2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句-新冠病毒、健康饮食时事热点

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新冠病毒健康饮食（时事热点）

2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句

【读后续写】

1.（2022•河北•校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完

整的短文。

Ameliaworkedasanursefor5yearsandlovedit.Shelovedhelpingothersandfoundthejobdemanding,but

alwaysrewarding.

ThebeginningofMarchwasfarfromoptimisticbecausebythemiddleofMarchtherewerejustoverfifty

patientsinthehospitalwiththesameillness.Mostwereonventilators（呼吸机）,whichhelpedthemtobreathe.Then

onthe23rdofthatmonththerewasanationallockdown,whichmeantmostplaceswereclosedapartfrom

supermarketsandessentialshops.Peoplecouldonlyleavetheirhomesforashortwhiletodoshoppingortopick

upmedication.Allthestreetswereempty.

Ameliaarrivedatworkanhourbeforehershiftstarted.Thejourneytherewasquickerthannormal,because

shewastheonlyoneonthebus.Andobeyingthenewrules,sheworehermasktheentiretrip.

Anothershiftoverwith,shewasexhausted.Thebusturnedupontime.Shegotonandnoticedadifferent

personatthewheel."Where'stheusualdriver?”sheaskedpolitely.

Theyoungermanlookedsad,andrepliedgrimly（严肃地）,“Thevirusgothim,Miss.Hewasafriendof

mine."Ameliawasshockedbythenews.'Tmsosorrytohearthis.Hewasalovelyman.""Yes,hewas,“the

driversaid.

Sheshowedherticketandheadedtoaseat.Atthebackofthebuswasthewomansherecognizedfrom

somewhere.Onthejourneyhomeeverystreetwasquiet.

Ameliaputonherearphonesandclosedhereyes.Theterribleeventsofthatdaywerenowbecomingadistant

memory.

AweeklateronaThursdayAmelialeftthehospitalabitlaterthannormal,asithadbeenaverybusyday.

She'dworkedthelastfourdaysandjustwantedtogohome.Sherealizedthechanceofcatchinghernonnalbus

wouldnothappen.Thenextoneshouldarriveshortly.Ameliaglancedatherwatchandthebuswastwelveminutes

late.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Suddenlyfromthedoorwaysofmosthousesonthestreetappearedfamiliesastheyclapped.

AndatthatmomentAmeliafeltproudofeveryonesheworkedwith.

［答案】Suddenlyfromthedoorwaysofmosthousesonthestreetappearedfamiliesastheyclapped.Ameliadidn't

understandwhatwasgoingon.Whatwerethesepeopledoing?Thenitbecameevidentlyclearasonefamilyhelda

bigsignwhichread:Thankyou,doctorsandnurses!Tearsranfromhereyes.Thiswasoneoftheloveliestthings

she'deverwitnessed.Fromallaround,thenoiseechoedupanddowneverystreetinthecity.Hornsblaredand

peopleshouted,uWeloveyou,doctorsandnurses?,

AndatthatmomentAmeliafeltproudofeveryonesheworkedwith.Shewasthankfultoallthekeyworkersin

whateverroletheyplayed.Andmostofall,shewasproudofherselfforeverythingshe'daccomplishedintheworst

yearpossible,andlivedwithafirmdeterminationthatshewouldkeeponhelpingothersintheirhourofneed.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述「身为护士的阿米莉亚目睹了暖心的一幕：疫情期间，民众自发组

织了一场向医护人员致谢的活动。

【详解】I.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“突然间，街上的大多数房屋的门口出现了家家户户在鼓掌。“可知，第一段可描写阿米

