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1、continuation writing -情节的逻辑性和语言的丰富性注意：注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右。左右。 2. 应使用应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。 3. 续写部分分为续写部分分为两段两段，每段的开头语已为你写好每段的开头语已为你写好。4. 续写完成后，请续写完成后，请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Three days later Fireman Philip and his men arrived at the hospital as schedule

2、d. _.Paragraph 2: His day as a real fireman started. _. ward was filled with sadness dream out of breaththe long-lost excitement fire station fire engine deeply moved Wednesday morning fire uniform What is the type of writing? A. narrative(记叙文）记叙文） B. exposition（说明文（说明文) C. argumentation(议论文）议论文） wh

3、en, where, who, what, why, how whowhenwhatwhyYoung motherBobPhilipA cold Sunday morning, Wednesday morning make Bobs dream come trueBob was dyingQ: How was Bob ?We could infer from * He looked so small and weak that even a gentle touch could break him.* Though the words cost him much strength, and h

4、e was now coughing and out of breathuse detailed description(细节描写细节描写) to show charactersmall and weakQ: How did the young mother feel when her son was dying ?She was filled with sadnessQ: How did the young mother feel when Philip decided to help her?gratefulHe could see that the mothers eyes were g

5、littering with gratitudeQ: Did she do anything for her son?She wanted to make her sons dream come true, so begged Philip for helpuse detailed description(细节描写细节描写) to show characterbe an honorary fireman for the whole day and get a real uniformcome down to the fire station and go out on all fire cal

6、ls take a ride on the fire engine Q: In order to make Bobs dream come true, what would Philip do ?What would happen in the hospital? Paragraph 1: Three days later Fireman Philip and his men arrived at the hospital as scheduled ward was filled with sadness dream out of breaththe long-lost excitement

7、fire station fire engine deeply moved Wednesday morning fire uniform Try to use the following words Paragraph A: Three days later Fireman Philip and his men arrived at the hospital as scheduled. They rushed into Bobs ward. Bob jumped with joy and wondered why they came here. “Bob, you have to take o

8、n a lot of responsibilities today, so you cant relax anymore!” Fireman Philip spoke quickly before Bob could say anything. Meanwhile, another fireman asked Bob to dress himself into the fire uniform. Bob didnt know what happened. He just realized that he was a fireman now. Few minutes later, they he

9、aded for the fire station immediately. Comparison Paragraph B: Three days later Fireman Philip and his men arrived at the hospital as scheduled. The mother was so excited that she led them to Bobs ward without delay. On seeing the firemen, Bob struggled to sit up and tried to greet them. Philip quic

10、kly stepped forward and gave him a big hug. “Welcome to be a member of us. My little fireman!” they helped Bob sit up, dressed him in his fire uniform and wheeled him to the waiting truck at the gate. “A real fire engine!” Bob screamed excitedly. With Philip leading the way, Bob directed the truck b

11、ack to the fire station. Tip : A coherent paragraph is based on logical facts referred from related clues in the context.（条理清楚的段落是建立在合逻辑的事实基础上的，而（条理清楚的段落是建立在合逻辑的事实基础上的，而这些事实应根据上下文的相关线索来推断。）这些事实应根据上下文的相关线索来推断。） Detailed descriptionFrom which aspect? her heart was filled with sadness / the mother coul

12、d feel the long-lost excitement feelings behavior cough，out of breath, beg, struggle to sit up, tried to greet.facial expressionlanguage eyes were glittering with gratitude / his eyes glittering with excitement “my dream of being a real fireman is finally to be realized!” Paragraph 2: His day as a real fireman started. _.What would he do the whole day?Find out some related clues (相关的线索）相关的线索）in the context. be an honorary fireman for the whole day and get a real uniformcome down to the