《基础写作练习my》PPT课件.ppt

英语写作训练,三维设计Unit3DearNick,ImgladtohearthatyourecomingtoSichuaninAugust.Sichuanprovinceenrichestouristattractionsandtouristscanenjoymanyworld-famousplaces,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Jiuzhaigouisfamousasitsbeautifullakes,andthewaterisclearandlookscolorful.DujiangyanIrrigationProjectwasbuiltover2000yearsagoanditisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.Theniceweatherandconveniencetransportantionherecanmakeyourtripfunbetter.Ifyouarrivehere,Iwilltellyoumoreaboutthat.,耿豪,DearNick,ImgladtohearthatyourecomingtoSichuaninAugust.ThereareplentyofworldfamousplacesofinterestinSichuanProvince.SuchasJiuzhaigouandDujianyanIrrigationProject.Jiuzhaigouisfamousforitsbeautifullakes.Thewaterisclearandlookscolorfulthere.DujianyanIrrigationProjectwassetover2,000yearsago,andItplaysanimportantpartinirrigationtoday.Theniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtriphappy.Yourssincerely,LiHua,丽娜,DearNick,ImgladtohearthatyourecomingtoSichuaninAugust.TherearemanyfamousinterestsinSichuanProvincesuchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Jiuzhaigouhasmanybeautifullakesanditswaterisveryclearandlookscolourful.Dujiangyanhasahistoryabout2,000yearslong,itstillinfluencepeoplesdailylives.Bytheway,visitingSichuaninAugustisagoodidea.Becausetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationcanmakeyoutripmorerelaxing.,妤昕,写作训练的思路,写一完整的句子:,句子的完整句子的连贯句子的简洁句子的多样化,主题句,扩展句,结论句,设计一个段落:,基础写作,读写任务,写一个完整的句子,这几句是正确的句子吗?如果你认为有误,该怎么改?,1.Themeetingwilluntil3:00.,2.Workhard,youwillsucceed.,3.Ihaveabrother,whoisadoctor.4.Thereareonly4studentstakepartintheclass.,last,and,who,taking/totake,句子的分类,简单句:只包含一个主谓结构的句子.并列句:主谓结构+连词(and,but,so,or)+主谓结构(或更多的主谓结构)复合句:引导词+主谓结构,主谓结构(从句)(主句),五种基本的简单句,主语+不及物动词2.主语+及物动词+宾语,Birdsfly.Wearestudyinghard.,Wehavereadmanybooks.Theydoshoppingattheweekend.,3.主语+系动词+表语4.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语5.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语,Wearestudents.Thatsoundsgood.,HegaveTomapresent.Heofferedmeajob.,Themanagerthinkstheplanpractical.Hewillhavehisbikerepaired.,并列句,1.用连词/副词(and,but,so,for,or,notonlybutalso,eitheror,neithernor,while,bothand,however,therefore),1)LiMingis18yearsoldandheisastudentinNo.1MiddleSchool.2)Hurryuporyoullbelateforschool.,2.用“;”3.用“;+adv”,1)Wefishedallday;wedidntcatchanything.,Wefishedallday;however,wedidntcatchanything.2)Thecarwasalmostnew;besides,itwasinexcellentcondition.,butwe,soall,2)Lilydoeswellinstudy;alltheteachersthinkhighlyofher.,复合句,复合句里包含两个或更多的主谓结构,其中有一个主谓结构为句子的主体称为主句，另一个些主谓结构为从句，他（们）只能充当句子的某一（些）成分，,如:主语,宾语,表语,同位语,定语,状语等.根据他们在句子中的功能分别称为主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句,同位语从句,定语从句,状语从句等.,判断下面句子属于哪种复合句,1)Whenweshallhaveoursportsmeetingisstillaquestion.2)ThelettersaysthattheyareleavingonFriday.3)Thatswhattheyshoulddo.4)WeexpressedthehopethattheywouldcomeandvisitChinaagain.5)ThisistheverydictionarythatIamlookingfor.6)Astimewenton,Einsteinstheoryprovedtobecorrect.,主语从句,宾语从句,表语从句,同位语从句,定语从句,状语从句,练习:改正下面句子,使之成为正确的一句话,Faulty:Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,one-thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries.,1.Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,andone-thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries.2.Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass;one-thirdofthemarefromnearbycountries.3.Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass,one-thirdofwhomarefromnearbycountries.,Itwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefield.,1.Itwasraininghard；theycouldnotworkinthefield.2.Itwasraininghard,sotheycouldnotworkinthefield.3.Itwasrainingsohardthattheycouldnotworkinthefield.4.Theycouldnotworkinthefieldbecauseitwasraininghard.,写作中复合句常见的错误,1、只有从句，没有主句,Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,sohecouldkeepcalminthestorm.,2、以逗号连接两个简单句,Theoldmanthoughtofhisson,tearscamedownfromhisface.,Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,itismadeofglass.,3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然,ThereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwhoaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.,OverfiftystudentsinthisschoolaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,Kateisanewstudent.Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.Shespeaksadialect.Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.,Kate,anewstudentfromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.,用一句话表达,基础写作评分标准要点齐全、要点组合合理；语句连贯、读起来流畅；语言得体、有复杂结构体现(长短句结合，错落有致)；（基本）没有语法和拼写错误；书写好。,【写作内容】分析过程：1、审题；2、信息分组（不遗漏内容要点）；3、简译关键语言结构；（考虑复杂结构的投放）4、翻译成文。,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoollearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,第三步：合并句子,方法1：ThatchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametimewillaffecttheirChinesestudy,becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,第三步：合并句子,IfchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime,thiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy,方法2：,becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-writtencharacters网络语言：weblanguage,要求：1、用两句话表达表格内容2、两句话要有连贯性,步骤1：信息分组2：分解成最基本的句子单位3：简译关键结构4：整合信息（翻译成文）,第一句（两个信息点）：1、学生作文中出现很多错别字2、（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。,Therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositions.,Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.,合并句子：,Theyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.,1.Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters,第二句:1.每天有很多作业做2.没有记住生字。,Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday.,2.Withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,3.Becausetheyhavesomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,合并句子：,Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,连接两句话（连贯性）：Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.Moreover,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,【例1】介绍学校假设你是李华，你的笔友Jane准备暑假来你校参观，想请你介绍一下学校情况。下面是你校的基本信息，请根据以下内容给Jane回一封信，并表示欢迎她来参观。学校名称:广东第三中学地理位置:离大海约15公里的一个小镇上学校历史:80多年历史的老学校师生人数:老师200多人，学生3000多人，高中学段校园环境:占地近15万平方米，学校很美，有花草，大树，三座教学大楼，6座宿舍楼学习课程:中文、数学、科学、英语、计算机、体育、美术等写作要求：(1)必须包括以上全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经写好）；(2)只能使用5个句子。,DearJane,Iamverygladtotellyousomethingaboutourschool,GuangdongNo.3MiddleSchool._Bestwishestoyou!Yourssincerely,LiHua审题：信息组织:时态:特别注意:,文体记叙文，用第三人称,位置、历史；师生人数，校园面积；校园环境；学习课程；邀请,一般现在时,1.邀请的内容虽不在基本信息内出现，但不能忽略。2.高中学段：可以和人数一起结合起来说3000多高中生,Location:,1.liein2.belocatedin3.besituatedin.besurroundedby.ononesideof.ontheotherside.ontheleft(right)7.20kilometresawayfrom8.sth.standsnextto,DearJane,Iamverygladtotellyousomethingaboutourschool,GuangdongNo.3Middleschool.Itasmalltownabout15kilometresawayfromtheseaandithasahistoryofover80years.Ourschool,anareaofnearly150thousandsquaremeters,hasmorethan200teachersand3，000seniorstudents.Therearethreeteachingbuildingsandsixdormitorybuildings,manyflowersandtalltreesallaround,soitsverybeautiful.InourschoolwelearnChinese,mat