莉亚对眼前这一幕很不解，当看到致谢标语后感动万分以及街上的致谢活动。

②由第二段首句内容“那一刻，阿米莉亚为与她共事的每一个人感到骄傲。”可知，第二段可描写阿米莉亚为

自己和同事们感到骄傲并决心继续帮助有需要的人们。

2.续写线索：不解——致谢标语——感动——致谢活动——骄傲——继续提供帮助

3.词汇激活

行为类

①大喊：shout/cry

②.明白、/解：understand/beawareof

③.帮助：help/assist

情绪类

①.感动：tearsranfromhereyes/bemoved

②.感到骄傲:feelproudof/takepridein

【点睛】[高分句型1].Thenitbecameevidentlyclearasonefamilyheldabigsignwhichread:Thankyou,doctors

andnurses!（运用了as引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2].Andmostofall,shewasproudofherselfforeverythingshe'daccomplishedintheworstyear

possible,andlivedwithafirmdeterminationthatshewouldkeeponhelpingothersintheirhourofneed.（运用了

省略了关系代词的定语从句和that引导的同位语从句）

2.（2022秋•浙江•高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成

一篇完整的短文。

Mywife,Megan,andIwentouttodinnerwithanoldfriendwhowehadnotseenforawhile.Therehadbeen

sometalkofCOVID-19onthenews,butitwasearlyintheoutbreakandpeoplewerestillgoingabouttheirdaily

routines.Eventhougheveryoneingroupfeltperfectly,wetookprecautions（预防）：wewashedourhandswithsoap

andusedhandsanitizer（洗手液）,didnotsharefood,andhadnosignificantlyclosecontact.

Afewdayslater,ourfriendcalledandtoldusthatshehadtestedpositiveforthecoronavirus.Shehadfelt

somemildsymptomsforadayorsoafterthatdinnerandwasabletobetestedbecausesheisadoctor.Onthe

followingday,Istartedtofeelalittletiredandmyheadwasabitcloudy.Idecidedtostayinthemasterbedroom

awayfromtherestofmyfamily.Thenextmorning,Iwokeupwitha39-degreefever.Thatwaswhenwerealized

thatImighthavecaughtthevirusfromourfriend.

Atonce,Megancalledourstate'scoronavirushotline,whothencalledinourprimarycaredoctorandthehead

ofourlocalhospitalsystem'scoronavirusteam.Weexplainedthatwehadbeenincontactwithsomeonewhohad

beentestedpositive,andIwashavingsymptoms.Theyquicklyapprovedmetoreceiveatestatanurgentcare

centerlocated5kilometer'sdrivefrommyhouse.Theresultmademyheartsink-Iwasalsotestedpositive,andthe

localhospitaldidn'thavethefacilitiesformydisease.Asamildcase,Iwasrecommendedtostayhomeand

quarantine（隔离）myself.

Followingthedoctor'sadvice,MeganandIquarantinedourselvesandourkids.Withmysymptoms

developing,Istartedisolationinthebedroom,andtheonlyinteractionIhadwithMeganwaswhenshebroughtin

food.Shesleptonasmallcouchinourhomeofficeawayfromthekids,rooms.Shealsominimizedhercontact

withourkidsincaseshewascarryingthevirus.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Para.l:

Wedecidedtocalleveryonewehadcontactedoverthecourseofthepastweek.

Para.2:

Thoughworriedabouttheseriousnessofthevirus,/knew1hadtobebrave

【答案】Para.1：

Wedecidedtocalleveryonewehadcontactedoverthecourseofthepastweek.Meganinsistedweshouldlet

themknowthatIhadtestedpositive.Hardasitwastoinformpeoplethatwemighthavegiventhemthe

coronavirus,itwastheresponsiblethingtodo.Toourpleasantsurprise,allofourfriendsshowedtheir

understandingandsupportuponhearingthenews.Tocheerusup,oneofmywife'sbestfriendsevenbakedacake

withtheletters“StayStrong^^onitanddeliveredittoourfrontdoor.

Para.2：

Thoughworriedabouttheseriousnessofthevirus,IknewIhadtobebrave.Imadesuretogetplentyofrest

anddidsomeexercisetostayashealthyasIcould.IalsomanagedtoeasetheworriesofMeganandourkids

duringourquarantinebyspendingmoretimedoingonlinevideo-chatswiththem.Withinthefollowingweek,my

feverstartedtofadeandIcouldfeelmyheadclearing.Thenexttestshowedacheeringresult.Itcameback

negative.Haditnotbeenfortheloveandcarefromthosearoundme,Iwouldn'thavemadeit.

