高三英语语法要点细讲（配最新高考+模拟） 专题24 短文改错新题型.doc

2013届高三英语语法要点精练（配最新高考+模拟）专题24 短文改错新题型1. 下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号【】，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线【】划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。【2012.02桐乡模拟】the first time i decide to leave home was when i was upon graduation in high school. i was having trouble get along with my parents. i had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so i thought about leaving home. it took me only two weeks away from home while i started to feel homesick. living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. because of im on my own, i get to deal with my duties without being told. i have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. in the other hand, i could make my own future plan. i have made rules for me to follow.短文改错the first time i decide to leave home was when i was upon graduation in high school. i was decidedhaving trouble get along with my parents. i had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so i thought getting dollarsabout leaving home. it took me only two weeks away from home while i started to feel homesick. whenliving on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, totallymore decisive and more creative. because of im on my own, i get to deal with my duties without being told. i have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. to advicein the other hand, i could make my own future plan. i have made rules for me to follow.0n my2. rose wanted a job. she went to many offices and she didnt like any of them. one day she saw a board in an office read: “this office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.” rose was exciting. when rose went to the managers office, the man was writing something. rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “do you need a typist?” asked rose. “yes!” he said. rose clapped her hand. she couldnt help saying, “ok! how much will you pay for me every month?” the manager thought for a while and said, “i will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. then i will pay you 30 dollars every month.” rose smiled and answer, “great! i will come and work here three months late.” the manager was speechless.v. 短文改错:rose wanted a job. she went to many offices and she didnt like any of them. butone day she saw a board in an office read: “this office needs a typist whom can reading whotype 200 words a minute .” rose was exciting. when rose went to the managers office, excitedthe man was writing something. rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “do you need a typist?” asked rose. “yes!” he said. rose clapped her hand. his handsshe couldnt help saying, “ok! how much will you pay for me every month?” themanager thought for a while and said, “i will pay you 77 dollars for first three the months. then i will pay you 30 dollars every month.” rose smiled and answer, “great! answeredi will come and work here three months late.” the manager was speechless. later3.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear wei fang,it s a long time since i heard from you in last limenow i d like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching careera boy, li ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for schoolhe stood outside the classroom silenti smiled to him and let him comeafter a while, he began to cryseeing this, i walked to him and asked what has happenedhe told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for herat the same time, he apologized to me for his latenessmoved by his word, i praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named mother for the studentsfrom then on, i began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help themdo you think so? im looking forward to your reply4.【2012西安一次质检】i went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. it was good trip at te beginning and something unexpected happened half way. one of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and be couldnt move any far. nobody knew what to do it. one girl tried to call her mum in her mobile pone, but there was no signal in the mountain area. lucky we had brought a tent with us. we put it up and let him rested in it. he took some medicine. then he drink some water, and ate some food. after while, he felt much better and we walked on. we all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.5.【2012.02桐乡模拟】你的同学刘芳乐于助人(helpful)，积极乐观(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。请根据题示，用英语写一篇短文向英语报english times投稿，简要叙述她做好事的经过，并谈谈你的感想。what happenedan old man seriously hurt in the legwhat liu fang didyour opinionmisunderstanding or even trouble, or the right thing?nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. however, liu fang acted differently. _ one possible version:nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. however, liu fang acted differently. last sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, liu fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. she immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. soon, the ambulance came and took the man to hospital. when everything was ok, she left for school. such is liu fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. though there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, i strongly believe that she has done the right thing. as responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. also, if you dont offer your help when others are in trouble, how can you expect help from others when you are in trouble? therefore, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesnt it? (131 words)6.【2012西安五校一模】the winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. i have been looking forward at relaxing myself. id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. i think i can play the basketball with my classmates. how a wonderful time ill have during the winter holiday! however, my parents think different. they dont want me go out. they are afraid ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. besides, they are afraid i will lose my way. i hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. to get more freedom, so i will try to persuade them.the winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. i have been looking forward at makes to relaxing myself. id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. i think i can play movies the basketball with my classmates. how a wonderful time ill have during the winter holiday! the what however, my parents think different. they dont want me go out. they are afraid ill be differently toknocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. besides, they are afraid i will lose fallmy way. i hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. to get more freedom, so i will try to kept so persuade them.7.【2012辽宁重点中学协作体期末】on saturday afternoon, li hua and wang ping, members from “green eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. they picked it out and found it wounded. thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. under their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. when time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delightful i think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing. here i call on the public to show respects for the nature. only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.