中考英语知识点复习-书面表达.doc

嘉兴英语教学网 收集整理 欢迎使用知识点九：书面表达一、中考作文都有提示性词汇，或中文提示、或词组短语、或英文提示。我们在进行写作时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词。将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题二、语言通顺，表达准确、避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。、多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。三、不会表达，另辟蹊径中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采来打分。造句越简单准确越好。复合句很好，但造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话： “错误面前人人平等，文采好不多给分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。以下给出09年各地中考话题作文以供参考练习。话题1.健康随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。注意：1.词数80100左右。2.要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。参考词汇：build up ones body strength强健身体reduce diseases减少疾病构思方法1.认真阅读、理解和思考题目中给出的所有信息点。信息点是围绕着提示从文字中扣出来的。2.这个题目的信息点应该是：a.阳光体育；b.政府重视中学生身体；c.提出的标语；d.参加了各种体育锻炼；e.有利于强身健体；f.增强了学习效果；g.校园生活丰富了。写作方法 1.安排以上信息点在文中的逻辑关系。2.用所掌握的词汇、词组、固定句型将所有信息点表现在文章中。(The Sunny Sports, pay attention to the health of the students, raise the slogan, take part in the exercise, build up ones body strength, reduce diseases, and make study effective, school life, colorful)3.文章最后加入个人评价(观点)。范文1As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid more attention to the health of the students and raised the EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY slogan. So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sports in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball and so on. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more active .Above all our study has all been improved.Lets take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases. 范文2Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.Though we live a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY has been raised by the government.At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look! The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it. The school life has become colorful and we are energetic. As a result we study harder and better.The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Lets keep on doing it.例2健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；3.饮食要健康；4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；2.80100词左右；3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。构思方法1.找到信息点。2.这个题目的信息点应该是：a.作为儿(女)担忧父(母)的身体状况；b.上班最好步行；c.每周至少一次到体育场馆从事体育锻炼(球类运动、游泳等)；d.健康的饮食；e.早睡不熬夜。1.首先要谈到对父(母的身体状况担忧。2.然后引出希望父(母)怎么做。3.作为小辈向父母提出建议和要求时，要注意语气，不可以命令。4.注意信的写作格式。范文1Dear Dad (Mum),Youre so busy every day that you dont pay much attention to your health. Im worried about your health all the time. Id like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isnt far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? Youd better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going swimming is also a nice choice, too. Whats more, its necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you can be healthier!Your loving son (daughter)Tom (Mary)范文2Dear Dad (Mum),Youre so busy every day that you dont pay much attention to your health. I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far. What about walking there because it can make you much stronger? Id like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.Im looking forward to receiving your letter.Your loving son (daughter)Tom (Mary)话题2 自行车自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人, 这使得而骑车既可以.,又可以那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢?为什么?Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. It is easy to go to school or to go to work by bike, for waiting a bus always wastes us some time and always makes us worried. Now more and more people become rich enough to buy cars and it makes air dirty. Riding bicycles is good for us. It can help people keep healthy and save energy. I prefer riding a bike because it is cheaper and it can also help keep air from polluting话题3吸烟有害 It has been proved that smokers have made up half of the population in China. And the smokers are becoming younger and younger, even including some middle school students. Nowadays more and more people have realized smoking can do harm to peoples health. However, some people still enjoy smoking. Why? Because some of them think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others think that smoking can refresh them. In fact, smoking is a bad habit. It can cause a lot of diseases. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires. Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves, but also bad for non-smokers. Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them.It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking. Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students. As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings. More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. But they are never bored with it. Some people think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others think that smoking can refresh them. Smoking causes many illnesses. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires. In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking. Please stop smoking at once.话题4 留守儿童如今，在我们身边，父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童，事构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童，要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些？为了解决留守儿童的问题，请你向当地政府提建议提示：1.缺乏父母的关爱，性格孤僻，学习压力大、自卑。 2.缺乏安全保障（家庭照管不力，容易犯错误甚至犯罪）。建议：1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室，老师应该把爱播撒到每一个留守儿童的心田。 2.政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校。 3.社会各界开展与留守儿童一帮一结对子的活动。 4.父母尽可能回到孩子身边，给孩子生活上和学习上的帮助和关爱。Dear Mayor:(市长)Im a middle school student. Im writing to tell you something around us. Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the countryside, you know, they have many problems. They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because theyre short of their families care.How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays; you can organize hand-in-hand activity to call on more people to help them. You can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says:” If everyone gives their love, the world will be better. Its very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.Best wishes to you! Sincerely, Li Hue话题5 和谐社会Harmonious Society假设你是李晓平，是黄冈中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。1人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心；2人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助；3人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护；4你的态度：内容由考生自己拟定。注意：1词数80左右；2倡议书的开头、结尾以及提示句已为你写好，不计入词数；3内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。Build a Harmonious SocietyDear fellow students, our government is going to build a harmonious society. I think it is everyones duty to work hard to achieve this goal. As high school students, what should we do? First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities. Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Most important of all, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life. Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Dear fellow students, lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute! Li Xiaoping From Huanggang High 话题6 环保根据所给中文提示语，以“Saving the Earth为题写一篇80字左右的段文。注意语句扩展，意思连惯。段文开头已给出。中文提示语： 1. 任何保护环境已成为世界最大难题之一。 2. 垃圾污染环境、损害健康，不要到处扔垃圾。 3. 废水流到江里、湖里和田地里，污染农作物，杀死大量的鱼。 4. 保持环境干净和整洁。我们只有一个地球，应该保护她，使我们的家园更加美丽。所给词语：pollute , harm, throw, rubbish, pour, try ones best Saving the Earth How to protect the environment becomes.How to protect the environment becomes one of the biggest problems in the world. We can find the rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms peoples health. So we should not throw rubbish onto the ground. Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers, the lakes and the fields. It can pollute plants, sometimes it can kill lots of fish.We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We have only one earth. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢？请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词；1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it 2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines 3. save forests, useful ,stop cutting down 4.recycle useful rubbish, save resourcesAlthough the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.Save water. Water is the source of life. No water, no life. So its very important for us to do so. Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.Save electricity. It is crucial. We cant imagine what the life will be like without it. Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Dont forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on. We can save resources in this way.话题7旅游我们的家乡有着悠久的历史和秀丽的风光。假设你是一名导游，你正在接待一个来自英国的旅游团，请写一篇短文简要介绍我市的风景名胜，不少于60词。参考词汇：long history, beautiful views, tour guide, relaxing , educational, friendlyGood morning, everyone! Nice to meet you ! Im your tour guide today, Welcome to my hometown -Huanggang.Huanggang lies in the middle of Hubei Province; it has a very long history and many beautiful views. For example, Chibi Park and Ehuang Bridge are the most beautiful and relaxing among them. And the air is very clean and fresh. Hongan is very historical and educational. Huangmei is famous for the Huangmei Opera -one of the greatest local operas in China.Huanggang is also a good place for shopping and having delicious food . So far, a lot of new shopping malls and plazas have been built. You can buy what you like there ,If you want to try traditional Huanggang fodd,you can go to Night Snack Street, The food there is both delicious and cheap.There are still many other interesting and exciting things waiting for you to enjoy yourselves! Lets go for them!话题8 学校学习提示：在学习和生活中，你遇到过高兴和难过伤心的事，请用英语描述这样的经历要求：1：词数不少于60个，开头已给出可选用下列词汇：experience 经历经验 unhappiness 不快乐 confidence 自信心Hights And Lows In My LifeWe all have experienced highs and lows in our lives. I will never forget the experience when I began to learn English. I like English but I couldntt get the right way in learning. The more I wanted to remember, the harder I found it was. I was in a low spirit. I almost gave it up.Luckily, my English teacher encouraged me and helped me find a good way. By and by, I realized English was not such a terrible thing. I became brave enough to open my mouth to speak English. How excited I was! My confidence came back to me. Believe it or not, I won the first prize in Spoken English Competition in our school. It was the first time I experienced the highs in my life!话题9语言学习As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time.Its good to study in groups and help each other.We should do more reading in our free time, If we have any problems, wed better ask others for help.As a student, working hard is important, but dont forget to play sports and keep healthy.I hope all of these will be helpful to us.How to be a good learner? As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. Its good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time, If we have any problems, wed better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but dont forget to do sports and keep healthy.I hope all of these will be helpful to us.你校英文报欲征集有关学习经验的小短文.请以How to be a good learner为题,写一篇英语短文.短文应包含以下要点:1,概述:学法的重要性.2,提高学习效率的方法:有计划,善思考,勤总结(sum up);会用工具书,善用机会和资源(resources);劳逸结合.3,成功的秘诀(key):勤奋加方法.Possible Version: How to be a good learnerlearning methods is very important to every student. Usually a good learner gets twice the result with half the efforts. A poor learner also wishes to improve himself but doesnt know how.To be a good learner, one should have a proper study plan and be good at thinking and solving problems with the help of reference books, for example, a dictionary. One also has to sum up what has been learned, seize every chance to learn and make use of all kinds of learning resources. Besides, one is supposed to be good both at work and rest.Remember that diligence and good methods are the key to success. E-mail （电子邮件）Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,Im a Chinese boy. My name is Li Hong. Im very happy to know that Iall stay in your house for the English Summer Camp. Id like to say something about myself so that you can know me well. Im fifteen years old. I have a happy family with three people. Im studying in No. 1 Middle School. We learn eight subjects. Im interested in all of them. I like reading and playing the piano. I like English very much, but my English is not good enough. I think you can help me with my English. I hope to meet you soon.Best Wishes,Li Hong自我推荐Dear Chairman,I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am well. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the street. On the bus, I always give my seat to women with babies. Sometimes, I pick up rubbish in the park.If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others.Ill be glad if Im received, I am waiting for your answer.Yours, Wang LinThe Changes in My Hometown （家乡变化）In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.Im sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.英语学习Everybody has different ideas about learning English, but I think learning English should become our habit. I love English and I have been studying English for four years. I have two foreign pen pals. We write to each other in English. They often tell me much interesting news about their countries. I enjoy telling the stories to my friends at school. I think English gives me lots of fun. And the more I learn English, the more confident I am. In my school, I am the monitor of English. Im other students god example. Im often praised by me teacher. English helps me succeed in studying.English has been a part of my life.环保Water is very important to humans. It is used in homes, in farming and so on. We know that much water has