【导语】本文以新冠病毒为线索，作者和妻子与一个很久未见的朋友一起吃了一顿饭，不幸的是，吃完饭

不久朋友打电话说自己新冠测出来是阳性。在接下来的几天，作者也出现了发烧的症状，去医院检查也是

呈阳性，但是却被医院告知要回家居家隔离。因此作者便回家将自己隔离起来，并且不跟妻子和孩子接触,

避免他们也被感染上。

【详解】I.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我们决定给在过去一周接触的每个人打电话“可知，本段可以写作者给他们打电话，得

到了他们的理解和鼓励，这让作者感到无比温暖。

②由第二段首句内容“尽管担心病毒的严重性，但我知道我必须要勇敢”可知，本段可以写作者是如何勇敢面

对病毒，对抗病毒，最后终于痊愈以及作者对此次经历的感受。

2.续写线索：给接触的人打电话T得到他们的理解和鼓励T作者自己要勇敢面对一作者如何勇敢对抗病毒T

最终痊愈一感受。

3.词汇激活：

行为类：

使振作：cheersb.up/pullupone'sslacks/bucksb.up

减轻：ease/relieve/alleviate

确保，保证：makesure/guarantee/makecertain

情绪类：

令人高兴的：cheering/joyful/pleasant/delightful

困难的：hard/difficult/tough

惊讶：surprise/amazement/astonishment

【点睛】【高分句型I]Hardasitwastoinformpeoplethatwemighthavegiventhemthecoronavirus,itwasthe

responsiblethingtodo.（运用了as引导的倒装句）

【高分句型2】Haditnotbeenfortheloveandcarefromthosearoundme,Iwouldn'thavemadeit.（运用了虚拟

语气的倒装）

3.（2022春・江苏苏州•高三统考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

OnFridaythe13thofMarch,mysix-year-oldsonJackcamehomewithahugepacketofworksheetsinhis

schoolbag.Soonafter,IreceivedtheemailIhadfearedwascoming-jack'sschoolwouldbeclosedforatleastthe

nexttwoweeks.TheCOVID-19quarantine（隔离期）hadbegun.AtleastnowIwouldknowhewassafeathome.1

spenttheweekendgatheringsuppliessuchaspencils,crayonsandpaperandsettingupaclassroomonmydining

roomtable.

Onthefirstdayofwhatwasreferredtoas"distancelearning",IrealizedIwasbeingoverlyoptimistic,andI

onlyhadonechildtoteach.Hesuffersfromhearinglossandwearshearingaids.Inschool,hereceivesspecial

servicesfromateacherofthedeaf,aspeechtherapist（治疗专家），anoccupationaltherapist,andaphysical

therapist.Inadditiontohismajorclasses,therewasalsohismusicclass,artclass,computereducation,thelibrary,

andphysicaleducation.Iwassuddenlytenteachersallatthesametime,andtheworkbeganpilingup!

Althoughmyjobasafreelance（自由职业的）writerallowsmetoworkaccordingtomyownschedule,I

wouldnormallyworkwhenJackwasatschool.Nowthattimewastakenupwithschooldaysathome.ThismeantI

wasteachingformostofthedayandthenworkingasawriterallafternoonintotheevening.Manydaysdidn'tstop

untilbedtime,andthenwewererightbackatitthenextmorning.Thiswasthenewnormalanditwasstressful.

Morethanonce,Ifoundmyselffeelingangryfornoparticularreason.Ononeoccasion.Ishoutedangrilyatmy

printersimplybecauseitwouldn'tworkproperly.

Oneday,IwashelpingJackwithashortjournal.Aspartofhisclassworksheets,hewasrequiredtowriteand

drawabouttheinterestingthingsthathappenedathome.Isecretlycheeredattheopportunitytoapplymy

professionalskillstomyson'seducation.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ItoldhimallthethingsIknewaboutstorywriting.

