实行太空移民不再是梦。请根据以下提示，写一篇文章介绍未来太空生活。1.衣服可以检测身体健康2.住在智能房子，有机器人做家务3.驾驶飞船，用太阳能行驶4.自由发挥两点内容5.你的感受注意：1词数：80字左右（文章开头己给出，不计入词数）2短文必须包含所有要点，并适当发挥；3文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。SpacelifeinthefutureSpacemigrationiscomingsoon.Iwouldliketointroducethespacelifeinthefuture._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】SpacelifeinthefutureSpacemigrationiscomingsoon.Iwouldliketointroducethespacelifeinthefuture.Inthefuture,theclotheswewearcandetectourphysicalhealthsothatwecanknowourhealthatanytime.Andwewillliveinasmarthousewithrobotsdoinghousework.Wewillhavemoretimetodowhatweareinterestedin.What’smore,wewillflyaspaceshiprunningonsolarpower.Atlast,therewillbenopollutioninthespaceandtherewillbemuchbetterlivingenvironment.Ithinkthiskindoflifeisverywonderful.I’mlookingforwardtoit.【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是以“Spacelifeinthefuture”为题，并结合所提示内容，介绍未来的太空生活，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段重点介绍未来的太空生活；第三段介绍自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。8．今年三月份，中国国家宇航员王亚平及她的伙伴们又一次给全国的孩子们带来了别开生面的天宫课堂，一个个有趣的物理实验激发了大家探索太空的兴趣。假设你是李雷，请你以“MySpaceDream”为题写一篇英文短文谈谈你的观后感，并使用以下提示问题，词数80左右。1.Doyouwanttoexplorespace?2.Whatwillyoudoifyouareinspace?3.Howwillyouachieveyourspacedream?注意事项：1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。MySpaceDreamIt’sreportedthatmillionsofstudentsandteacherswatchedthespacelecturehostedbyWangYapingandherpartnersinthespacestationlately.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：MySpaceDreamIt’sreportedthatmillionsofstudentsandteacherswatchedthespacelecturehostedbyWangYapingandherpartnersinthespacestationlately.Ihaveadream.IwanttobecomeanastronautwhenIgrowup.Iameagertoexplorespaceinthefuture.Oneday,IwilltakeaspacewalklikeWangYaping.Iwillobservemanyunknownplanetscarefully.IwillhaveaviewofChinafromourmysteriousspace.Asfornow,Iplantostudyscienceknowledgewell,strengthenmybodyandmakepreparationsforrealizingmyspacedream.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“MySpaceDream”为题，根据提示问题写短文谈谈自己的太空梦。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。可分为三段式写作：第一段用已给出开头；第二段介绍自己的太空梦及将会在太空中做什么；第三段介绍将如何实现自己的太空梦。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。9．“Iftheyoutharewise,thecountrywillbewise.Iftheyoutharestrong,thecountrywillbestrong.”“少年智则国智，少年强则国强。”出自梁启超的《少年中国说》。作为当代青少年，应该努力学习，不断进取，做一个坚强、自信、独立的少年，以期不久的将来报效祖国。那么，在成长过程中青少年应该做什么？怎么做？请你根据下表提示以“TheStrongYouthMakeaStrongCountry”为题，写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法。除了提示中的内容，请你至少再补充一条。buildupourbodiesby...keepstrongandhealthydevelopsomeinterests,forexamples...;makeourselvesfullydevelopeddohousework,suchas...learntobeindependent(独立的)（自拟1个观点）参考词汇：confident自信的，successful成功的,failure失败，makeprogress进步注意：①主题突出，要点齐全，条理清晰，语言规范；②可适当发挥，80词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数；③文中不得出现真实的学校、姓名等信息。TheStrongYouthMakeaStrongCountryAsteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.Weshoulddevelopourselvesfully.Buthow?Hereismyopinion._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】TheStrongYouthMakeaStrongCountryAsteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.Weshoulddevelopourselvesfully.Buthow?Hereismyopinion.Basically,weshouldbuildupourbodiesbytakingsomeexercise,suchasrunning,swimmingandsoon.Inthisway,wecankeepourselvesstrongandhealthy.What’smore,developingsomeinterestsisalsoagoodway.Wecanlearntoplaythepiano,singsongsandsoon.Inaddition,Ithinkit’sourdutytodosomehouseworkathome.Thenourparentscanliveaneasierlife.Also,bydoingthis,wecanlearntobeindependent.Lastly,wemuststudyhardbecauseknowledgeispower.Themorebooksweread,themorepowerfulwe’llbe.Thus,wecanhelpbuildourcountryandenjoyabetterlife.Ifwedothesethingswell,wewillbeabletogrowupafullydevelopedperson.【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以以“TheStrongYouthMakeaStrongCountry”为题，根据要点提示写一篇短文介绍青少年如何做才可以成为一个坚强、自信、独立的少年。2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时；人称主要以第一人称为主；在写作时要根据要点，从锻炼、培养兴趣、做家务以及学习四个方面进行叙述，注意要内容完整，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，无标点和语法错误。10．你校英文报正开展以“未来的生活”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下图文提示写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你对未来生活的设想。要求：1.所写内容包括以上要点；2.内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.100词左右；标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。LifeintheFutureWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,lifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferent._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LifeintheFutureWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,lifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferent.Theenvironmentwillbenicer.Thetreeswillbegreenerandriverswillbeclearer.Thereisnoheavytrafficanymoreontheearth.Buildingslikehouses,hospitalswillbebuiltinotherplanetsorunderthesea.Sothereisenoughspaceforpeopleontheearth.Robotswilldodangerousandhardworkinsteadofhumanbeings.Theymakepeoplehavemoretimetorelaxandenjoytheirlives.Theclothesthatwewearwillchangetheircolorsandstylesaccordingtotheweatherandourmoods.We’llhaveeasierandmoreconvenientlivesinthefuture.【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知要求以“未来的生活”为主题，分别从环境、交通、植物、建筑、机器人以及危险工作等几个方面展开讨论，并且自己可以适当地添加一些合理内容，使文章内容更加丰富。2.写作指导：这是一篇围绕未来生活的作文，时态以一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。题干开头已经给出，写作根据提示内容依次介绍即可，中还另外介绍未来人们的衣着变化，充实文章内容。11．一家英语杂志社向中学生征文，主题是“二十年后的我”。请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文。（1）工作；（2）家庭；（3）业余生活。注意：（1）词数80～100；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；（4）短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikein20years._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikein20years.Withnodoubt,mylifewillbeverydifferent.I’llbethirty-fiveyearsoldbythen.IhopeI’llworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner,enjoyingmyworkandgettingalongwellwithmyfellowworkers.Atthattime,probablyw