托福独立写作中间段的展开方法

智课网 TOEFL备考资料托福独立写作中间段的展开方法摘要： 写好的托福写作的开头我们就开始写中间段，那么中间段我们该如何写的精彩呢，今天小编就教你托福独立写作中间段的展开方法，想学么?想学的赶紧来看看吧。很多考生在写了开头后，中间段不知道如何展开，除了死板的罗列例子外就不知道该写什么了，从而导致论点和例子之间没有过渡，连接牵强甚至字数不过关。那么 托福 独立写作中间段应该怎么展开呢?所谓的因果链扩展就是讲道理，将中间段的主题句(topic sentence)进行进一步的解释，将隐含的逻辑关系解释清楚。写作过程中始终记好一个单词“why“, 去解释为什么这个主题句成立。先拿生活中的例子来讲好了，有的同学迟到了，老师问其原因，他提出“ 天下雨了” 作为自己的原因进行解释。听者似乎是明白了迟到的原因。但是仔细一想，为什么大家同处于一个天气环境，其他同学都没有迟到就他一个人迟到了呢。也就是说这个同学在进行原因解释的过程中还没有将其中隐含的因果关系解释清楚，还没有向听者解释好“why“ 这个单词。如果把欠缺的逻辑关系理清，就可以写成这样“因为天下雨了，路很滑，公交车开的很慢，公路很堵，我乘坐的68路车在最堵的干将路上停滞不动了，所以我迟到了。”放到真实的 托福写作 过程中，因果链扩展是怎么得到运用的呢?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus itsbudgets more on young childrens education rather than on universities. 有的同学也许脑子里马上想到一个理由，对儿童教育进行投资是最有效果的。论点完全正确，但是怎么将它说的有理有据呢?始终贯彻“why“ 这个单词，为什么对他们进行投资最有效果呢?因为孩子年龄小，处在关键时期- 这个阶段知识吸收比较快-教授的知识越好对他们将来的发展越有利-而这样的教学投资就是最具回报的。转化为英文就写成：Children aged three to five years old are quicklearners in the new knowledge. Once imparted these new information, childrenwill fast respond to them, which will be memorized in a short time and whichwill not be easily forgotten in the later years. The more advanced knowledgechildren learn, the better they will grow. That is, early education is the mosteffective one.中间段扩展示范：Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? Technology has made our children lesscreative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.The benefits brought about by the expansionof software industry are enormous. In the past, children could only playchess, cards or other similar games with their friends. Now they can challenge other players viathe Internet, professional or amateur, familiar or strange. Professional skills as well as the abilityof critical and independent thinking are cultivated in the process. Games are not always the culprit of wastingchildrens time and they have their unique functions. Some on-line games, such as Counter Strike,by stimulating real life conditions, enable players to exercise various tacticsin dealing with difficulties. In addition, under the help of AdobePhotoshop, children can easily create images with impact, forming stunning HDRimages,removing noise, adding grain or creating vignettes with state-of-the-artphotography tools, to name just few. These advanced softwares, to a greatextent, enhance childrens creative ability.句子位置句子功能主题句(topic sentence) ：软件方面的发展促进孩子创新能力的培养对比论证，过去与现在孩子在游戏中得收益因果链扩展，进行进一步的解释说明，孩子从游戏中培养了独立思考以及创新能力举例说明，CS以及PS培养了学生哪方面的能力段落小结Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement? Television advertisement directed towardyoung children (aged 2 to 5) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer.By watching these flowery advertisements,children will forge unnecessary purchasing desire. Advertisements always give an exaggeratedaccount of products, with its fabulous visual effects, catchy promotion slogansand overwhelming celebrity endorsement. Who can resist Dextro Energy, whenyoung children see their beloved carton figure Popeye gives up spinach for it? Who can resist M&M, when youngchildren see colourful chocolate beans dance rhythmically in the screen? Who can resist Sour Marbels, whenyoung children see giant beasts are choked by the sour candy? Who can resist Pringles chips, whenyoung childrens ears are echoed with crisp sound? Limited by their age, knowledge andexperience, young children will easily fall victims to these advertisements,leading directly to their s