Afterhalfanhour,IfoundthatJack'spaperwasstillblank.

【答案】参考范文：

Itoldhimallthethings/knewaboutstorywriting.Isortedoutafewmagazineswithmyarticlesandreadto

himinaloudandclearvoice.1evenactedoutsomeofthestories.However,Jackdidn'tseemtopaymuch

attention.Turningthecrayonoverinhishand,helookedatme,thenattheblankpieceofpaper.Irememberedhow

Ienjoyedthequietafternoonstypingawayonmylaptopandthoughthemightneedspacetobuilduphisstory.I

toldJackhecouldstartwritingandlefthimtogetonwithit.

Afterhalfanhour,1foundthatJackspaperwasstillblank.Stressandimpatienceburnedinmystomach,I

knockedheavilyonthediningroomtableandwasreadytolecturehimonhowtobeagoodstudent.Instead,Jack

raisedhishead,tearswellingupinhiseyes."I'mscared.Mom,“hesobbed.€tYouarcalwaysangry.^^Iwas

speechless.Thinkingaboutthepasttwoweeks,IrealizedwhatahorribleteacherIhadbeenItoldJackwecould

takeanafternoonoff.Thejournalcouldwaituntilwefilledthedaywithsomehappymemories.

【分析】本文以儿子回家，学校关闭为线索展开，讲述了作者在C0VID-19隔离期间，在家单独为自己六

岁的且听力受损的儿子进行教学所遇到的困难和压力，以及最终结果。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我告诉「他我所知道的关于写故事的一切。”可知，第一段可描写作者以自己的经验教

导儿子怎样写故事。

②由第二段首句内容“半小时后，我发现杰克的试卷还是空白的。”可知，第二段可描写作者焦躁不安，教训

儿子，同时发现自己的教法很失败，所以改变教学方法。

2.续写线索：教导——诵读一表演——不在意一不耐烦—教训一委屈一改变

3.词汇激活

行为类

①,诵读：read/recite

②.表演：actout/perform

③.教训：teachhimalesson/lecturehim

情绪类

①.不在意：paynoattention/takenonoticeof

②.不耐烦：impatience/restlesswithanxiety

【点睛】[高分句型I].Turningthecrayonoverinhishand,helookedatme,thenattheblankpieceofpaper.（运用

了非谓语动词现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2].Instead,Jackraisedhishead,tearswellingupinhiseyes.（运用了独立主格结构作状语）

4.（2022•浙江•校联考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的

短文。

WhenCanadiancoupleEdithLemayandSebastienPelletierfirstnoticedthattheirdaughterMiawashaving

visionproblems,shewasjustthreeyearsold.

Afewyearsaftertheyfirsttookhertoseeaspecialist,Mia,theeldestoftheirfourchildren,wasdiagnosed

withretinitispigmentosa（视网膜色素变性），araregeneticconditionthatcausesalossordeclineinvisionover

time.

Bythispoint,LemayandPelletier,who'vebeenmarriedfor12years,hadnoticedthattwooftheirsons,Colin,

nowseven,andLaurent,nowfive,wereexperiencingthesamesymptoms.Theirfearswereconfirmedwhenin

2019theboyswerediagnosedwiththesamegeneticdisorder.TheirothersonLeo,nownine,wasgiventheall

clear.There'snothingtheycanreallydo,becausethereiscurrentlynocureoreffectivetreatmenttoslowdownthe

progressionofretinitispigmentosa.

Oncetheycametotermswiththenews,thecouplefocusedtheirattentiononhelpingtheirchildrenbuildthe

skillsthey5dneedtoleadtheirwaythroughlife.WhenMia'sspecialistsuggestedthattheyabsorbherwith“visual

memories^^,Lemayrealizedthattherewasonetrulyincrediblewaythattheycoulddojustthatforherandtherest

ofthechildren.

