增强书面表达效果的技巧公开.ppt

Tips on how to enhance the effectiveness of your writing,授课者：魏书峰,Learning objectives:,After this lesson, you are expected to master the following writing skills to achieve the necessary effectiveness of your writing. 1. Using some advanced words. 2. Using some advanced structures. 3. Using Some proper connective words,Criteria and requirements for NMET .,覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。,第五档（很好）（2125分）：,高考考纲对书面表达的要求,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的策略,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out / proved to be a failure.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,一、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A good idea occurred to me.,A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free of charge for the students there.,A good idea flashed into my mind.,Owing to/Due to,We all regard him as great man.,A good idea came to me in a flash.,6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 7. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,On hearing that he had died, she went pale with sorrow.,巧用习语-增加文采,8.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 9.You can find my house easily. 10.Many houses are being built.,Our school consists of twentysix classrooms.,Youll have no trouble finding my house.,Many houses are under construction.,洋味十足-才是好文章,11. I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. 12. I was very eager to go home. 13. She shouted loudly , “Ive succeeded!”,I dont want to share a hotel room with a stranger.,I couldnt wait to go home. I hunger for going home. I long for going home. I am dying to go home.,She shouted at the top of her voice, “Ive made it!”,1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用as倒装句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虚拟语气）,On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,二、怎样使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have won the competition but for your help.,6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 8.I wont believe what he says. （使用让步状语从句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,三、怎样使用恰当的连接词,一.补充句子,根据中文意思，将下列英文句子补充完整。 1.你给了我许多帮助，也给了我许多鼓舞。总之，没有你我不能成功。 You gave me much help and encouragement. _ _ _, I couldnt have succeeded without you.,In a word,三、怎样使用恰当的连接词,2.总的说来，你的回答不太令人满意。 _ _ _, your answer is not so satisfying. 3.一般说来物理比数学难学得多。 , physics is much more difficult than mathematics.,All in all,Generally speaking,4.令我满意的是，他数学考试得了满分。 _ _ _, he got full marks in the mathematics exam. 5.令我惊恐的是， 我看见他从树上摔了下来。 _ _ _, I saw him fall down from the tree. 6.这辆自行车真的很漂亮，然而我没钱买。 This bike is really very beautiful. , I have no money to buy it.,To my satisfaction,To my horror,Nevertheless,7.他首先去了法国，然后又去了美国。 First, he went to France; _ he went to America. 8.令我高兴的是， 我终于说服她改变了主意。 _ _ _ . I finally persuaded her to change her mind.,then,To my joy,9.一开始他反对我的计划， 但最后他支持我的计划了。 At first he was against my plan, but _ _ _ he was for it. 10.你必须购买一些生活必需品。 你必须了解一些关于这个国家的信息。总之， 你必须为这次旅行做好准备。 You should buy some living necessities. You should learn something about this country. _ _ _, you must get everything ready for this journey.,In the end,In a word,二. 行文逻辑训练,阅读短文，选择适当的过渡性词汇填空。,first, whats worse/more, besides/in addition, now, in my opinion, As far as Im concerned, in my view, from the point of my view.,_1_ many middle school students are fat and there are reasons for it. Some eat too much met and too many snacks. Some sit too long but seldom exercise. Getting fat has quite a few disadvantages. _2_, being fat makes it difficult for one to walk or move as others.,Now,First,_3_ , to be fat usually means to be weak, and it is easy for a fat person to suffer from many kinds of diseases. At the same time. A fat person gets tired easily, which decreases his study efficiency. _4_, to be fat is not a good thing for us middle students. We should try to eat less meat but more vegetables. _ we should try our best to take part in all kinds of sports. If so, we are sure to lose weight and stay healthy.,Whats more,In my opinion,Besides,三. 篇章结构训练,给下面的书面表达的主题句排序： 你班同学参加了学生双语报组织的一场头论。讨论的主题是：城市内是否可以饲养宠物。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给该报社写一篇文章，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点或建议。用5个句子完成文章。,A. Some students are against the idea of keeping pets. B.Some students think its a good idea to keep pets. C.I think we can keep pets at home but we must