【答案】on saturday afternoon, li hua and wang ping, members from “green eyes”, was having an wereenvironmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. they caughtpicked it out and found it wounded. thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. under up might/couldtheir treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. when time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delightful i think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing. here i call on the 去掉of delighted thempublic to show respects for the nature. only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we 去掉the in which/ that/去掉get along well with it.8.【2012郑州预测】our english teacher is a middle-aged woman，who had been teaching english for more than 20 yearsshe is always working hardfor a model teacher for many years， she is kind and friendly to us and very strict with us. in class，she always encourages us speak and read english as much as possible she is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interestingin her spare she in time，she often teaches us english song and helps us to put on english short playsshe loves us so 10 much as she is always ready to help usin the fact，she is not only our good teacher but also our good friendwe all respect and love him our english teacher is a middle-aged woman, who had been teaching english for more than has20 years. she is always working hard. for a model teacher for many years, she is kind and friendly as / beingto us and very strict with us. in class, she always encourages us speak and read english as but tomuch as possible. she is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting. in tries livelyher spare time, she often teaches us english song and helps us to put on english short plays. she songs loves us so much as she is always ready to help us. in the fact, she is not only our good teacher but that (删除as亦可) also our good friend. we all respect and love him. her9.【2012南阳期终】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号【】，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线【】划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。 the day is my dads birthday. this afternoon i went to the shopping center downtown, and bought present for him. then i took the subway train to home. sitting on the train, i thought my dad will be very happy when she saw the present. at the next station, an old lady with two heavy bag got into the train and stood in front of me. she looked tiring. i hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. the old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. seen her smile, i felt happily. i will always ready to help others in the future.第二句present前加a；第三句home前的to去掉；第四句will改为would,she改为he; 第五句bag改为bags,into改为on;第六句tiring改为tired;第九句seen改为seeing, happily改为happy;第十句always 后加be10【2012银川一中模拟】i just come back from britain last week. i was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the uk from feb.16 to 28. we paid a visit to many places, like london, oxford or the lake district. i learned much about british culture and history in london, where was my favorite. i also liked oxford, in which i saw much more old buildings. the lake district was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. the most excited thing for me in the britain was that i made a lot of friends there.短文改错：i just come back from britain last week . i was luckily enough to be came luckyone of the student from different countries to visit the uk from feb.16 to students 28. we paid a visit to many places ,like london, oxford or andthe lake district. i learned much about british culture and history in london, where was my favorite. i also liked oxford, in which i saw much which manymore old buildings . the lake district was beautiful, but it was pity a that it rained heavily when they were there. the most excited thing we excitingfor me in the britain was that i made a lot of friends there.11.【2012陕西澄城期末】 nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health, but how to keep health? first,it is necessary to take any exercise every dayresearch shows that get plenty of exercise makesthe heart beat fast and the lungs work hardersecond, eat more fruits, vegetable and less meatthird, getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthysmoking and alcohol drinking injures ones health a great deal, and therefore should be given upif people follow these three ways of keeping fit, theyll great improve their health【参考答案】第一句中的concerning改为concerned，考察词组be concerned about sb/sth关心、挂念某人/某事；health改为healthy，因为keep为连系动词，后面要跟形容词。第二句中any改为some，any一般用于疑问句或否定句中，在肯定句中意为“任何”。第三句中get改为getting，在句中作宾语从句的主语；fast改为faster，与harder保持一致。第四句中改为vegetables，这是可数名词第五句中as改为like，as作介词用意为“作为，当时候”，like作介词用意为“像，比如，诸如之类”；important前加an，因为way是可数名词。第六句中injures改为injure，smoking and alcohol drinking为并列主语，动词要用复数。第七句中great改为greatly，修饰动词improve要使用副词。12.【2012杭州十四中期中】one day tom and i were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. he was badly hurt. many people crowded around us. someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so tom disagreed. he has learned first aid. he said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. at that time the old man wasnt breathing. tom asked me to call in the first aid center at once and he began to start the old mans breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. they said that we had done was correct. i have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.whilewhen ushim so-but has-had checked-check call in 去掉use-using little前加a thatwhat really-real13.云南省部分名校高2012届第一次统一考试【玉溪一中、昆明三中、楚雄一中】like many teenagers in china, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. as a result, i dont have enough times to do that im interested in even on weekends or on holiday. the first thing which i enjoy when i have a few spare minute is to listen to music. its the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. when i listen to music, it is like go to another world. sometimes, the words of the songs seem to express exact how im feeling. besides, im also interested in a fashion and im always searching something special that can reflect my personality. 1. was spent- is 2. enough times - time3. do that - what4. thing which - that5. spare minute - minutes6. their study - my7. like go - going8. express exact - exactly9. in a fashion10. searchingsomething - for14.the water we drink and use was running short. we all have to learn what to stop wasting water. one of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it. today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. but that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. but even if every large city purified and reused its water, we still would have enough water. 【参考答案】the water we drink and use was running short. we all have to learn what is howto stop wasting water. one of the step that we should take are to find ways of stepsreusing it. today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and 去掉then it runs in waste system. but that is possible to pipe the used water to a into itpurifying factory, there the used water can be treated