“Ithought,'Tmnotgoingtoshowheranelephantinabook.Tmgoingtotakehertoseearealelephant'Jshe

explains.44AndI'mgoingtofillhervisualmemorywiththebest,mostbeautifulimagesIcan.^^

Sheandherhusbandsoonbeganmakingplanstospendayeartravelingaroundtheglobewiththeirkids.They

thinktherearegreatthingstodoathome,butthere5snothingbetterthantraveling.Notonlythescenery,butalso

thedifferentculturesandpeople.

Aftergatheringupenoughsavings,theysoonbegantheirfamilyjourneywithanin-depthitinerary（行程）that

involvedtravelingthroughRussiabyland,andspendingtimeinChina.

注意：

L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thetriphasprovidedthechildrenwithunforgettablevisualexperiences.

Lemaysays,"Travelingissomethingyoucanlearnfrom.^^

【答案】

Thetriphasprovidedthechildrenwithunforgettablevisualexperiences.Theyhavegonetoovertencountries.

Duringthetrip,whatimpressedthemmostwastheexperienceinChina.TheGreatWallwassoamazingthatthey

weretotallyattractedbyit.Therearebeautifiilplaceseverywhereintheworld,soitdoesn'treallymatterwhere

theygo.Andtheyneverknowwhat'sgoingtoimpressthem.Theywilltellthemselvessomethingiswonderfuland

keepitinmindthatit'sthebestthingintheirlife.

Lemaysays,"Travelingissomethingyoucanlearnfh）m."It'sniceandfun,butitalsocanbereallyhard.You

canbeuncomfortable.Youcanbetired.There'sfrustration.Sothere'salotthatyoucanlearnfromtravelitself.No

matterhowhardtheirlifeisgoingtobe,fromtheexperience,theycanfeelthattheyareluckyjusttohaverunning

waterintheirhomeandtobeabletogotoschooleverydaywithnicecolorfulbooks.Nomatterwhattheymay

experienceintheirlaterlife,thetripwillshinealightintheirmind.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一对加拿大夫妇发现自己的孩子们患有一种罕见的遗传性疾病一

视网膜色素变性，由此该夫妇开始制定计划，用一年的时间来带着孩子环游世界，通过旅游去感受真实的

世界，通过旅行点亮孩子们脑海中的每一盏灯。

【详解】L段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“这次旅行给孩子们带来了难忘的视觉体验。”可知，第一段可描写该对夫妇和孩子们在

旅行过程中所经历的视觉体验，如在中国的所见所闻所感。

②由第二段首句内容“Lemay说:“旅行是你可以学习的东西。可知，第二段可描写孩子们在旅行中的所学

所思所感。

2.续写线索：发现疾病——治疗疾病——世界旅游——难忘的视觉感受——旅游带来的收获——人生感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.记住：keepsthinmind/memorize/remember

②.学习：learn/study

③,照亮：shinealight/lightup

情绪类

①.疲劳的：tired/exhausted

②,沮丧：frustration/disappointment

【点睛】[高分句型I].Duringthetrip,whatimpressedthemmostwastheexperienceinChina.（由what引导的

主语从句）

[高分句型2].Nomatterhowhardtheirlifeisgoingtobe,fromtheexperience,theycanfeelthattheyarelucky

justtohaverunningwaterintheirhomeandtobeabletogotoschooleverydaywithnicecolorfulbooks.（由no

matterhow引导的让步状语从句）

5.（2022•河北•河北省唐县第一中学校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两

段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.

NadaPopoviciwasataprofessionalhockey（曲棍球）game.Shekeptlookingatthebackoftheman'sneck.

Shewroteamessagewiththewords“mole（痣）'"'cancer"and"doctor“onherphoneinbrightredtype.Shedidit

togettheattentionoftheman,BrianHamilton.HeisanassistantequipmentmanagerfortheVancouverCanucks

hockeyteam.

