写作提升(一)记叙文.ppt

写作提升(一)记叙文,记叙文为高考书面表达重点考查体裁之一，记叙文以记人、叙事、描写景物为主要内容，通常用第一人称和第三人称，其时态也常用过去时态。叙述时应明确目的，突出重点, 注意事情的完整性与顺序性。,2012济宁模拟 你今年暑假到一家肯德基(KFC)麦当劳(McDonalds)快餐店做保洁员 (cleaner)工作。你每天工作七个小时，为期3周。这项工作辛苦且枯燥，你感到非常疲劳，几乎半途而废。每天你都要起早贪黑地工作。在新学期开始之前，你终于完成了这项工作，并由此认识到了劳动的意义。你认为这是一次成功的体验。 注意：1. 必须使用第一人称；2. 词数150左右。,【审题谋篇】 1. 本篇为记叙文，为常考体裁，目的为通过在快餐店打工的经历说明劳动的意义。 2. 人称：第一人称 3. 时态：打工经历一般过去时体会感想一般现在时 4. 写作要点： 说明打工的缘由。 阐述打工经历与感受。 体会打工的收获，即劳动的意义。,【常用模板】 . 格式模板 开头：During the summer holiday, I thought . . . 正文：The job was . . . and I had to . . . every day. 结尾：I understand . . . , and its really. . . . 句式模板 1. 陈述计划、打算： want/intend/prefer to do sth. Rather than do/Instead of doing. . . , . . . prefer to do. . . 2. 体现工作艰辛： find the job hard/boring/endless Its so tiring that. . .,【尝试运用】 1. 我想我应该做一些有意义的事情，而不是呆在家里无所事事。 I thought I should do something meaningful. I didnt want to stay at home with nothing to do. (合并为一个句子) I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home with nothing to do.,2. 这份工作辛苦、枯燥，这使我很疲惫，几乎中途放弃。 一般表达： I felt very tired and almost gave it up halfway, because the job was hard and boring. 高级表达： The job was hard and boring, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. 3. 我明白了劳动的意义，认为这是一次成功的经历。(翻译) I understand what labour means, and I think it is really a successful experience.,【佳文点睛】 During the summer holiday this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home with nothing to do, _ I got a job at a KFC/McDonalds fast food restaurant _ worked there as a cleaner. I worked seven hours a day for three weeks. The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. _, I stuck to it with determination.,so,and,After all,Every day I went to work early in the morning _ got home late in the evening. _, I finished the job before the new term began. _, I understand what labour means, and I think it is really a successful experience.,and,Finally,Now,王太太决定带儿子去北京旅游，儿子听到后很是高兴，可是当他们准备出发时，突然发现一个问题，聪明的儿子想出一个主意请根据这六幅图，用英语概述这一经过。 注意： 1. 文章要包括六幅图中所有要点。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 词数150左右。,【参考范文】 Mrs. Wang decided to make a trip to Beijing. When she told her son about her decision, he was so pleased that he jumped up and down. Therefore, they began to pack their luggage full of joy. However, when the day of the trip came, the son became worried, for nobody would take care of his flower. It would die if it was not watered. How to settle this problem? He was lost in thought. Suddenly a good idea occurred to him. “Mum, ” he said to his mother, “We can use a piece of cloth to take care of the flower. ” He showed his mother,what he meant by putting one end of the cloth into the basin full of water, and the other end into the flowerpot. Her mother was very sati