MBA作文(大作文讲解)课件

1、大作文第1页，共31页。大作文大纲要求大作文说明文或议论文150 字（标点符号不计算在内）图画、图表或文字15分第2页，共31页。评分标准13-15分很好得完成了试题的任务，对目标读者产生了预期的效果包含所有的内容使用丰富的语法结构和词汇语言自然流畅，语法错误极少有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰格式与语域恰当贴切第3页，共31页。评分标准大作文评分重点在于内容的完事性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。第4页，共31页。英语（二）大作文年 份考 查 形 式主 题2010柱状图手机用户量的变化2011柱状图不同汽车品牌市场占有率的变化2012表格不同年龄段员工工

2、作满意度的差异2013柱状图不同年级大学生兼职状况的差异2014柱状图中国城城乡人口数量的变化2015饼形图评春节期间居民的开销比例2016饼形图高校学生旅行目的调查第5页，共31页。篇章结构 三段式第6页，共31页。Para. 1:图表描述解读态势引证态势第7页，共31页。Para. 11. As is vividly revealed in the table, some noticeable changes have come up as regards _ (主题词 e.g. the employment satisfaction)2. It can be seen clearly f

3、rom the table that significant changes have arisen in terms of _(主题词e.g. the employment satisfaction)第8页，共31页。Para. 1Table (表格)Graph /Chart （图表）Diagram / bar chart (柱状图)Pie chart (饼状图)第9页，共31页。Para. 1解读势态：1. According to the figures provided by the table, one can see that the number of _ (相关人或物) has

4、 been on a steady rise all the time. 2. Based on the data offered, we can find that the number of _ (相关人或物) has been increasing steadily.第10页，共31页。Para. 1On a rise 处于上升状态On a decline 处于下降状态Steady 稳定的Rapid 快速的Dramatic/ sharp 急剧的Slight 轻微的All the time 一直的第11页，共31页。Para. 1Number 数量Percentage 百分比Share 份

5、额Ratio 比率Proportion 比例第12页，共31页。Para. 1引证态势1：1. In _ (年)，the number was at the bottom end, only about _ (数字)， while within no more than several years it jumped to _ (数字). 2. In the year of _ (年), the number was merely _ (数字), whereas _ (数字) years later, it climbed to more than _ (数字)第13页，共31页。Para.

6、1引证态势2：1.Meanwhile, however, the _ (对比对象) have/ has witnessed a sharp decline, reaching _ (数字) in _ (年头) .2. In contrast, however, the number of _ (对比对象) has remained constant all the way. 第14页，共31页。Para. 2:总述分述Para. 2第15页，共31页。总述- 有因可析It is of no difficulty to come up with some possible factors for

7、 these changes. What accounts for this scenario? At least, for my part, three factors contribute to it. This situation can be traced to a multitude of factors; the fundamental ones, however, can be sought as follows. Para. 2第16页，共31页。分述- 因11. First and foremost, with the rapid development of our eco

8、nomy and society, _ (句子).2. To begin with, these changes are closely related to _ (名词短语)3. At the top of the list is _ (名词短语)Para. 2第17页，共31页。例证- 因11. According to a recent Internet survey, approximately _ % of _ ( 相关人或物) _ (谓语).2. Based on a recent official report, roughly _% of _ ( 相关人或物) _ (谓语).P

9、ara. 2第18页，共31页。分述- 因21. In addition, we must admit that this tendency also has a lot to do with _ (名词短语). 2. Whats more, there is no denying that the current scenario, to a large extent, result from _ (名词短语)Para. 2第19页，共31页。分述- 因31. Last but not least , _(名词短语) is another significant factor that ca

10、nnot be ignored. 2. Finally, we must recongize that _ (名词短语) produces a contributing effect upon the current condition. Para. 2第20页，共31页。Para. 3:结论或评价预测或建议Para. 3第21页，共31页。结论或评价1. Taking into account what has been argued so far, a sound conclusion can be drawn that this scenario is nothing but a ble

11、ssing. 2. As discussed above, it is no surprise to see the current scenario. Para. 3第22页，共31页。预测或建议1. And I firmly believe that his tendency will continue in the forthcoming years. 2. Consequently, urgent actions must be taken by the relevant authorities to eliminate this hell as soon as possible. P

12、ara. 3第23页，共31页。2015真题Directions:Writeanessaybasedonthefollowingchart.youshould1）interpretthechartand2）giveyourcomments.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsontheANSWERSHEET.(15points).第24页，共31页。2015真题第25页，共31页。2015真题Para. 1 图表描述与解读图表总述：有关居民礼物的支出比例具体描述1： 新年礼物的支出比例具体描述2： 交通、宴会和其他的支出比例主题解读： 国人对人际关系的重视第26页，共31页。

13、2015真题Para. 2发表评论，对图表现象做原因解读 总述：三个原因导致该现象 原因1： 收入增加导致社交投入增多原因2： 中国由来已久的交际传统 原因3： 缓解社会孤独感的心理需求第27页，共31页。2015真题Para. 3 给出结论和建议 结论： 该现象的出现并不令人吃惊建议： 保持警醒以防变质为享乐主义第28页，共31页。2015真题 The pie chart above manifestly depicts the structure of citizens expenditure on the Spring Festivals celebrations in a certai

14、n Chines city. As is revealed by the chart, the percentage of expenses on New Year gifts is the largest among all the four categories, accounting for 40%. In comparison, the money spent on transportation, feasts, and the rest takes up a 20% share respectively. It goes without saying that the chart i

15、s meant to emphasize our Chinese peoples accent upon interpersonal relationships.第29页，共31页。2015真题 From my standpoint, at least three fundamental factors are responsible for this scene. To start, it must be admitted that Chinese people, with the vast improvement of their income, nowadays are able to invest more in socializing with others. Besides, to exchange presents with relatives or friends during the lunar New Year is a long established tradition in our land. Whats more the gaiety of the Festival from gathering, dining, and exchanging gifts can greatly relieve peopl