Mr.Hamiltonhadasmallmoleonhisneck.Itwasirregularlyshapedandred-brown.Thesearethesignsofa

cancerousmolethatMs.Popovicihadlearnedtospot.Maybehealreadyknew?Butifso,whywasthemolestill

there?ShethoughtthatMr.Hamiltondidnotknow.

“IneedtotellMs.Popovicitypedamessageonherphone.Thegameended.Afterwavingathim

severaltimes,shefinallydrewMr.Hamilton'sattention.Sheplacedherphoneagainsttheglass.Themessageread,

“Themoleonthebackofyourneckispossiblycancerous.Pleasegoseeadoctor!”

Mr.Hamiltonlookedatthemessage,rubbedthebackofhisneck,andkeptwalking.Hewasthinking,"Well,

that'sstrange.”

Afterthegame,Mr.Hamiltonwenthomeandaskedhispartnertospotthemole,andshesaidshecould.He

askedtheteamdoctorifitwasworrisome.Itwas.Thenafterhehaditremoved,hewaitedforthebiopsy（活检）

results.Wasthefansittingbehindtheteam'sbenchright?

Indeed,Ms.Popoviciwascorrect.ShehadsavedHamilton'slife.Doctorslatertoldhimthatitwasatypeof

skincancer.Theysaidtheycouldremovewitheaseandtreat.Butearlydetectionisimportant.4kThesooneryou

findsomething,thebetteritis,“adoctorsaid.

Mr.Hamiltonrecalledthedoctortellinghim,“Iamgoingtodiagnoseyouwithcancer.AndIamgoingtocure

youofcancerinthesamephonecall.,,

Onceheknewhewasfine,Mr.Hamiltontriedtofindthewomanhedescribedas“ahero”.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Mr.Hamiltonwrotealetterpostedontheleam'sTwitteraccount.

Acoupleofdayslater,atthenextgame,theymeteachother.

【答案】参考范文：

Mr.HamiltonwrotealetterpostedontheteamsTwitteraccount,Itsaid,“TothiswomanIamtryingtofind.

Youchangedmylife.AndnowIwanttofindyoutosayTHANKYOUVERYMUCH!TheproblemisIdonot

knowwhoyouareorwhereyouarefrom.Ibelieveyouwon'tforgetmeandcanrecallwhathappenedonthe

matchfield.IamtheassistantequipmentmanagerfbrtheVancouverCanuckshockeyteam.^^Luckily,ittookless

thanthreehoursforhimtofindMs.Popovici.

Acoupleofdayslater,atthenextgame,theymeteachother.Shewatchedthegamefromthesameseatwhere

shehadspottedthemole.Everything,shethought,hadgonenightthatfatefulday.Shewassittingcloseenoughtoa

teambench.Hamiltonwasnotwearingajacketlargeenoughtocoverthecancerousmoleonhisneck."Thisentire

experiencehasbeensorare,"Ms.Pupovicisaid."AndIwilljustcherishit."Bytheway.sheisafuturemedical

student.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了美国一名女子在观看球赛时一个小小的善意提醒，拯救了北美国

家冰球联盟(NHL)一名教练的生命，这位教练辗转找到这名女子并表示感谢的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“汉密尔顿写了一封信，发布在球队的Twitter账户上。”可知，第一段可描写汉密尔顿

寻找波波维奇女士的经过。

②由第二段首句内容“几天后，在下一场比赛中，他们又见面了可知，第二段可描写波波维奇女士的感悟。

2.续写线索：发帖——寻找—找到——重遇——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①写着：said/read/write

②确信：believe/trust/ensure

③看见：spot/witness/see

情绪类

①感谢：sayTHANKYOU/showinghisappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful

②幸运：luckily/fortunatcly

［点睛］［高分句型1］Ibelieveyouwon'tforgetmeandcanrecallwhathappenedonthematchfield.（省略that

