Dygyfi雅思教父刘洪波教育类雅思作文高分范文及点评

经典word整理文档，仅参考，双击此处可删除页眉页脚。本资料属于网络整理，如有侵权，请联系删除，谢谢！生梦死；生活需要艺术，但不能投机取巧；生活需要勇气，但不能鲁莽蛮干；生活需要重复，但不能重蹈覆辙。-----无名雅思教父刘洪波：教育类雅思作文高分范文及点评雅思教父刘洪波2010权威作品《最简化雅思写作》8月光芒上市从零开始，单词、词组、句式、思想完全应对官方四大评分标准最新研发最简化15句写作框架模板涵盖雅思题库各类型高分范文幽默通俗的语言手把手教出写作高分中国区前任雅思考官强力推荐Mostcountriesspendlotsofmoneyoneducationastheystarttorecognizeitsimportance.Inyouropinionwhichtwofollowingsubjectsarethemostimportantforyourpeopleandwhichoneistheleastimportant?Subject:LiteratureSportsMathematicsEconomyPhysicsHistoryMusicGeographyIthasbeensaidthatinvestingineducationisinvestinginone’sfuture:thisistrueforbothindividualsandnations.Itisalwayssomewhatsubjectivetosaywhichismoreimportant,thehumanitiesorsciences,asbothhavevalue.However,Iwouldliketomakeacasefortheimportanceofmathandeconomicsinthisdayandage.Letusbeginwithmath.Mathematicsisafoundationsubjectwhichbridgesmanydifferentfields,fromphysicsandchemistrytotheInternetandmodernmedicine.Allofourmaterialadvancesinthe20thcenturycouldnothavehappenedwithoutadvancedmathematics.Tobesure,itwillalsoplayacriticalroleinmeetingchallengeslikeglobalwarmingandspacetravel,tonamejustafew,inthefuture.Likewise,economicsisafundamentaldisciplinethatallowssocietiestobestableandmoveforward.Historyisfullofexampleofkingdomsandempiresthatcollapsedastheireconomiesdeclined.Mostobviously,weneedlooknofurtherthanthecurrenteconomicmeltdowntoseetheimportanceofeconomics.Thejobsandwellbeingofindividualsandnationsalikedependuponadeeperunderstandingofthisfield.Whileallsubjectshavetheirmerit,perhapsGeographydoesn’thavethesameimportanceitoncedid.Afterall,inourmodernworldwehave3-Dmapsonlinethatallowustoseeanywherewiththeclickofamouse.Buttoreiterate,weneedabalancedapproachtoeducationwherewestillproduceartistsandthinkersandhistoriansandsoon.Tosummarize,mathandeconomicsarecriticalsubjectsinthe21stGovernmentsmustdotheirparttomakesureweinvestinthesekeyareasandhavequalifiedteachers.Bydoingso,theywillensureourprosperityandprogress.(294words)Harvey点评：个学科。要性不难，难的是说明一个学科为什么不重要，还注意到题目中有最高级词汇：themostimportant,theleast。级。所以我最欣赏的是在本文首段第二句话，在表达个人偏见前的让步：Itisalwayssomewhatsubjective（主观的）tosaywhichismoreimportant,thehumanities（人文学科）orsciences,asbothhavevalue.这句话我相信也是大多数考生看完题目后的第一感觉，但表达不出来。先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用词汇subjectivefoundationbridge主观的n.基础vt.架桥，连接critical关键的，重要的n.彻底垮台adj.福利，康乐，安宁反复地说，重申meltdownwellbeingreiterate短语investin投资于makeacasefor提出充分的理由inthisdayandage当今playacriticalrolein起到关键作用meetchallenge应对挑战tonamejustafew等等=andsoondependupon依赖，依靠allowsb.todosth.使某人能做某事withtheclickofamouse只需鼠标一点dospartto尽自己的职责keyareas重要领域三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子Itisalwayssomewhatsubjectivetosaywhichismore,thehumanitiesorsciences,asbothhavevalue.Mathematicsisafoundationsubjectwhichbridgesmanydifferentfields,