的宾语从句和由连接词what引导的宾语从句作recall的宾语）

［高分句型2JShewatchedthegamefromthesameseatwhereshehadspottedthemole.（由关系副词where弓I导

的限制性定语从句）

6.（2021秋,全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完

整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

AnydaythatIhadtogototheairportwastheworstdayofmylife,andasatravelingappliancesalesman,I

hadtoflyquiteabit.Onthisparticulardayin2010.1wasassignedtoamiddleseat.Backthen,IwassofatthatI

couldn'tfitdowntheaisle（走廊）facingforward,soIwasforcedtowalksidewayslikeacrab.Iweighedbetween

340and360pounds;theexactfiguredependedonwhetherImeasuredmyweightbeforeorafteroneofmy

enormousmeals.WhenIfinallysqueezedintomyseat,theseatbeltwasn*tlongenoughtofitaroundmy52-inch

waist.Theyneverwere.

IwokeupthenextmorningknowingthatIneededtochange.Istartedlookingforsignsthatmightleadme

towardabetterlifeandimmediatelyasignshowedup.IturnedontheTVandhappenedtocatchaninterviewwith

formerpresidentBillClinton.Hesaidhe'dbeenunderthecareofadoctorwhoputhimonawhole-food,

plant-baseddiet.Helostweightwithoutfeelinghungry,andhewashealthierandstrongerthanhe'dbeensincehis

twenties.IneverimaginedmysignwouldcomefromBillClinton,buttherehewas.

Ihadnoideawhata"whole-food,plant-baseddiet"was.Iwentonlineandsearchedforadoctorwhocould

helpme.That'swhenIfoundPreeti.1felthopefulwhensheagreedtoseemethenextday.Thedoctor

recommendedalowcaloriedietandsuggestedsomemoderateexercisesIcoulddoinmyhome.Shealsosuggested

thatIgotoashelterandadoptadog."Exercise?”］askedJ'Adog?nIcouldn'tbelievewhatIheard.But,shesaid."A

dogisagoodcompanion.Plus,youliveinanapartment,whichmeansthedoghastobewalked.Soifyouwalk

yourdogtwiceaday,thatwillbeyourexercise.*'

Paragraph1:

Withdoubtsandhesitation,IdroveuptoadogshellernearwhereIlived.

Paragraph2:

Icamebackhomewiththelargeblackand-whitedogwithabigroundbody.

【答案】范文：

Para1:

Withdoubtandhesitation,1droveuptoadogshelternearwhereIlived.Uponopeningthedoor,1was

amazedtoseevarioustypesofdogs:Poodle,Husky,Samoyed..Thoughabandoned,theyallappearedclean

andenergetic.Seeingastrangerapproaching,theykeptbarking,alertbutcurious.IwastombetweenaPoodlewith

goldenfurandaHuskywaggingitstailwhenalargeblack-and-whitedogdozinginthecomercaughtmyattention.

HisroundbodyimmediatelyremindedmeofmysizeandwhatPreetisaid-Adogisagoodcompanion.Iknewhe

wasperfectforme.

Para2:

Icamebackhomewiththelargeblack-and-whitedogwithabigroundbody.InamedhimDavid,whooften

laymotionlessonthefloorandyawnedwitheyeshalf-closed.Thoughabitdiscouraged,Iwasdeterminedto

changebothofus.Soon,Ifoundaball,draggedDavidtotheparkandthrewitathim.Drivenbynaturalinstinct,

Daviddashedforwardtochasetheball.Gradually,IcouldwalkDavidtwiceaday.Onemonthlater,Isuddenly

realizedthattherewasnoneedformetowalklikeacrabontheplane.Meanwhile,Davidbecameleanandhealthy.

【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者体重在340到360磅之间，作者决定改变自己，作者在网上

找到了能帮助自己的医生，医生建议作者吃低热量的食物，并建议作者在家里做一些适度的运动。她还建

议作者去收容所领养一只狗。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“带着疑虑和犹豫，我开车来到我家附近的一家狗狗收容所。”可知，第一段可描写作者

去狗狗收容所选狗的过程。

②由第二段首句内容“我带着一条大的黑白色的狗回到家里，它的身体又大又圆”可知，第二段可描写作者与

狗狗相处的过程。

2.续写线索：作者惊讶收容所里有各种狗一作者选择——带了一条大的黑白色的狗回到家----狗与作者

互动——作者和狗狗的改变

3.词汇激活

行为类

1.吸弓I注意力：catchone'sattention/catchone'seyes

2.想起recall/remind

3.决定做某事：bedeterminedtodosth/makeupone'smindtodosth

情绪类

1.惊讶的：amazed/astonished

2.失望的：discouraged/disappointed

【点睛】[高分句型1].Seeingastrangerapproaching,theykeptbarking,alertbutcurious.（现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Onemonthlater,Isuddenlyrealizedthattherewasnoneedformetowalklikeacrabontheplane.

（that引导的宾语从句）

7.（2021秋•全国•高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完

整的短文。

NothinghascomeeasyforChriswhofacedmanychallengesinhischildhood.Hisfather,Nick,saidthathis

sonsufferedfromillnessesmostofhislife.ChriswasbornwithDownsyndrome（唐氏综合征）andunderwent

manymajorsurgeries.Allthroughhisillnesses,thelittleboyalwayshadastrongwill.

“WhenyouhavechildrenwithDownsyndrome,theydon*tfitin,theyaredifferentandtheydon*tgetinvited

toparties.Theydon'tgetinvitedtoanything.Everythingyoudoisachallenge,itisafight.Itisabattletojustget

themtobeincluded,“Nicksaid.

Despitehislifechallenges,Christrieshardtostaypositiveandworkhardtoovercomehisdifficulties."Don't

tellmethat1*11fail,vtheyoungmanrepliestothosewhotellhimhecan'tdosomething.

Chrishasalwaysbeenathletic,sohisfatherfoundaSpecialOlympicsMarathonTriathlonprogramforhimto

participatein.Hisfatherviewedtheprogramasafunthingtheycoulddotogether.HeencouragedChristodo

somethingthatnoonehadeverdonebefore.HeknewaccomplishingachallengingeventsuchastheIronman

Triathlonwouldmakeanincrediblypowerfulimpact,notonlyonhissonbutonmanyotherswithdisabilities.He

askedChrisifhewouldbeinterestedinparticipatinginthemostchallengingrace.4tYes,let'sdoit!”Chris

enthusiasticallyreplied.

IndividualswithDownsyndrome,likeChris,oftenstrugglewithpoorbalanceanddelayedreactiontime.

Therefore,ittookhimalittlelongertocompletetrainingroutinesinthebeginning.However,Chrisisnoquitter,he

keptonpracticing.Withhiscourage,willpowerandhisfamily'sencouragement,everydayhegrewbetter,faster

andstronger.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Chrisandhisfatherencounteredmanydoubtersatthebeginningofhistraining.

Thedayofthemarathonfinallyarrived.

【答案】Chrisandhisfatherencounteredmanydoubtersatthebeginningofhistraining.Somebelievedtherace

wastoodifficulttocomplete.EventhecoachatfirstrefusedtocreateaworkoutplanforChris.Nick,beingthe

toughfather,wouldnottake"No"forananswer.Whenexpertsspokeofhisson'slimits,heinsteadfocusedonhis

possibilities.4lNobodygetsinthewayofChris'sdreams,Msaidthedeterminedfather.Nickhelpedhissonstay

motivatedandinspiredhimtogetu1%bettereveryday”.Thesmallimprovementsovertimebuiltintoawinning

confidence.

Thedayofthemarathonfinallyarrived.Nickwasrighttherewithhissontocheerhimon."Whattimeisit?”

askedNick."It'sgametimebaby!^^Chrisoptimisticallyshouted.Inthelastmilesofthetiringrace,Chrisstruggled

tobreatheinthehotair,buthekeptonrunning.Hewasdeterminedtowinthetestofwillanddefeatallodds.He

successfullycrossedthefi